PopStar — Card Captor Sakura

This is my first time to write a fanfic, so pls. be nice..
if you noticed some grammatical errors and wrong spellings, let me know and I'll try to fix it. I'm not promising, coz' I'm not very good in English let alone story tell

Disclaimer
I do not own CCS, CLAMP does. The songs here are also not mine.

Chapter 1: Sakura's Savior

You always take time to criticize me
It's seems like everyday
I make mistakes
I just can't get it right
It's like I'm the one you love to hate
But not today

"So shut up, shut up, shut up" came Sakura Kinomoto's singing voice. Her best friend, Tomoyo Daidoju, was filming her with a video camera.

Sakura and Tomoyo were watching the latest music video of Syaoran, the oh-so-popular singer Sakura fangirls about. Touya, Sakura's brother, was cooking dinner when he shouted through the doorway between the living room and the kitchen, "So shut up, kaijou! You're making me deaf!"

Sakura glared at Touya and shouted back, "I. Am. Not. A. Monster!"

"Whatever," her brother replied. He then turned to Tomoyo and said, "Tell her to keep it low." He returned to his cooking after.

"Grr... that Touya!" Sakura then shifted to another topic. "So, what do you want to do?" she asked Tomoyo.

"Oh! I want to film you with the new dress I made!" Tomoyo's eyes glittered and shone like stars.

"Oeee... I think I'll pass..." she replied with a sweatdrop on her head. "How about going to the mall?"

"Sure!"

"Okay then." Sakura talked her brother, "Touya, Tomoyo and I are going to the mall. Do you need something?"

"Nope, just be home by 7:00. It's 5:00, so you have 2 hours more to go, alright?"

"OK! Bye!"

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"We still have 45 minutes. Do you want to get some ice cream?" Tomoyo asked Sakura. They have been window shopping.

Sakura didn't answer her.

"Sakura? What are you looking at...?" Tomoyo asked. Her friend was staring at something posted at the wall of the music store—a poster about Syaoran's concert tomorrow.

"O-Oh, nothing... I just hope that I could go to Syaoran's concert..." Sakura remembered that Syaoran will have a concert tomorrow evening within their town. When I inquired at the ticket booth, all of the tickets were already sold out. I wish I had a ticket..."

"Do you want me to ask my mom if she could get tickets for us?" Tomoyo asked her friend, smiling. Tomoyo's mom had a lot of connections.

"Really?! Please do! Thank you very much, Tomoyo!" Sakura hugged her best friend. "Come on, let's get ice cream!"

Tomoyo cheerfully commented, "You're cuter when you smile."

Sakura and Tomoyo started for home after eating ice cream. They were turning to a corner when Sakura heard Tomoyo shout.

"SAKURA! WATCH OUT!!" she screamed.

From the corner of Sakura's eyes, she saw a car going straight towards her. She was stopped on her tracks. Her feet felt numb; she can't move.

Then out of nowhere, someone grabbed by the hand to move her out of the way. She then felt hugged into someone's arms.

This is the edited version of my friend. Do read it, thanks

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