Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or the Akatsuki.
All those stories about Akatsuki in house's… or OC's getting transported to the Akatsuki's world… so I decided that these kids (kids being aged from 15-28) Run a restaurant (and they live there) and the Akatsuki show up there. But there's gonna be so much more. Like the FBI finding out about these illegal aliens who are crazy and like to kill people and do illegal things which makes them wanted. That's the plot basically. Hehe. So yes. Here we go.
This is a rewrite of the original cause I didn't like how the beginning was going. READ AND REVIEW! EVEN IF IT IS JUST TO TELL ME THAT MY WRITING SUCKS! REVIEW ANYWAY!
Chapter 1: Don't Open The Creepy Basement Door
Annie's P.O.V
Yello. Yello is my version of hello. Cause you know, they sound the same. So Yello Readers!
My name is Annie Tasha Smith. I am 5'5 with a small waist, but just enough bust to give me enough curves to catch the guys eyes. My eyes are the color milk chocolate, and I have gorgeous long brown hair that cascades down my back, and frames my high cheekbones, and small nose. I have been alive for 25 years and I am a Walking Angel. And as is such, I am alone in this lonely life, because none can appreciate my beauty. A lot of girls refer to me as the "Walking Tramp" but that is over the top. Just because I appreciate the world's sexy men, does not make me a tramp.
I live with my two friends, Ariel Sky Dakota, and Sophie Bo Madison. We live together in a loft in an apartment building. And we all work at the same place; a restaurant called Scrappy's Restaurant. It's not any super fancy thing-It's more of like a sandwich shop. Sophie is a waitress and me and Ariel are the only two cooks. Because we are the only two cooks, we have to get there early in the day to take inventory of the food, and start making the food… all those moronic things.
Now here is the part where you see my dilemma.
You see last night I had a date with this AMAZING guy. I met him at the restaurant, and he asked to take me out to dinner. I of course accepted, because he was…well STUNNINGLY handsome! He was, oh I don't know, 30? Well, we took it back to his house, and everything was going fine. (Oh get your mind out of the gutter. We were sitting on his couch drinking champagne. Or don't… I like perverts to. Unless you are a girl. EW.) Until, I saw IT. IT was a picture. Of his two kids. One was 14, and the other was 10. And they looked EXACTLY like him. I asked him what it was, and he told me that they were his kids that he had with his x-wife. And then he tried to kiss me. But all I could see… was…was his CHILDREN in his face! It was like kissing a freaking chubby child! So I got up left, and went home. Then I stayed up ALL night telling Sophie how disturbing it was. So we didn't get to bed till 3 Am.
I would have woken up Ariel to, but when I did she tried to kick me. And I didn't feel like getting injured, so I decided I would gripe and bitch to her tomorrow while we were in the kitchen cooking.
Anyway, now it is four A.M and Ariel is trying to get me out of bed so I can take a quick shower, then we can go open up shop. And THAT is my dilemma. Because I NEED my beauty sleep.
"Annie! Get up!" Ariel yelled while yanking at my sheets. I groaned in response, tightening my death grip on my sheets. Did you know, our boss Scrappy doesn't get up till SIX A.M! Because that's when the shop opens! Me and Ariel go in and start everything up, and he rolls out of bed at SIXA.M from where he sleeps which is the top floor of the restaurant, walks out, and changes the sign from 'Closed' to 'Open'. It's completely unfair!
"5 more minutes…" I mumbled to her. This was a normal thing for us. Ariel comes in here and tries to wake me up. I grumble and eventually wake up and doll myself up for the day while Ariel is hollering at me to hurry up, and then at the last minute she drags me out the door and we speed to the Restaurant just barely making it in time to start cooking.
"NO! I already gave you 5 more minutes! Wake up!" She yelled, finally yanking my sheets off of me. I shrieked and curled into the fetal position, trying to keep warm.
"Ariel… don't be too hard on Annie…." I heard a mumble from the door. It was Sophie my savor! (She doesn't have to go into work till SEVEN! DO YOU COMPREHENDE THAT? SEVEN!)
"Why? Was the date last night that bad?" Ariel asked Sophie.
"Something like that… he has two kids… with his x-wife…" she murmured. To show my extreme distress and woefulness, I moaned loudly. Ariel was silent for a minute, and then she threw my sheets back over me. I gave a thankful groan, and cuddled back under my sheets.
"Both of you come in at 7. I'll open up the shop by myself today." Ariel ordered. Then I heard her and Sophie leave the room.
VICTORY WAS MINE. I wasn't that upset about the whole married guy thing, because I didn't have my heart set on him or anything. I was more upset about losing sleep because of it. But it's okay cause I conned Ariel! The joys of being me!
Now go my beautiful readers, and meet my other lunatic friends! And let me get my beauty sleep so I can go seduce more men!
Grayson's P.O.V
Readers. My name is Grayson Baxter. I am 15 and am most of the time described as melancholy and moody. I work and live at a restaurant called Scrappy's Restaurant, with my best friend Ariel Sky Dakota. I like it when things run on a schedule. I like having things planned, and I the thing that I hate more than ANYTHING else in this world, is the phrase 'Let's just wing it,' or 'We can just wing it.' This world has a certain order in it, and when you take that order away and 'Wing it' you just screw up the order. Which is why it greater upset me when JUST Ariel walked in at 5 A.M. today. When it SHOULD have been her and her noisy roommate Annie, at EXACTLY 5:05 because her friend is never ready till the last minute and they carpool here together on Ariel's trike.
"Where is Annie?" I asked as Ariel walked in and tossed her bag behind the counter.
"She had a date last night. Apparently it didn't go well, so she… had trouble sleeping or something?" I got up and followed her into the kitchen, as she began to wash her hands and cut up vegetables for omelets, a common order for the customers who come by in the morning, as our omelets were named best in all of Austin, TX.
"More likely she stayed up all night complaining to Sophie about how disastrous her love life is." I commented blankly. Ariel laughed slightly at that, while cracking eggs into a mixing bowl.
Ariel is 5'3, which makes her a good 3 inches shorter than me. She and I both grew up in the foster system, which is how we met. Before Ariel joined the foster system she lived with her uncle, who taught her a variety of martial arts. I, on the other hand, was left on the steps at the foster home, and I have no clue who my parents are.
I heard a loud thumping noise as someone came down the stairs. But I didn't know who it was. Because whoever it was, they were off schedule. None of these fools had any attention of staying on schedule today do they! However it was jumped off the bottom step and threw open the door that led from the bottom of the stairs to the kitchen.
"Do not fear you simpletons! Your master, Ceaser Earl Bailey is here!" Ceaser is the other waiter who lives and works here with me and Scrappy. He's 19, and right about the same height as me. He also has a slight case of narcissism.
"Why were we fearing?" Ariel asked not even bothering to look up from where she was making omelets on the stove.
"Because you are leaderless! And indecisive fools need leaders! They need someone to look up to! To inspire them! They need…" And then I zoned out. Who knows how long that idiot will keep blabbing for. So I will spare you the boring details and cut my P.O.V short. Goodbye.
I like this version much better than the first one. Sorry I didn't bring the Akatsuki in yet, but you all got introduced to the characters so. The next chapter will be longer, and (hopefully) the Akatsuki will be in this world by the end of it. It's 12:15 and I gotta go to bed. So bye! REVIEW! Or Ceaser will come bore you to death on how this world needs him and his dictatorship!
Panda-Chan is OUT! :D
