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~~~~~~SUBTLE CHAOS~~~~~~
"Ron," called Harry Potter as he moved from carriage to carriage, "Ron, Ron Weasly.."
Harry surveyed the crowd of students before him, most were Huffapuffs but he spotted Luna Lovegood chatting to Michel Corner ...
But he wasn't looking for them....He was looking for Ron.
Harry felt annoyed, He hadn't seen Ron all year, sure there had been a few letters, here and there.But it wasn't the same as seeing each other. Ron wasn't in the carriage that he and Harry usually met in so Harry had been forced to go around whole damn train looking for him.
"Excuse me,"
Harry looked down to see a short girl with a loud voice in front of him "Move!" she instructed. Listlessly Harry moved. What was he doing again? Oh, right he was looking for Ron. With one last look at the crowd behind him, Harry moved into the next carriage.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Harry leaned against a wall, he was tired. He had just spent half an hour trudging from carriage to carriage with absolutely no luck. Harry sighed maybe if he just- Wait! What was that? Was that a glint of red hair over there? Harry quickly moved to get a better look. It was! Harry could have recognized that Weasley back anywhere. It was Ron, god had he grown but there he was sitting next to his sister, chatting to his twin and- Hang on a minute, Ron didn't have a twin...so that must mean..
"Fred? George!"
"Harry! Good to see ya!" Fred slapped Harry on the back.
"Yeah how are you mate? Sit down.' George joined in.
"Hi Harry." smiled Ginny.
Harry wasn't expecting this, them acting as if..as if nothing had happened last year. "Err.What you are doing here?" he asked timidly.
Both of the twin's faces instantly darkened.
"We don't want to talk about it." growled Fred.
"Well I do!" snarled George. "If it wasn't for that stupid, ridiculous, twisted-"
"Stop bad-mouthing mum!" Ginny Weasley interrupted. "Personally I thought she was right, making you come back-"
"Nobody asked you!" snapped George.
Ginny looked at Harry. "Harry," she said. "What do you think wasn't it smart that mum-"
"Go away, Ginny!" said Fred "Go play with those weird friends of yours!"
"I'm in fifth-"
"GET LOST!"
"Fine."
Harry watched Ginny sulk further down the carriage. "Is Ron-"
"Where was I?" asked George "Oh yeah, that damn mother of ours made us come back."
"Gave us sh*t about how we need to get a good education-" added Fred
"And by wizarding law she can still make us go to school" finished George.
"Oh I see" muttered Harry "Have you seen-"
"But, you see, Harry; two can play at that game. George and I vowed that we would purposely fail our newts if mum made us come back."
"And then she vowed that she would destroy our business if we did so..."
"So after show of screaming we reached an agreement." said Fred "We come back and study this year and mum makes no more squeak s about our careers"
"That's great, Fred," said Harry. "Do you know where-"
"What she doesn't know is Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes is still running!" grinned George
."Where's Ron?" said Harry.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Ron, as it happened, was a carriage down from the weasely twins. In deep conversation with two boys that Harry had never seen before. "Ron!" he called.
Ron tore himself away from his conversation.
"Harry! Mate, come here!" Ron waved his arm.
Harry trotted over, expecting some sort of an apology or explanation to Ron wasn't in their usual carriage.
"Harry , I'd like you meet some friends of mine, "said Ron, " This here is Edwardo," a thin dark-haired boy stood up and shook Harry's hand, Harry thought nothing of it but, Edwardo really clasped his hand for a second to long.
"And this here is Richard." A younger looking kid with brown curls grinned up at Harry in acknowledgement.
"Edwardo's from Beauxbaton and Ritchie's from Durmstrang"
"Viktor's school." said Harry instantly.
Ron's face soured, slightly. "Yeah, even knew the basted himself, apparently."
"Harry suppressed a smile, Ron had once idolized Viktor Krum, the famous Bulgarian quidditch player, but ever since meeting him and realizing that he was dating Hermione, Ron's taste for Viktor had shrunk.
"His vas not very nice" said Richard
"Say, Harry you haven't seen Hermione anywhere, have you?"
Harry frowned "Hermione sent me an owl; it said that she wouldn't be catching the Hogwarts Express this year."
"Oh." said Ron flatly. "Why didn't she send me anything?"
Harry couldn't answer.
"Probably to busy with Vicky." Ron spat. "Hmmm.Krum iz a good quee-dee-eech player, no?" Said Edwardo, doing his best to change the subject.
"No, no," "Lynch is much better" sulked Ron..
The rest of the train trip was spent making polite quidditch conversation with Edwardo and Richard.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
WELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL?
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~~~~~~SUBTLE CHAOS~~~~~~
"Ron," called Harry Potter as he moved from carriage to carriage, "Ron, Ron Weasly.."
