Missing piece review

Okay so for those of you who haven't read my first story Missing piece, continue reading. For those of you who have read Missing piece, you can go onto the next chapter.

So first of all welcome to my story! Today I'll be explaining and/or reviewing my first story for those of you who take an interest in my second story but don't feel like going back to read my first. So here is the need to know basics of my first story that you missed.

It's told through the point of view of a 14 year old girl named Taylor. Broken is told through her point of you, much like missing piece. Anyway, Taylor has two best friends names Lily and John. They were all in the doughnut shop one day, when across the street Taylor noticed that Murakami's was getting robbed. She decided to go help but Lily and John did not go with her.

Taylor ended up getting chased by the purple dragons and of course, got rescued by the turtles. They had dragged her in the sewer, and she got a concussion and passed out. Taylor awoke and then befriended the turtles after some freaking out. Donnie treated her head and she had to stay with the turtles over night because of her concussion. Donnie stayed up with all night and the two of them became really close.

Early in the morning, Shredder, the foot, and the krang burst in the lair. Master Splinter grabbed Taylor and ran out of their while the turtles stayed and fought back. The turtles ended up getting chased from their home and now they all have to stay in a different part of the sewer, which they called their temporary home. When they arrived there, Leo passed out the floor because he was severely injured.

Taylor continued to visit the turtles for about a week, and all this time Leo had been unconscious. Then her parents started to get suspicious and grounded her due to the thought that they found her bike by the pawn shop. But that was the closes man hole cover to the turtles. Taylor's parents thought she was part of a street gang and that's why she grounded her. Also, Taylor's friends were mad because she kept ditching them after work. She never went to the doughnut shop anymore and that got her friends angry, thinking they've been replaced.

Taylor couldn't tell her friends or parents about the turtles, so she kept their secret. This resulting the grounding and losing her two best and only friends. But Taylor didn't stay locked in her room for long, Donnie had appeared on her window sill with news about Leo and that they needed her help. Taylor of course went with Donnie and helped Leo. His wounds got infected and needed to be cleaned, Donnie was not able to do it because he didn't have any supplies. Taylor on the other hand did.

When Donnie returned her home, she explained how she was grounded and how she wouldn't be able to go see them for a while. But Donnie promised to come get her every night so they could see each other. Right then, Donnie and Taylor kissed. Taylor explained it as 'a force that was holding them together.' When the kiss ended Donnie zoomed out of the window without saying a word.

Getting freaked out, Donnie broke his promise and never returned for Taylor for two weeks. Taylor then decided to run away from her home and she went to stay with the turtles. They turtles said yes with open arms and Taylor would stay with them for as long as she needed. Leo was now awake but rarely talked. His brothers took him out on walks to stretch his legs. One day when returning from a walk, Splinter was gone. Turns out he's been taken by the krang and Shredder whom are now working together to defeat the turtles.

Taylor successfully finds out that Splinter is being held at TCRI and when they get him back, he decides to train Taylor as a kunoichi. When Donnie hears this news at first he is thrilled but then he seems kind of worried. Taylor didn't know why but after a few weeks Splinter tells Taylor that April, Donnie's former crush, left them less then a year ago to join the foot clan. It is assumed that that is the reason for Donnie's fear/concerns to why Taylor is training as a ninja, because last time their friend/his crush left him to be evil and he doesn't want that to happen with Taylor.

Regardless Taylor keeps training as a ninja. But she fears that her love for Donnie will not work out due to his traumatic experience in the past. So she keeps her feelings a secret from Donnie. She then learns that Donnie likes her back, but now it's even harder to keep her feelings a secret. She promised Mikey that she wouldn't tell Donnie about her love for him because Mikey is afraid that Donnie will get heart broken again.

