Hey everyone, well here's my first Dragon Ball Z story. R&R please, and if you think I could add something or if I could fix something, please let me know =) Now I'll let Goku take it over =D
Goku: YEAH! *laughs*
Vegeta: What! Why Kakerot! I THOUGHT I WAS YOUR FAVORITE!
Me: Hehe, aww! Poor Vegeta! GET ON WITH IT GOKU!
Goku: Haha! Shadow doesn't own any of us! Except the unnamed daughter of me =)
Vegeta: GET ON WITH THE STORY!
I was born and raised to fight—my father, Goku, made sure I knew how to fight and that I knew how to protect myself. I was one of the best, if not the best besides my father himself, but then the worst happened. My father took my little brother, Gohan, to meet Master Roshi, but while he was there my brother was taken by Raditz, my uncle. I secretly went with my father when he left to battle my uncle, but while there I was kidnapped by another Saiyan whom was unknown to the others. This Saiyan, Datsken, took me to a far off planet where I began to train with him and began a new life. I never truly forgot my past, even though at times it was a bit sketchy, but I honestly didn't regret not trying to escape. While living and training with Datsken, I unleashed power I never would have known I had! I was able to destroy planets with a flick of my wrist and had almost every being bowing before me, the only ones that would never bow, were the remaining Saiyans. Prince Vegeta and his goon where the other two surviving Saiyans and at one point Vegeta and I had a relationship, but soon got over each other (kind of) because of the fact that we were never together. Anyways, now it's been 10 years since I left Earth and now it's time to return. That's where Datsken and I were headed now, tucked away in our pods, plummeting towards the weakling field planet. We weren't going to destroy it just yet, no—we were going to visit my family for a while, see how they were doing. I heard my father killed Raditz, Vegeta, and Vegeta's goon (I always seem to forget his name)—so I was curious about how strong he had gotten. As we neared the Planet, I had a since of unease, like something was off—something big… I wonder what it was…
I scowled as Datsken and I landed, my shoulder-length black hair whipping in the wind. Beside me, Datsken stood a permanent scowl on his face. It kind of made him cuter than he already was. His raven black hair that went just a little under his ears whipped around in the wind, his bangs falling in front of his ember eyes which seemed to darken as he gazed down at a large crater in the ground. "This is where I first found you." He spoke, his voice barely above a whisper as his mind drifted back almost 10 years ago. I couldn't help but smile, you wouldn't expect to see someone like Datsken to look so far off and out of it. His muscles tensed and he immediately went back to being reserved but continued to speak. "We will find Kakerot and demand to know what happened to the Prince and Raditz." He never spoke of Vegeta's goon, I guess he wasn't even all that important. I nodded my agreement and we bolted into the sky and off towards my old home. I couldn't shake the feeling that I was in for a tough reunion—or the feeling of being watched. My gaze darted back and forth—nothing.. I wasn't imagining it—something was out there and I knew it… Something strong and familiar. I cleared my head finally and lead the way back to the small house where, hopefully, Goku and Chi-Chi still lived.
Sorry for the shortness but hey, it's just the prologue =) R&R please, I need to know what cha think. No flames though please. For everyone who flames, you guys aren't helping! Constructive critisism is what people need, not people bashing them!