Arrow: Okay, I decided to completely rewrite this story and I have done so! Tell me if you find any errors that I missed and if I use any Japanese terminology improperly. The basic plot is the same but I am changing many aspects of the story, so if it is too different or any of you feel I need to change anything please let me know. As usual constructive criticism is welcome but please no flaming. Review and let me know what you think.
Prologue
Aki no Kitsune stared at the former comrades of his that made up the Rookie Nine. At sixteen, all were reaching the end of their growth stages and their bodies were filling out nicely. In addition to the ninjas his age, Iruka, Kakashi, Kurenai, Asuma and Anko were in attendance.
Sasuke Uchiha stood tall and proud, though he was in shock and staring dumbfounded at Aki. Sakura Haruno, who had finally grown into her forehead, was blushing at the handsome teenager in front of her, as was Ino Yamanaka and Hinata Hyuuga. Neji Hyuuga and Shikamaru Nara stood not expressing any emotion, but the confident blond in front of them intimidated them. Kiba and Akumaru were standing in a submissive position, their shared instincts telling them that the man in front of the group was an alpha and should be respected immensely. Tenten and Lee stood in absolute silence, not sure what to make of the situation.
Anko stood stock-still, afraid to make any movement or gesture that would offend the obviously dangerous man in front of her, her friends and her charges. She turned to Kakashi only to find him staring in shock at Iruka, who had burst into tears. Kakashi spoke softly.
"Iruka, what is it? What's wrong?" The chunin stepped forward, towards the unknown blond man.
"Naruto, is that you?" The blond looked at him, his eyes slightly sad.
"Once upon a memory I was. I am the Kitsune Prince, adopted son of the Kyuubi and heir to the demonic throne. My name is Aki no Kitsune."
"What happened to you?"
"That is a very long story."
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