Hello all and thanks for reading my first fanfiction. I have been reading a lot (sadly) and for some time wanted to try it myself. So this will be a Naruto fanfic and he will have a powerful Dojustu that will surpass the Sharingan and the Byakugan. This fic will also have a lot of Sasuke bashing with some Sakura and slight Kakashi bashing. For the romance, I'm not sure if I should choose 1 girl or a harem, I'll let ya guys vote.

1 girl, who: 0

Harem, who: 0

summary: Growing up without anyone to show him any type of affection, Naruto chooses to train himself and hide his true abilities. When he meets the Kyuubi things will change and the power Naruto will gain will change the ninja world. The only question is, for the better or for the worse?

Chapter 1: Fox and Student

Sitting in the middle of a shabby dark room was a boy no younger than 9. The apartment that he currently lived in was a dump. It had cracked walls with peeling paint, cracked or shattered windows, a ceiling with many holes and cracks, but the worst part was the writing...no the ingravings in the walls. Looking like in was carved with knives, the words 'DEMON', 'FOX BRAT', and other foul messages littered the walls. The boy had spikey hair that could bebe compared to the sun. His eyes were an icey blue that held endless amounts of pain and sadness, but could still pierce the coldest heart. On his cheeks were whiskers like scars that reminded him of what he is. He sat crying softly to himself, feeling the 'phantom aches' of the many scars that decorated his body. The worse being the words 'DEMON FOX' carved into his back. That boy's name is Naruto Uzumaki.

"Why can't they see it was not me who attacked the village?" Asked the boy to no one in particular. You see, Naruto isn't an idiot, even though he chooses to pose as one. He found out long ago that he was the container of the Kyuubi No Kitsune, or otherwise known as the 9 Tailed Fox. "It's because they are all fools who don't see with they're eyes but with they're hate." Said a voice that was soft like silk but could still cut diamonds. Naruto looked around frantically, scared that someone has come to hurt him again. "w...who's there...p..please don't hurt me, I...I didn't do anything!" came the blondes shakey voice. The owner of the unknown voice frowned in anger then look on with sadness. How could adults do this to someone, and to a child not less!' The unknown person took a breath to calm themselves before speaking. "I am the almighty Kyuubi, the reason why the villagers hate you is because of me."

Naruto was shocked that he was able to hear the Kyuubi. He thought for a moment then tried something the shocked him more. 'Are you in my head?' Though the blonde. "We are able to communicate through a telipathic link between us if that's what you mean

The blonde boy only turned his head in confusion. 'Why are you talking to me...a...are you gonna steal my body?!?' Kyuubi only looked on in sadness as what the boy thought was completely wrong. What "SHE" wanted to do was help the boy and make him strong and show the village they made a big mistake. "No I don't want to steal your body! I actually want to make a deal with you. How does that sound?" Naruto thought for a moment and though 'what deal, why should I trust you out of all people?' The Kyuubi felt a shudder at the tone of the young boy. He sounded so emotionless that is was hard to tell if he actually was just a child. "How about I train you to become stronger than any ninja and in turn you let me access some of your senses and let me out every once in awhile? Naruto instantly thought it was a trick until he felt something strange, something he never felt before. He felt that he could trust her and she would not betray him like so many others. 'And if I agree, how would you do those things?' ask the now intrigued blonde. "For starters your gonna have to enter your own minds cape and we'll have to do some specific tasks." Minutes passed in silence as Naruto was debating with himself. He would become stronger than any ninja. He could protect himself and the few people he held precious to his heard. Images of Iruka, Hokage jiji, and the workers at the ramen shop he loved popped into his head. Finally done with his debate he answered. 'Ok, I'll take your deal, but I want to know what we are gonna do first.' The stern in his voice implied that he was taking the deal. "We will first work on you physical training and on your taijutsu. Then we will work with your kunai and shurikan training. After that we will find you a weapon that suits you. We will work on ninjutsu. genjutsu, and other studies later because you are too young and small for that kind of training."

Going though the information given to him, he thought of how the village always hated him and how he was only accepted by a short group of people. 'I'll take your offer Kyuubi, On one condition.' The Kyuubi was shocked that he accepted after accusing her of trickery a few moments ago but smiled. "And what is that?" She asked while raising an eye brow, though he couldn't see it. 'I don't want any cheating or short cuts. whatever you have in mind for me I want the full package of what you have to offer.' Kyuubi was even more shocked. She expected that blonde wanted to learn as quickly as possible to get the power. With enough training she could possibly make him a Jounin by the time he leaves the academy. "And why would you want to go through a hell like that, my training methods are brutal and exhausting." The blonde smile and Kyuubi felt it. It was a smile of true determination. 'I want the strength I gain to be pure and not rushed. I want to learn every little detail and leave out errors of any kind. I want to protect my precious people with everything I have, and lastly, the strongest never got any where cheating' Smirking at the answer, Kyuubi said "Very well said kit, you should be a writer. anyway I will agree to train in everything of my knowledge, but be warned...it's gonna hurt." The whiskered boy shuddered at the thought but smiled because he knew he could trust the Kyuubi. "Get some rest now, you'll have a long day tomorrow." Naruto nodded and took his dirty old blanket and covered himself to soon be engulfed in a dreamless sleep.

