This is my first fanfic so please review.
The Battle for the Universe A crossover by cmpuncle
Chapter 1: The discovery of a nightmare
Squall and Rinoa were sitting on the Serengetti plains having a romantic picnic. Squall was just about to pop the question to Rinoa. When all of a sudden the ground began to shake. They could sense that something evil was arising once again. They looked to the Northeast and their blood ran cold.
"Squall is that what I think it is," said Rinoa
Squall replied, "Yes Rinoa it is the Lunatic Pandora."
"Squall let's go see who is controlling it we can't let it reach Tear's Point."
Then Squall talks into a communicator on his wrist, "Ragnarok disembark and meet us on the Serengetti Plains."
As soon as the Ragnarok arrived they climbed aboard and headed for the Lunatic Pandora. When they arrived they discovered that the hole they blew in it was still there. So they landed the ship through the hole. They went up to the top floor and discovered it was being controlled by Ultemicia herself.
"I can't believe it how did you survive the final battle" said Squall and Rinoa together.
" If you really want to know, then I shall tell you. After going into the past and giving some of my powers to Sorceress Adel I returned to my own time and nearly died as I fainted but then I remembered the hate I still had towards you and I was newly recovered. Now I come seeking revenge for what you did to me."
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Well that is it for the first chapter after I get some reviews I will work on the second chapter.
The Battle for the Universe A crossover by cmpuncle
Chapter 1: The discovery of a nightmare
Squall and Rinoa were sitting on the Serengetti plains having a romantic picnic. Squall was just about to pop the question to Rinoa. When all of a sudden the ground began to shake. They could sense that something evil was arising once again. They looked to the Northeast and their blood ran cold.
"Squall is that what I think it is," said Rinoa
Squall replied, "Yes Rinoa it is the Lunatic Pandora."
"Squall let's go see who is controlling it we can't let it reach Tear's Point."
Then Squall talks into a communicator on his wrist, "Ragnarok disembark and meet us on the Serengetti Plains."
As soon as the Ragnarok arrived they climbed aboard and headed for the Lunatic Pandora. When they arrived they discovered that the hole they blew in it was still there. So they landed the ship through the hole. They went up to the top floor and discovered it was being controlled by Ultemicia herself.
"I can't believe it how did you survive the final battle" said Squall and Rinoa together.
" If you really want to know, then I shall tell you. After going into the past and giving some of my powers to Sorceress Adel I returned to my own time and nearly died as I fainted but then I remembered the hate I still had towards you and I was newly recovered. Now I come seeking revenge for what you did to me."
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Well that is it for the first chapter after I get some reviews I will work on the second chapter.