Hi guys, my name is marc12267, and I'm open to any constructive criticism to improve this fan fiction.
The story begins with Trina Riffin going inside her car. Saturday is today is her last social promotion practice; students will have to wear their suits (dresses if they're girls) for the last promotion practice and the actual promotion. Trina's hair is dyed white and in the style of Elsa's. Her dress is similar to Elsa's and he is wearing high heels.
TRINA: This dress is gonna look beautiful for the promotion. Mina! Start up the car!
Mina, who followed Trina, goes inside her car and starts it up. Mina is dressed in white for the practice too. Later a mile away from school, Trina was just regularly driving her car until she saw another car facing her car. She panicked and tried to turn away from the car. It was too late. The car crashed into Trina's car. When it did, it became pitch black. Later, Trina painstakingly regains consciousness, only to find that she was brutally injured. Her dress was up in tears. Even her hair was messed up. Heavily. Now, she looked nowhere to Elsa. The 2 cars were destroyed.
TRINA (Injured): ...M..mina...
Mina ended up like her, but she is unconscious. Trina then looked right, only to see her right arm severed. Blood spread from the stump of her right arm and the severed arm. She then lost consciousness.