Naruto woke to the sun's rays shining on him through the cracked window. Slowly getting up he let out a yawn and did some stretches to wake himself more. 'Well today's the first day of my training' Though the young tadpole. "Indeed it is, prepare to face the difficulties of becoming a Shinobi" Said the oversized fox in his mind. 'Do iI need to get anything before we start?' Asked Naruto with a bit of curiosity. No, but before we begin I need you to come to your mindscape." Being a child Naruto only looked confused but closed his eyes and concentrated on the voice of the Kyuubi. Reopening his eyes, he saw that he was no longer in his room. He was in a dark sewer with water that went pass his ankles. There were many halls that led to Kami knows where. Naruto went down a hall and felt a pull, like a tugging sensation so he followed it. It let him down many halls until he found a huge dungeon like room. There infringement of the boy, stood a gigantic cage with a paper on it. The paper had a kanji for seal on it. He walked up to the gate and gasped when he saw blood red eyes with black slits staring down at him. The eyes were cold and held hate that made the boy shudder in fear. "So now we formally meat." Said a boon no voice. Naruto flinched at the amount of venom the voice had. The fox narrowed her eyes and said "Maybe I should use my human form." Naruto nodded hesitantly and Kyuubui began to shrink down. Soon there stood upfront of Naruto was a beautiful girl of 16. She had beautiful red spikey hair that went down to her shoulders. Her eyes were a light red but still had the slits. She wore a tight black shirt with a black vest with red stripes and many pockets to hold scrolls and a dagger. Her pants were black Anbu with red lines down the sides. Her sandals were the standard black. The whiskered boy blushed at her figure. Her breasts were C cup, not too big not too small. Her butt was nice and stuck out well. Kyuubi smirked as she saw the boys blush. "Y...you are the...the KyiubKyuubi?" Asked Naruto. Kyuubi raised can eye brow. "Wells yes, why do you ask?" Naruto continued to stare at her. "You don't look scary like the stories. You actually look very pretty." It was the Kyuubi's turn to blush. This boy who barely met her called her pretty, after seeing her fox form too. "...W...well since you accept my training, I am reqrequired to change your genetics so that you can become the most powerful Shinobi." Naruto was confused but nodded. "Do what ever you have too Kyuubi. I trust you." Kyuubi smiled. She felt touched because the boy has strict trust issues since everyone tries to scew him over in some way. "Ok Naruto, another thing. I will give you a Dojustu to help you with your journey." Too say he was surprised would be an understatement. Naruto knew what a Dojustu was and was very excited that he was gonna get one. "Which Dojustu am I gonna be getting?" Kyuubi thought for a moment, giving it an actual thought. After a moment she said "I will be giving you your very own Dojustu. It will be stronger than the ones that the village currently has." Kyuubi smirked, a Dojustu that will be stronger than the Sharingan and the Byakugan. It will be a challenge but a fun one. "What will it be able to do?" Asked a shocked Naruto. A Dojustu that was so strong it could protect him even from ninjas was a prayer answered. "Your dojustu will allow you to adapt to any fighting situation. If you watch your opponents with your eyes activated you will be able to copy their fighting style and justus, even blood line ones." Again the blonde was shocked. Through enough training he could have the power stronger than a Kage. "You will still have to train in their techniques" Naruto nodded, he knew there would be a catch. No one can can that amount of power with out struggle. "Ok Kyuubi I am easy for what ever you need to do." She nodded and walked up to him. She place her hand on his head and a seal appeared. Naruto then shut his eyes as pain filled them. He grunted and shielded his eyes as Kyuubi pulled back. Soon the seal was gone after minuminutes of feeling like his eyes are on fire, the feeling stopped. "Slowly open your eyes. You will have to train very hard in using your eyes. They come with much more than expected." Nodding Naruto soon realized that his senses have also been raised. He could clarify different smells, different sounds, and see every thing sharper. He felt the vibrations on the water from the water dripping. "Everything seems to be more clear. Like I am one with everything." Kulyuubi chuckled this isn't even half your power. Your Dojustu isn't even activated. Flexing his arms and legs he also realized that they felt stronger.

Kyuubi then yawned and flipped her hair. "Okie kit, it's getting late candy you need to get rest. You can examine your new body skills tomorrow." Naruto nodded and closed his eyes. Soon again he was back in the real world sitting in his room. He grabbed his ragged blank etc and covered himself, letting sleep claim him.

Alright that is chapter one. I hope you guys like it. Remember vote on either Naruto getting 1 girl or a harem. Tell me who and why the girls should be with him. Also, yes I will make some original characters and justus. please review and give your opinion on what I should add. THANKS!!!

-Punk.Magician