Vode bal Ruusalore

A\N: I wrote this in about four minutes early one morning, about Atin's early life. I thought of making it last through Order 66, then decided against it. Please be nice if you comment, as this is my first attempt at RC poetry, and one of my first at general poems.

The awesome cover art, "Republic Commando Atin Laseema" is from deviantart. The person who created it's username is FoxbatMit.

Disclaimer: Characters, etc. are the property of LucasBooks and LucasArts (now Walt Disney affiliates). I make no money on this and wrote it purely for my own enjoyment, and hopefully others' enjoyment as well. Mando'a, the secondary language, was created by Karen Traviss. I hope neither mind that I borrowed it.

Mando'a terms:

Ner-my; mine

vode-brothers; friends

Jetiise- Jedi; Republic

shab (in context)- heck

osik-crap

Ruus'alor- sergeant, training or otherwise

Mando'ade- Mandalorians

verde- soldiers; warriors

beskar'gam- Mandalorian armor; literally iron skin

ori'haat (as an oath or a promise)- It's extremely true; I swear it

Kaminiise-Kaminoans

...

Four parts of a whole,

ner heart; ner soul

ner vode; ner pod

Geonosis,

what a nightmare

Vode blood spilled

on lighter sand

Jetiise,

Incompetent

what the shab are they doing?

We aren't white jobs

To be thrown away

At somebody's whim.

Cool down

Udesii time as the Ruus'alore call it

Osik,

I miss ner vode.

Ruus'alor Vau,

I was beaten; scratched

scarred for life

Physically and emotionally.

I would have died

if two others hadn't stepped in.

Skirata; Gilamar nice men,

for Mando'ade; verde

Skirata, short, a brawler

Vau never liked him

Gold beskar'gam, a three sided knife;

his weapons of choice

If Skirata doesn't kill him,

I make this solemn vow, I will

Ori'haat that,

Here and now.

Gilamar and two clones,

vode unknown

help me up;

dust me off.

I can't remember a time I saw

a mote of dust

Float

Through the air

Kaminiise,

Obsessive,

Arrogant

I wouldn't be surprised

If they terminate my life;

In fact,

I'd welcome it.