Fanfic
I sooooo don't own Golden Sun. If I did, then this fic would be part of it, and Felix and Piers would be in their room all day or in the bath all the time. And Isaac wouldn't have married Jenna, Jenna would have gone off and married Garet, while Isaac and Ivan would be together. And I don't really care for Sheba and Mia, though Mia is super pretty (And I would have preferred Isaac marrying Mia in the game, as a canon thing). Camelot Software Programming owns every single bit of the characters, if I am correct. I am just a sexy mofo that wants Eoleo and Amiti to go and do it already.
ANYWAYS… what am I forgetting…? Oh~! The warnings
Warning: This is a yaoi, of course; it involves Amiti and Eoleo, a tipping ship, and cute confessions… OH! And sex. Too bad it's a very lime-y fic. And no plot. And it might be a bit OOC, since I'm not perfect at capturing the ESSENCE of another person's characters.
Also, since idk what Amiti's age is, he's going to be 18+; use your imagination, or something.
The wind was cool, and crisp, the perfect weather for sailing. Amiti smiled and took in the feel. Karis and Himi sat down on barrels that were pushed up against the ship's cabins. They giggled and stole glances at Eoleo.
That pirate bastard… Always looking so 'cool', or whatever Karis said it was. He's so annoying, all boisterous and proud. Amiti thought. He avoided looking towards Eoleo, and delved into the air once more.
It wasn't that he was jealous that the girls felt attracted to him, it was the man's attitude. He was rash and rough, hulking and bulking, and he was a pirate! That's what bothered the water adept so much! He was a ruthless man, or so Amiti thought.
The man was always trying to act tougher around the prince, telling him he should develop some muscles.
Amiti would always scoff and be somewhere else. Matthew, always being the one to ask what was wrong with his friends, would try and persuade Amiti to tolerate him.
The truth was he didn't exactly hate Eoleo; it was just his sense of judgment that fueled his anger towards the man.
If Amiti didn't have his strong sense of judgment, he would say that the fire adept had the strongest aura of everyone on the ship, the most strength, and he was smarter than he led people to believe. He was also one sexy mofo with a ponytail—but that's something Amiti would never bring himself to ever say.
Speaking of the bane of Amiti's naïve conscious, Eoleo sauntered in, his voice bellowing with pride. He joined Matthew at the wheel and laughed haughtily, taking the wheel from the Earth adept's hands. Matthew laughed and bid him adieu.
Matthew caught Amiti's gaze and smiled. Amiti smiled back but turned his gaze at Eoleo. He looked strong and in command at the wheel. It made a nerve twitch in Amiti's chest, half of anger, half of… well, he didn't really know.
Eoleo began to whistle, tapping his foot to his tune, giving himself a beat. Amiti scowled and turned away. Giggles were heard from Himi and Karis again, which he snobbishly ignored.
Sveta, just coming out from the cabins, spotted the blue-haired prince and skipped over to him. "Good day, Amiti," She said, leaning against the wooden railing.
"Hello," Amiti said, not turning towards his demi-human friend.
"How is your day going along?"
"Splendid, before Eoleo came out with his prideful gait and is now in my view of the beautiful sea." He said, sighing.
"What is it about Eoleo that irks you so much?" Sveta asked.
"Well, it's not specifically him… or maybe it is," Amiti said. He began playing with his head band, trying to distract himself. "I guess it's just the way he speaks and… the fact that he's a 'Pirate Prince' of some sort."
"If you ask me, I say you admire him." The demi-human said. Amiti gaped at her, speechless and face beginning to burn with embarrassment. "I mean, the way you look at him isn't out of hatred in my eyes, and he's the only one here who seems to bother you."
"There is no way in the name of The Wise One that I could admire someone like him!" Amiti protested.
"Well, if I am so wrong, then why were you staring at him for half of this conversation, only stopping after I made my conjecture?" Sveta giggled. "Also… I'll have you know that Karis and Himi aren't just giggling because they are girls, but because they are watching your gazes towards Eoleo, which are very constant. Though, I think they're taking the 'admiring stares' as something much stronger, which I will never assume unless you tell me otherwise, and I doubt I'd still believe you. You may have insight, Amiti, but you have trouble seeing what you are feeling. And my Spirit Sense tells me otherwise of your feelings. I do think I heard "He is one sexy 'mofo' with a ponytail" just moments ago from your mind."
