The unknown akatsuki chapter 1

New First chapter!!! Not the original!!!

AN: Do not own Naruto

"talking"

'thinking'

'tenants talking'

Flashback/Dreams

Yup there isn't going to any lemon, maybe in some other fic but, not this one. Well anyway sorry for the crappy original first chapter. So I am going to be doing some adjustments here and there.

Well here it goes

A short cloaked figure was lurking in the shadow of the alleyway. The figure looked impatient and was pacing back and forth waiting anxiously. In the country of rain it was surprising to see outsiders because of all the security they had.

"I risk my neck coming here and they don't even show!" The figure grumbled still pacing, "Stay cool! Stay calm! I can't act careless due to my anger."

Taller more masculine looking figures approached the smaller one.

"Is this her?" One figure asked another.

"Maybe, Lady drop the henge and show yourself."

The petite figure lifted her cloak and undid her henge.

"I'm here, happy now."

"Please refrain from that tone you filthy rogue."

"Please I do not want to fight at this moment JUST tell me what do you want." She said sternly, "I have helped you guys in the past but, what is so important that I must come to the rain country."

"Leader-sama requests that you shall take a place in the organization as a member because of your abilities and special chakra."

"I am very charmed by the offer but, I work alone always have always will."

"Leader-sama insists that you will join or you will be enforced."

"Well….OK I am kind of tired of traveling all over."

'No you aren't, you love traveling.'

'I know I do but, I don't feel like being forced it's too troublesome.'

"Follow us." The more leader like figure of the two, commanded"

They traveled upon entering to the main base. During the whole way the petite female always had her hand on her katana belt. She wasn't well paranoid she was more um, prepared. Trust was not a gift most criminals ever gave to anyone.

"This is where we leave. "The messenger said motioning towards his partner to leave.

'They are pretty strange for messengers.'

"Sayonara." She responded politely.

She entered through the dark corridor and its twist and turns until she came to her destination.

"Enter." A voice commanded.

The guy was no pushover so the petite entered the huge door that was in front of her.

She pulled the door open and was covered her eyes from some type of spotlight. The leader person could measure and inspect every inch of this rogue but, he could easily hide in the shadows of the vast room. This particular rogue was a petite blue-haired female with a slim yet muscular figure. She had a flowerlike accessory in her shoulder length hair. The girl looked like she didn't have any eyebrows (still not sure if she does) had a sleepy look to her eyes and had a stud on her chin. She was wearing baggy blue nin pants and had a smoky colored top that had a V cut down the shirt. If it wasn't for the tightly knitted nin fishnets anyone could see the perkiness and fullness of her breasts. She had a dark blue sleeveless overcoat that was buttoned just above her breasts so it gave her a more flat look. She had tough boots and a strange looking tattoo on her upper arm.

"Don't try to penetrate my mind unless you want to be killed on the spot." The leader warned.

"Very well then sir."

"I know that you have helped us in the past with the blueprints and workings of soul extractors but, now we want you to join."

"What may be the reasons why?"

"Your past." The leader answered coolly.

'You're past' those words echoed at the female's ears.

"My previous clan was filled with Shinigami wannbes, killing them wasn't at all difficult."

"You didn't kill your older sister."

"That is a personal reason."

"Could it have been because you had such a weak bloodline limit, and was always so sickly during your childhood?"

"The reason why I was sickly sir was because I had to live with talkative soul tenants and had non stop brain activity, wouldn't that give you at least some migraines Sir!"

"Don't get upset now, I just want to know if you would join and if you join we will start you off at menial tasks until further notice."

"Yes."

"Good! You shall receive the White Tiger Ring it will go on your middle finger on your right hand."

"Do you have a certain alias?"

"Call me whatever you please leader-sama."

'This shall be good for flicking off people.'

He handed her a uniform and some bandages for wrapping her large breasts.

"May I ask you to change your form so that you seem a bit more masculine?"

The blue haired girl shrugged she was used to changing her form; she didn't like many people seeing her true face. Not many people have seen her true face, she wasn't posted in Anbu Bingo books or any law enforcement files, the people who have ever seen her true face died long ago.

She henged her petite form into a form like an Amazon woman, beautiful yet deadly. her jaw had a more squareish look instead of being soft and round, her height increased very much, her shoulders became strong and broad, her new look had little feminine traits except for the hips, lips, hair, and huge breasts. This form had more of a threatening look than her previous real form.

"Do you think you can find you quarters on your own?"

"Yes I am capable of that leader-sama."

"Well then Welcome to the Akatsuki."

She bowed slightly before exiting. On the corridor a silvered haired man was being interviewed with some men who had the akatsuki cloud cloaks. The silvered haired man looked in her direction and winked. She ignored it and continued onto her quarters and entered to the very simple room with a nice looking futon. She locked the bathroom door connected to the room and let out a sigh of relief that she didn't have to share a bathroom with males since they were not usually neat with their bathrooms.

She slowly undid her coat feeling like she was exposing herself to the world and had to bite her lip while she further undressed. Now to her unmentionables she started unrolling the bandages when she felt like she was being watched, and put her hand on a weapon that was hidden in her bra. Trying to shake the feeling off she started bandaging her breasts tightly. It was slightly painful to the blue haired akatsuki but she ignored pain and withstood it as she was taught to when she was younger. She put on her fishnet top and solid black shirt when she heard some knocking on her room's door.

"I will be there shortly," she called out and quickly put her pants on forgetting about her heels and cloak.

She opened the door and there was the silver haired man leaning against her doorway.

"May I come in?" He asked in a sickenly charming voice.

"Yeah sure." She responded still being weary of this character and keeping herself ready to grab the weapon in her bra.

He entered slowly and casually browsing around her room. His violet eyes moved back to her. "I am Hidan, You new here too Baby Blue?"

"You can say that."

Hidan advanced closer to her looking her up and down. "You're too cute and womanly to be in this organization, seriously."

"Even rogues know that looks can be deceiving Hidan, even you should know that." She said stoically.

"Baby Blue, You want to get to know each other a little more." He flirted suggestively.

"We will have opportunities for that as comrades." She replied back.

"Yes opportunities, I think this opportunity is now." He said while closing the space between her and him. Their noses were almost touching but, she didn't even flinch.

"Why do you need to hit on me so badly right now, It's not very professional." She glared at him with annoyance.

"Because I am looking at the bearer of my children, an opportunity Jashin has provided me." He whispered to her ear and brushed against her hair.

"Get out of my face now!" She growled.

"Can't you see, your beauty and strength is ideal for bearing my children and building a nation for Jashin from your womb"

"I am not building anything from my womb!" She said through her teeth

"My flower, we are destined to live together forever it Jashin wills it!"

The blue haired girl was fuming, I f this was a regular; legal job she could have him arrested for sexual harassment but, unfortunately she was alone on this problem. One more comment and she would kick his sorry ass out of her room.

"Of course for this to be true you have to be a virgin, you are one aren't you?"

With that last sentence her self control snapped. She had a very bad day from the start. Unfortunately for Hidan he was immortal and laid writing in pain outside of her room covered in blood.

She was so grumpy today she didn't even feel like licking off his blood. After she closed the door from disposing of the Jashin obsessive trash she slid down on the door wondering what she had done, what were the consequences going to be from joining this organization.

Ok that is my revised first chapter and to clear something up the Unknown akatsuki in this fanfic doesn't have a name so they call her some nicknames like baby blue and such.

Please review and tell me if I should continue or not. Please do light criticism this is my first fanfic. Thank you for reading.