Harry surveyed the crowd of students before him, most were Huffapuffs but he spotted Luna Lovegood chatting to Michel Corner ...
But he wasn't looking for them....He was looking for Ron.
Harry felt annoyed, He hadn't seen Ron all year, sure there had been a few letters, here and there.But it wasn't the same as seeing each other. Ron wasn't in the carriage that he and Harry usually met in so Harry had been forced to go around whole damn train looking for him.
"Excuse me,"
Harry looked down to see a short girl with a loud voice in front of him "Move!" she instructed. Listlessly Harry moved. What was he doing again? Oh, right he was looking for Ron. With one last look at the crowd behind him, Harry moved into the next carriage.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Harry leaned against a wall, he was tired. He had just spent half an hour trudging from carriage to carriage with absolutely no luck. Harry sighed maybe if he just- Wait! What was that? Was that a glint of red hair over there? Harry quickly moved to get a better look. It was! Harry could have recognized that Weasley back anywhere. It was Ron, god had he grown but there he was sitting next to his sister, chatting to his twin and- Hang on a minute, Ron didn't have a twin...so that must mean..
"Fred? George!"
"Harry! Good to see ya!" Fred slapped Harry on the back.
"Yeah how are you mate? Sit down.' George joined in.
"Hi Harry." smiled Ginny.
Harry wasn't expecting this, them acting as if..as if nothing had happened last year. "Err.What you are doing here?" he asked timidly.
Both of the twin's faces instantly darkened.
"We don't want to talk about it." growled Fred.
"Well I do!" snarled George. "If it wasn't for that stupid, ridiculous, twisted-"
"Stop bad-mouthing mum!" Ginny Weasley interrupted. "Personally I thought she was right, making you come back-"
"Nobody asked you!" snapped George.
Ginny looked at Harry. "Harry," she said. "What do you think wasn't it smart that mum-"
"Go away, Ginny!" said Fred "Go play with those weird friends of yours!"
"I'm in fifth-"
"GET LOST!"
"Fine."
Harry watched Ginny sulk further down the carriage. "Is Ron-"
"Where was I?" asked George "Oh yeah, that damn mother of ours made us come back."
"Gave us sh*t about how we need to get a good education-" added Fred
"And by wizarding law she can still make us go to school" finished George.
"Oh I see" muttered Harry "Have you seen-"
"But, you see, Harry; two can play at that game. George and I vowed that we would purposely fail our newts if mum made us come back."
"And then she vowed that she would destroy our business if we did so..."
"So after show of screaming we reached an agreement." said Fred "We come back and study this year and mum makes no more squeak s about our careers"
"That's great, Fred," said Harry. "Do you know where-"
"What she doesn't know is Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes is still running!" grinned George
."Where's Ron?" said Harry.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Ron, as it happened, was a carriage down from the weasely twins. In deep conversation with two boys that Harry had never seen before. "Ron!" he called.
Ron tore himself away from his conversation.
"Harry! Mate, come here!" Ron waved his arm.
Harry trotted over, expecting some sort of an apology or explanation to Ron wasn't in their usual carriage.
"Harry , I'd like you meet some friends of mine, "said Ron, " This here is Edwardo," a thin dark-haired boy stood up and shook Harry's hand, Harry thought nothing of it but, Edwardo really clasped his hand for a second to long.
"And this here is Richard." A younger looking kid with brown curls grinned up at Harry in acknowledgement.
"Edwardo's from Beauxbaton and Ritchie's from Durmstrang"
"Viktor's school." said Harry instantly.
Ron's face soured, slightly. "Yeah, even knew the basted himself, apparently."
"Harry suppressed a smile, Ron had once idolized Viktor Krum, the famous Bulgarian quidditch player, but ever since meeting him and realizing that he was dating Hermione, Ron's taste for Viktor had shrunk.
"His vas not very nice" said Richard
"Say, Harry you haven't seen Hermione anywhere, have you?"
Harry frowned "Hermione sent me an owl; it said that she wouldn't be catching the Hogwarts Express this year."
"Oh." said Ron flatly. "Why didn't she send me anything?"
Harry couldn't answer.
"Probably to busy with Vicky." Ron spat. "Hmmm.Krum iz a good quee-dee-eech player, no?" Said Edwardo, doing his best to change the subject.
"No, no," "Lynch is much better" sulked Ron..
The rest of the train trip was spent making polite quidditch conversation with Edwardo and Richard.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
WELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL?
What did you think? Did you like it? Do you want me to continue? TELL ME i.e. review REVIEW TIME!
): ^ F
Luv, Aqua_Diva!!!! P.S do like my little 'Fanged Devil' smiley?!!