Amiti was simply speechless. Not only did Sveta lecture him, but she also read his mind (and not the pretty thoughts). The water adept stormed off, gripping his gauntlet (A/N: that armlet thing on his wrist) and looking down. He went down in the cabin to the dining area. He sat down at a table and put his head down.
Why did this have to be brought to light? Now my conscious is so jumbled up! Amiti screamed in his head. And I hope you're listening, Sveta, because you are a b—!
Amiti's thoughts were interrupted by the dining area's door swinging open. He jumped up and looked towards the door.
Ugh, great, just the person I want to see now. Amiti thought. Eoleo sauntered in and plopped down in the seat across from Amiti. He smiled haughtily and crossed his arms, laying his chin to rest on them.
It was a sort of strange sight to Amiti, but it wasn't all that unexpected. Eoleo was sometimes laid back.
"So, what's got the little prince's panties in a bunch?" he asked.
Amiti scowled and turned away. He really didn't need this right now.
"Okay, okay, that was a bit mean." Eoleo said, raising his head. "I'm sorry. Anyways, why are you down here? Everyone is up on deck."
"Tyrell's in his room sleeping." Amiti said. "Not everyone is on deck."
"Well, Tyrell is a kid, he needs sleep, I guess."
"…" Amiti stared at the man.
Eoleo whistled a few notes and looked away. He turned his gaze back at Amiti, who was still staring at him. "Okay, I'm confused, what's the matter, really?"
"Does it seem like there's something the matter?" Amiti asked, quirking an eyebrow. He really wanted Eoleo to leave. His stomach felt weird, and he wanted it to stop.
"I saw you talking to Sveta, and you just stormed off. I figured something was up, and told Matthew to take the wheel again." Eoleo said.
"Why are you concerned about me?" Amiti asked. Curiosity was getting the better of him, and he felt like his stomach was doing back flips. He was mentally cursing and telling his stupid organs to stop, getting nothing more than another strange overturning feeling in his gut.
"Well, anyone would wonder why some guy would walk away in the middle of a conversation with a cute girl like Sveta." Eoleo said. "Actually, no, I'm sorry; I'm kind of lying right now."
Amiti tilted his head. Eoleo admitted to lying? What the heck was happening? First, Eoleo comes in and notices that he's upset; he then wants to know why he's upset, and now he says this. Why the hell was Amiti's gut seriously annoying him?
Eoleo ran a big, muscled hand across his scalp, smoothing out his ponytail. "Anyways, just tell me why you're upset; you can tell me anything. I am the oldest here, so I might be able to help."
"Age makes no difference to wisdom." Amiti said. He crossed his arms and leaned back in his chair. "If you really want to know, my problem just so happens to be you."
"Me? What have I done to earn your anger?" Eoleo asked.
"For starters, you're very prideful, you are a ruthless pirate, you've probably killed more men than beasts, your presence is practically the whole bane of my existence, and—!"
"Now, hold it right there, Amiti," Eoleo said, glaring at the water adept intently. "I may be prideful, but that is a very common trait in most of us, but I have to say, you're more prideful than me. And another thing, I have killed many men just so I can save those around me; it's not my fault the evil in our world is mostly caused by humans. And my existence cannot possibly be the 'bane of yours', Amiti."
"And how can it not?" Amiti asked, scowling at the adept in front of him.
"For one thing, no one can be the bane of anyone's existence; too much hatred in those words. And secondly, I think you really like me; therefore, I couldn't irk you so much." Eoleo smirked.
Amiti's face grew warm, and he could swear he was blushing madly. Eoleo noticed the rosy tint in his 'friend's' cheeks and his smile grew smugger. "See, there we have it. You wouldn't be embarrassed by my words if they hadn't affected you."
"I-I am not affected by your words!" Amiti practically yelled, slamming his hands on the wooden table, standing up.
"Then why are you acting so flustered about this?"
"I am not flustered either!" Amiti stormed off, walking into the hall. Eoleo came out seconds later, following the water adept.
Eoleo was about to grab onto the adept's shoulder when the ship immediately careened to the left, slamming both of them against the wall.
Amiti yelped in surprise and instantly clung to the first thing he could reach out to. He gripped tightly around the object, hearing a hiss. Amiti opened his eyes, which somehow closed when he slammed against the wall, to find Eoleo in front of him, shielding him from a bureau that had slid down the long hallway of the ship towards them. He looked at his hands, which were gripping Eoleo's arm tightly, his nails digging into his flesh.
