Hey you guys I'm just making a preview of my new story. Just review it if you like it and if you don't still review it and give me some tips. Let it began…
She was a abused child; the Flame Princess. She had a hard life. Who can blame her. But what comes ahead is not what she expected.
Flame's POV:
"Okay Flame tell me about your childhood."
"Well I was abused sometimes…"
"How so?"
"It's hard to explain."
"Well do you remember it or were you told by your mother?"
"My mother doesn't know that I remember."
"So can you didcribe what you remember?"
"I…"
"Come on. Your mother paid for this theropy."
"I know I know."
"If your having trouble we can use this machine…"
"No… I heard storys about that."
"It will help you."
"What does it do?"
"What have you heard?"
"I heard that it hurts you."
"Well just a little. What it really does is it goes in your head and in your brain and looks in your memories and pulls out the one you want and displays it on a screen."
"Well okay but if it hurts me I will burn your face off."
"Flame theres no need for that. Besides even if you tried I have a Flame ring from your mother."
"I… I wont do it."
"Well I'm afraid you don't have a choice."
"What?" what does he mean by I don't have a choice? I think I do. I mean im royalty and he's just a simple peasant.
"I'm sorry princess but I have to do this." Then he pulls out a dart and shoots it at my neck. And I black out.
What happens next? Still in thought but this is the little chunk that I'm letting you chew on to see if you like it? I need at least one person who likes this and I will keep going. Till' then PEACE OUT!