Thursday, 12 June y

BrainEaters - **10th Chapter Bonus** - Author's comments - Part 1

Written by MelleyDee; author of FanFiction story "Brain Eaters" based on the TV show 'The Walking Dead'

Hi Everyone!

My name is Melley and I'm the author of Brain Eaters. I wanted to provide some of words/points/views I need to express in honour of me successfully writing 10 chapters! (I don't always continue with things I start haha) Just wanted to address some things about/in my story and just say a few comments regarding the 10 chapters i've written thus this far;

First of all, I just want to advise you that this story is not entirely written with a sober mind. Therefore things such as if you notice things like the following;

lack of continually in names of people speaking or being address to ie. Saying Hailey when meaning Kyle

change of third person talking from "Zac and Rob" to "I said or we did" (bad habit of 1st POV writing)

people may appear "missing" from a scene but may not be needed to be said; may be for a reason

All of these I apologise for if you felt this was 'annoying' or detrimental to the chapters overall outcome. As this is just something I write in my spare time for fun, please do not nit pick at the little spelling, grammar or general errors within my chapters. All I ask is you read it as is, move past the small errors and embrace the story / scene for how its written overall..

Secondly, I welcome your feedback greatly on how the story is going and your honest opinion on the characters, plot line and even zombies being referred to as 'Brain Eaters'.. Love it or hate it? Let me know!

If you want to leave some feedback that may alter the outcome of the story, answer these 8 questions;

Who is your favourite character?

Who do you think will be next to be killed?

Which relationship do you like the most?

Who do you least trust in the camp?

Who do you most trust in the camp?

What do you think will happen next?

Who do you want to see survive this?

Who do you want to be killed next?

Hokay guys, that's it from me. Once again, thank you for reading and I really hope your enjoying my zombie story. I enjoy writing and it's something I do in my spare time, just having a few and letting my imagination take over. Let me know if your a fan :) & don't be afraid to favourite me as an author or the story !

Thank you !

melleydee

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