He released the older man's arm and gripped his own sleeve. "I'm sorry!" he instantly said.
"It's alright." Eoleo kicked the bureau away. Water began flowing past their feet, from the stairs. Karis jumped down the stairs, followed by Sveta and Himi. They looked over at the two opposite adepts.
"Where's Tyrell?" Karis asked.
"He's in his room, probably awake by now. What's happened?" Eoleo asked; his voice was as strong as ever.
"Matthew hit some tough rapids and we're in the middle of a storm! He's anchored us in the middle, where we won't get any ship damage, but we're stuck in this thing for awhile. Matthew is fine by himself, but he's worried that Tyrell may have flung from his bed during our slight crash." Himi tugged at Karis' sleeve and told her to hurry. "Go inside a room, we need to take cover. There might be some flooding."
"And stick together!" Himi called back to the two adepts. "You might get injured!"
Eoleo grabbed Amiti's forearm and dragged him into the first door adjacent to them. He slammed the door closed and released the water adept's arm. "I'm sorry; I must have hurt you just then."
"No, I'm fine, but I stabbed your arm with my nails. Let me treat it." Amiti said, touching Eoleo's large arm.
Eoleo chuckled and ruffled Amiti's hair. "You're so feminine. If you weren't, my arm wouldn't have nail marks."
"I am not feminine!" Amiti said, balling his hands into a fist.
"You really are, and you can't deny it." Eoleo said. "You have a slender body, your waist is like an hourglass shape, and your eyes are like a woman's: large and beautiful."
Amiti blushed madly at the last comment. He crossed his arms and looked away. "But I'm as much as a man as you or Matthew, or Tyrell! I'm more of a man than Rief!"
"You may be manlier than Rief, but compared to Matthew and Tyrell, you're a bit lacking in the muscle department. Look at you, you're so frail and princely, no muscles as far as the eye can see with you."
"Are we going to get into this whole 'You should work out, develop some guns for the ladies' thing again?" Amiti growled. He was beginning to grow irritated with the fire adept.
"No, no, I guess you're right." Eoleo smirked. "You don't need muscles for me."
The water adept fumed at that. "I don't need anything for you!"
"So you're saying you won't change for me?" Eoleo asked.
"I would never change for you! I'm staying the way I am!"
"Good." Eoleo smiled. "Because that's the way I like you."
Amiti blushed once more. He walked right into that one.
"Will you please stop… teasing me, Eoleo?" Amiti asked, his voice shaking. "I… I hate you!"
"You don't hate me." He said, walking towards the smaller adept.
"Yes I do! You tease me all the time, you make comments on how I look, and now you're saying that I… I like you!" Amiti said, stepping back. He wanted as far away as possible from Eoleo.
"I'm only saying what's true." Eoleo said. "You might not know it, but I catch you looking at me almost all the time. Your glances are full of something my mother always told me was 'love'; she used to tell me that I'll know who my mate was when I see the look in their eyes, that they would truly love me."
Amiti stepped back once more, only to meet his back with the wall. He was now cornered by the older man. He saw me staring at him?
"Not only that, but I also noticed that I'm the only one you bash. It may seem a tad elementary to some people, but your behavior is both childish and cute around me." Eoleo said. He closed Amiti in with both his toned arms on either side of the water adept's head. "You act so cute around me, and only around me, I've noticed. Himi told me a few days back that when I'm not around, you just stare off into space, and barely jump into any conversation. But with me around, you always pay attention to me, and when I am just a few feet away, you tend to stare at me. I've begun to notice the glances and stares; especially when I'm wheeling the boat. You must have some sort of captain fetish, huh?"
Amiti was boiling with both anger and embarrassment. He couldn't tell if Eoleo was turning him on or aggravating him. Amiti attempted to push the man away, but when he put his hands on Eoleo's chest, the fire adept caught his hands and brought them towards his face.
He kissed Amiti's wrist and tugged Amiti forward, pressing the younger man against his chest. Amiti tried to squirm away, but failed. Eoleo's strength over powered his own. He became submissive almost instantly. Instinctively.
The fire adept led Amiti to the bed and told him to sit. Eoleo knelt down on his knees, staring into Amiti's turquoise eyes.
Amiti gulped and stared back in nervous confusion. What was this feeling?
"Amiti, I want to know what you really feel about me." Eoleo said. He took Amiti's hand and kissed it. His stubble brushed against the water adept's smooth skin, causing Amiti to feel a tingling sensation throughout his arm.
