Hey everyone!! This poem was for school……please review and tell me what you think!! I know it sux but I've never written a person poem before. ::sniff sniff:: this is my first one. Please review (be kind, like you would to a web footed friend)!!!



Legolas Greenleaf, Prince of Mirkwood,

Fair of face, ageless,

But bright eyes, like two stars,

Tell all who peer into them otherwise.

For his eyes reveal despairs and sorrows of the past,

As seen only by

Legolas Greenleaf, Prince of Mirkwood.



Elven archer, shot as deadly as night.

Lo! An arrow is let loose from the bow,

Whistling, piercing through the deadly silence,

Hitting its mark, an Uruk of the White Hand,

And tranquility is restored, because of

Legolas Greenleaf, Prince of Mirkwood.



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