Okay, yes she is an OC and is a Marysue. Don't like don't read it okay? Any help will be very good and please don't flame I'll only use them for my fireplace. All the character except Erin and her mom aren't mine.
'Erin, eat something fast or you'll miss the buss on your first day". A fast blur came down the stairs." Morning mom" I grabbed a banana muffin and the comics and went to sit on the front step of my house. I'm starting Sky High today and no I'm not a freshman I just went somewhere else last year.
Sky High is a super hero (and sidekicks too) School, as you probably tell I have super speed.
You knew Flash from the Justice League his my father, I was living with him until last year but then my mom got remarried and I see him every weekend. My dad lives in New York now, my parents have been divorced for four years. My mom an inactive hero and she got mad at my dad fighting all the time, so now my dads single and lots of woman like him (he looks okay for a dad to a 15 year old). I snap out of my thinking, the bus is here. I stuff my muffin in to my mouth and stuffed the comics into my bag." Call you later mom, have a good day," I yelled to my mom." Have a good day honey," My mom yelled back." Bye, Erin" my step dad said as he walked to his car with a cup of coffee. I walked to the bus, the door opened for me." So you're the new student, nice to meet you I'm Gloria and I'll be your driver for the year" she closed the door and I went to sit in the back of the junior buss.
There was an angry boy with red high lights in his hair; I wasn't going to ask him through. So I just took out the comics and read them, I was engrossed into my reading I only stopped when I felt a bump. I looked out and we where going threw a forest path then the buss went up the cliff until we got to the top. Then we went off the cliff everyone screamed but not a scared scream so I screamed too. Then wings came out and we flew the rest of the rest of the way to high school. We got out and walked to the school, it looked really cool. There were some boys bullying the freshman but a preppy looking girl stopped them and I went to go find Ms.Power's office. I don't have to do power placement because I'm older. I opened the door and…
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