"I… I don't know…" Amiti gripped his shirt at his stomach with his free hand. "I-I get this tingling feeling in my gut every time… every time you're around… You make me so mad, but I can't help but feel this strange sensation in me, no matter what. I don't know what I feel…"
Eoleo smiled and kissed the back of Amiti's hand again. "Thank you, my Prince. That is all I need to know to do this…" He lifted off of his knees slightly, brushing his rough lips on Amiti's soft, full ones.
Amiti didn't know whether to pull back, or push forward. He decided to go forward and encourage Eoleo to continue on.
The fire adept cupped Amiti's face with his large hands and pressed his lips against the soft water adept's. Amiti pushed forward, wanting more of the kiss.
Eoleo nibbled on Amiti's bottom lip, asking for entrance. He could feel the small man hesitate at first, but slightly open his mouth nonetheless. Eoleo smirked and slipped his tongue into Amiti's small mouth. He explored the small, wet cavern, and reveled in the adept's taste; he was sweet and somewhat salty. Amiti's tongue poked at his, confused at what to do. Eoleo played with the smaller adept's tongue and guided him through the kiss
The ship lurched, causing Amiti to fall on his back onto the bed, with Eoleo on top of him. They deepened the kiss and Eoleo began to grope at Amiti's body. The smaller of the two reached out and wrapped his thin arms around the older man's neck.
Eoleo wanted to feel Amiti's bare skin; he wanted to feel more of the water adept's touch… He wanted him so bad.
The older man broke their kiss so he could remove the water adept's headband. He kissed Amiti's forehead and went down to his neck, unraveling his tunic. He nipped and sucked at the most sensitive parts of his neck, earning light mewls from the younger man.
Amiti moaned and gripped Eoleo's shoulders, drowning in ecstasy that the fire adept was giving him. Soon, he disrobed completely, only left in his armlets and anklets, and Eoleo had lifted Amiti so he was on his lap, both legs on either side of him. Amiti wrapped his lithe arms around the older man's strong neck once again and mewled as he felt Eoleo's hard-on touch his inner thigh.
"Amiti…" Eoleo whispered into the smaller man's ear, sending chills down the younger man's spine. "God, I really want you…"
Amiti didn't know what to say. He had convinced himself that he hated this man, but he also couldn't help but love him. But he was too prideful to admit anything. He swallowed what pride he had left and leant down to kiss the fire adept.
"Eoleo… tell me something first." Amiti looked at the older man with lustful eyes and played with his scarlet hair. "Tell me what you feel for me."
Eoleo smirked and cupped Amiti's face. "I love you more than anything in this world…" the ship careened back, knocking them off the bed. Eoleo cradled the lithe man's frail body against him. They smashed their lips together again, ignoring the fact that they were on the floor.
Amiti had managed to remove Eoleo's shirt and slowly took off his circlet. Eoleo continued to kiss down Amiti's chest, stopping at his pert nipples to give them a smooth lick. Amiti practically squealed at that, his member growing harder with every touch received from the fire adept.
Amiti practically begged Eoleo to touch him, which the older man was all too happy to comply. He began to stroke the smaller man's member slowly. Amiti bucked his hips to meet Eoleo's strokes, wanting more of this sensation.
They managed to sit up again, Eoleo pushing Amiti against the bed. He pinned the pale hands above Amiti's head and sunk his head lower, brushing his chin against his navel. Amiti mewled again, desperate for more contact from Eoleo.
Eoleo released Amiti's small wrists and rested his hands on the younger adept's hips. He dropped his head and teased Amiti's throbbing member with his tongue.
"Do you want me to suck you?" Eoleo asked, licking the pre-cum off of Amiti.
"P-please…" Amiti pleaded. His head flew back as Eoleo's tongue swirled around him. The heat from his mouth was driving Amiti crazy. He gripped the older man's scarlet hair and bucked his hips unconsciously into Eoleo's mouth.
Eoleo bobbed up and down on the younger adept's shaft fast, trying not to gag. He took the member out of his mouth and kissed the tip, teasing Amiti. Eoleo pushed Amiti back, gesturing him to raise his hips. The water adept did as so, and bit his bottom lip, waiting to see what Eoleo was about to do.
The fire adept chuckled and brought three fingers to Amiti's mouth. "Suck." He commanded him.
