Okay those of you reading the original Payback, I was not satisfied with it and here is a rewrite.
Prolog
?'s POV
I looked at the photo frame that sat on the polished desk. Which happened to be the only piece of furniture in this room besides a leather couch. The frame held a picture that I was familiar with.
Isabella and Caleb were both staring back at the camera with different emotions in their eyes. Complete hate showed in Isabella's eyes, while Caleb's eyes held no emotion.
I chuckled to myself as I reached for the manila folder that laid at the other end at the desk. It wasn't a thick folder, neither was it thin. It was just big enough to tell the story that it needed too. The story of the Isabella Swan.
The girl I had taken in along with her brother. I had memorized all the facts by heart, but I still looked at the folder from time to time.
Wanting to see if I could find anything else to help me beat Isabella in this ongoing game we had. The game was a common game of skill and tactic.
I had also promised Isabella that if she won our game I would let her have her payback and freedom.
That of course would not come true because nobody had ever beat me at chess.
Do you like the re-write better than the original. If so I will continue and post Chapter 1 on the day I get more than ten answers in review or PM form. If I don't get a response by next Tuesday I'll discontinue the rewrite and delete the original.
-Jaime:)
p.s. Today I had an Orchestra concert. Yay!