I really just want to see how this is done so please give me reviews even it's bad. Well anyways her is the story that might possibly be horrible.
Here's some info on her:
Name: Lenox Higgins
Age: 14
Appearance: dyed orangey brown hair that goes past her shoulders; sea blue eyes with a hint of green; always wearing bright orange converse, skinny jeans, and t shirts. She always has her hair up in a ponytail and wears a cap.
Personality: fun, sweet at moments, weird, crazy, party person sometimes, tomboy, quiet but once you know her she isn't, and she is very spastic and easy to scary.
Likes: being outside, music, swimming, climbing trees
Dislikes: shopping, dresses, girly things, spoiled brats with no manners, being scared
She is Marcus's kid and she is here to visit but really her mother just kicked her out and so now she is with Marcus her father. She goes with him to the funeral and the lake house.
Story:
-Lenox-
I was getting out of bed and saw a girl leave the house.
"So who was on the phone?" I asked
"Well my old coach died so we have to go to his funeral. Dress nice wear like a dress or something." He said walking to the bathroom. I went back to my room and went to my dresser and pulled out my nice black shirt with my jeans with a huge hole in both of the legs where it's at my knees and wore nice black slip-ons then pulled my hair up but left out my hat. I went back out to the living room and sat down with my phone and plugged in my headphones and listened to music till it was time to go.
"Come on let's go." Dad said
I got up and put my stuff back into my room and got my stuff in my bag and headed out the door with my stuff. And we got into the car and drove off to the funeral.
We finally got to the funeral and so there were adults with kids one family had a nanny with them.
"No cell phones." I guess their father said to the boy that's I guess my age.
"No cell phones then I'm leaving." Dad said coming over to the people.
"Who's ready to get there funeral on." Dad said doing some weird dance.
"Sorry death makes me weird. So Hollywood I thought you were going to start working out." Dad said to the man that said no phones.
"What's that suppose to mean?" He asked
"Uh. You're fat." Dad said.
"Who is that?" This other guy asked
"Oh well that is my lovely daughter Lenox." Dad said
I waved shyly to them. Some man and his family pulled up in a car and they started to talk to him but i just stood there then all of the grown ups started to walk towards the church then some guy came out but I walked towards some of the kids.
"Hey. I'm Lenox." I said to all of them but the guy that looks around my age just stared at me so I turn towards the girls.
"Hi I'm Charlotte." some girl said to me but I waved.
"My name is Becky." This little girl about 6 years old said
"Andre." Another boy the same age or one year older said
"Well I'm Greg and this is my brother Keithie." The boy finally got out of his trance.
I started to catch up with my dad and we went into the church so I sat next to them. Then people in front of us said something about money so dad leans up next to them and says, "It's your money it's my money lets put it on the table and spilt it equal. Sorry death makes me weird."
He came back down and then the guy in front of us goes up and says some words about the coach. A few minutes has past then the little man went up and sang 'Ava Maria'.
I whispered "Make the buzzer noise after he is done."
He nodded in laughter and I started to giggle.
He finally finished and then all you heard was my dad and everyone started to crack up.
"Grow up will you." Then man said angry.
We all went outside to eat. My dad called me over so I came up to him and just stood there waiting till they were done.
"Ok well this is my daughter Lenox." He said
"Hi. I'm Lenny. Greg, Keithie, and Becky's father." Lenny said
"I'm Kurt but you can call me Mckenzie. I'm Charlotte and Andre's dad."
"Ok. Well nice meeting all of you and that guy over there is creeping me out so I will see you later." I sat leaving.
I sat down at a table and then some of the other kids joined. I just sat there and it was really silent.
"So what do you like to do for fun?" Keithie asked
"Well I like to do a lot of things." I said getting up.
"Lenox come on we gotta go." Dad said I headed to my dad
"Thank you for saving me from those two." I whispered while pointing to Keithie and Greg. We got back into the car and drove to a lake house. Everyone got out of there cars and started to walk up to the porch.
A/N: please review. I would help a whole lot and I would love you so so so so so much. Well till next time I guess farewell. :)