Amiti took the fingers in his mouth, slathering them with his saliva. Eoleo slid his fingers out of Amiti's mouth after awhile. "God, you're a tease, aren't."
Amiti blushed and pursed his lips.
Eoleo chuckled again and captured Amiti's lips, distracting him from what was to come.
[Hot sweaty sex removed from fic due to much inappropriate content. Ha-ha I like limes…]
Matthew jumped down the stairs, rushing down the narrow hall. "Is everyone—?"
Himi and Karis sat on the floor, conversing with one another about funny events that occurred in the past. The two girls looked up at Matthew's confused face.
Himi burst into a giggling fit, and Karis sighed. "Well, when you told us to take cover inside of a room, we told Amiti and Eoleo the same thing. They took cover in this room—which just so happened to be mine and Sveta's—while Himi and I went off to Tyrell. By the way, he was okay. He was actually asleep through the whole crashing of the ship. He woke up as soon as we burst through the door."
"Uh… are Eoleo and Amiti still in there…?" Matthew asked.
Himi nodded, stifling her giggles.
"And… are they finally…?"
"PFFT YEAP!" Himi couldn't hold back. She held her stomach and continued to laugh. She slapped her cheeks lightly. "I-I'm sorry, anyway, anyway, Karis and I were just going to wait until they finally came out to tell them that we're really happy for them."
"Great, but we gotta get them out soon, dinner is going to be served in twenty minutes, and Sveta volunteered to cook." Matthew smiled. "I don't want their food to get too cold."
"Oh, let them have their privacy." Karis said. She waved Matthew away. "Besides, I want to get full details of this when Amiti comes out. Oh god, I'm going to tie him to a chair and force him to tell me! And it better be a long story."
"Pfft… long story~!" Himi giggled.
Matthew blushed and backed up. "Well… I'm going back on deck to have a… normal conversation with Rief…"
He rushed off, leaving the two adepts on the floor. Himi giggled even more. Karis slapped the back of her head and sighed.
They better not have used my bed… Karis thought.
I so hope they used Karis' bunk. Hilarious if they did! Himi thought.
Amiti rolled over, panting. Best. Sex. Ever… he thought, pushing his bangs back.
Eoleo put a tanned arm around the water adept's waist, bringing him closer. "God, I wish I met you sooner…"
Amiti set his face on his lover's broad chest. He smells like man and sex… "Same for me… I needed this sensation a long time ago… Being a prince for people in hiding isn't as easy as it sounds…"
"I guess we'll just have to make up for the years we never had with each other…" Eoleo said, tilting Amiti's chin up. He kissed him softly on his tender lips, his stubble brushing against his skin.
"By the way, how did you learn how to have intercourse with men?" Amiti asked.
Eoleo chuckled. "Let's… just say I used to talk to Isaac, and occasionally Ivan, about love. Turns out, Ivan had the hots for Matthew's old man—still does—and that very shy man knows a lot of dirty things."
Amiti blushed. "Dirty things…?"
"Yeap."
"Things, say, you would like to try…?" Amiti curled away, face burning with embarrassment.
Eoleo mirrored his lover's blush, and bear-hugged the lithe man. "Damn straight!"
A/N: PFFT TOOK SO MUCH EFFORT NOT TO WRITE A LEMON. But seriously now, I started working on this fic THE VERY SECOND Amiti began bashing Eoleo for being a pirate. I thought it was cute and Amiti struck me as "In-the-closet". All that ran through my head was "Damn. He's so far in the closet, he can see Narnia!"
Actually, I'm really pissed off by this fic right now.
Not because I think it sucks, no, I actually really like this! But it's because when I thought "… There's no AmitixEoleo fic… O: I gotta start writing one." But NOW, there are two. Actually, I started this fic about a week or more after the game came out and I was at the part where you have Eoleo about to join your party. But my loving, kind brother broke my laptop by throwing a comb to me, but it missed and struck my screen, making it die. When I was almost done with the fic. Now I was given my father's laptop to use, and I was able to finish it ;A;
BUT IT MAKES ME SAD BECAUSE IT'S NOT THE FIRST AxE FIC. NOW I'LL HAVE TO SETTLE FOR THE FIRST M RATED FIC OF AxE. UGH.
Anyway, I love you guys for reading this! Oh so much! And I'd love a review, even if it was to bash me and my horrid-ness! I don't care! I just love the thought of people actually reading my crap and wasting their time saying something about it. For me, it's a win-win situation ;D
