Mystery Dungeon Sky 1: Mia and Markus
Hey peps, Pikachulover66 here this is the first Mystery Dungeon I'm writing there will be more with our favorite pokemon characters but the first 2 will be OCs, my other story that I'm writing is still going I'm working on chapter 3 right now so it will be up soon. I don't own pokemon. This is also a rewrite plz tell me how you like it redone twice now thanks to some help with my writing and if the guy is reading it thanks and I hope this comes out better.
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I never thought that I would be a pokemon, I never knew the pokemon god would be tainted and evil, and I didn't know I would have to have a partner but here I am at a guild trying to save the world how did it happen well it all started with a crazy wish, and pain.
Prolog:
Umbreon:
I was walking home from school, head down, hurt every where in my eyes, and pain. I was bullied once again, the names that I shouldn't care about, the words that mean nothing all haunting me, taunting me, killing me, from the inside out. I walked and I didn't look back. I wasn't going back I would not do it ever, the pain was too much. I kept going till I was at my place where a cliff hangs over the water, I watch the sun set. I wished for something, anything to happen then I got a crazy idea. I wished that I was an Umbreon. After I thought that the cliff started to shake. Splash! I was in the water and was carried away, soon every thing was black.
I opened my eyes to see a night sky. I loved it, I watched it, and then, I got up. I found myself with 4 legs and midnight black fur, red glowing rings on me instead of yellow, they placed right where it would be on an Umbreon. Some of my old features stayed such as the side bang that covered half of my face, my crystal necklace, and my black baseball cap with the angry red eyes. I was amazed my wish came true, was it crazy? Yes, but it was great. No more school, no more pain, just me, on this unknown place. I walked, I explored, and I found I place to stay. I found a nice place on the side of a cliff. I made a bed out of straw and and went to bed excited to explore some more in this new, and crazy world.
Jolteon:
I was walking from home school, my always present smirk on my ever so prefect face. I was going to this nice little place, it was on a cliff. That place was where I wanted to be if I had nothing to do, that was worth my ever so important time. I got there, I looked up, there was the sky, the sun beating down on me, and I smiled. Today I had a wish, I wanted to get away, and I wanted to do something worth my time. Then I got it, the most insane idea ever, I wanted to be a Jolteon. It's a lame wish isn't it? Still I wanted it, I needed it, and I fell off the cliff. I didn't see that coming. I fell into water and was quickly carried off every thing was soon black like night.
Umbreon:
Light covered my new home. The pain of the light was unbearable. I groaned, I woke up, and I went for a walk. I decided on the beach. I walk through this place call Treasure Town, to get to the crossroads. From there I went south straight to the beach. When I got the end of it I found a Jolteon that was completely knocked out. I look at him for a while. For a Jolteon he was pretty hot. He had white fur that was actually a really light yellow with black and brown streaks in it. All in all he was H-O-T. His eyes opened letting me see one sea blue eye and one sky blue eye.
"Are you okay", I asked with a worried expression on my face.
A nod was all I got. He got up and looked around. I noticed a big smirk on his face. Trouble came to my mind but, I didn't care. I liked trouble it should have been my middle name. He looked at him self in the water, I saw that his smirk had grown bigger, like he got what he wanted.
"What are you doing here? Why were you unconscious?" I asked.
He turned and looked at me. "I fell of a cliff and ended up here. I must have gotten too much water in me so, I passed out", He said like nothing happened.
I wanted to ask more but a bird with a musical note on his head stopped me.
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Ok and done with the prolog. Yes it is very short but my chappies are short but I think this sounded better than my first try. So review plz I love feed back just try not to flame too much. Pikachulover66, out.