After a few months of training, Taylor, the turtles and Master Splinter decides to go attack Shredder before he can do them any harm. They fight in the basement of TCRI and Taylor ends up facing off against April, who nicknamed Taylor 'Princess' And called Donnie 'Lover boy.' Taylor, without a weapon, improvises and grabs a pipe, and knocks April out then goes off to fight a krang. April isn't defeated yet and quickly goes after Taylor again, attempting to kill her. Taylor doesn't notice April sneaking up on her, but Donnie does. He rushes off to help Taylor and saves her. April ends up dropping her katana and fights with her bare hands.

It's not long after until a foot ninja throws April back her weapon but April doesn't notice. Taylor and Donnie are now on the ground with April leaning over them. Taylor thinks that it's over, but April katana ends up flying into her neck, killing April. Taylor nor Donnie can believe she's dead. Donnie crawls over to April to see if she's really dead. And sure enough she is. Even though Donnie lost all interest her, he still devastated that she's dead and cries by her dead body. Taylor goes over to Donnie and comforts him but Donnie keeps saying how no one will ever love him. Taylor couldn't stand to hear Donnie go on so that's when she confesses her feelings for him.

Donnie, almost forgetting about April, says that he likes her two. So the two of them hug then get up to join their family, they had won the fight! Shredder and his men had flee. Even though they had one the fight, injuries still occurred. Mikey who was injured could not stand on his own so he had the help of Raph. Splinter was injured as well with his fur stained red. Donnie had a huge gash going across his eye and onto his cheek. Turns out Donnie had been injured worst then appeared and falls to the floor shaking. Leo then leaves Master Splinter to Taylor and goes to help Donnie. They then all rush home.

The next morning, everyone turns out to be okay. Except that Mikey had a dislocated ankle but was treated by Donnie. Donnie on the other hand had a bandage around his forehead and cheek to cover his gash. And his eye was all red and puffy. But that didn't stop Donnie from inventing a healing gel that could heal cuts in seconds. It took a while to make, so between that period of time Donnie had asked Taylor out on a date. She of course said yes.

They went on their date, a romantic dinner that Donnie had put together with Mikey as the waiter. They then danced to Taylor's favourite slow song and when they were finished, Taylor wanted to kiss but it didn't happen. When they returned home, Taylor thanked Donnie for the night but Donnie didn't leave her room. That's when they kissed.

The next day the healing cream was finished. After some convincing, Donnie tested it on Taylor. Resulting that it works but stings a little. Donnie then treats all his brothers with the gel but barely had enough for himself. Taylor convinces him to use it and she treats him herself. Now Donnie's gash had merely turned into a cut.

Now, every Friday night Taylor goes to her parents house for a visit because she was feeling homesick. And every Saturday night Taylor and Donnie go on a date. For example, their second date was that Donnie took her topside to see some fireworks. That will be an important detail in this story ( Broken.)

After they've been doing this for about a month, Taylor decides that it's time for her parents to meet the turtles. Now a while back, I forgot to mention that Lily and John had met and befriended the turtles. John connecting with Mikey the most and Lily with Raph. They were also at Taylor's parents house for the weekly visits.

It took some convincing but the turtles agreed to meet Taylor's parents and her brothers, Mark (older) and Conner (younger.) The visit didn't start off so well but after a little while, everyone started to click and began talking in their own little conversation. Raph, Lily and Mark started to chat while John, Mikey and Conner talked as well. Donnie talked to Taylor's dad and Leo to her mom. During these conversations, Taylor manages to pull Donnie aside and tell him that she wants to tell her parents that they're dating.

After an hour the turtles decide to leave but Taylor and Donnie stay behind to make their announcement. His brothers don't stay due to the fact that they already know. When Taylor tells her parents the news, they don't handle it very well. But Taylor doesn't care, she then turns to Donnie and says...

" He's my boyfriends...and I love him." That's when Taylor first says that she loves Donnie and not just likes him. Donnie then says that she loves her too. All this time Taylor parents say nothing, so Taylor and Donnie decided to leave. The story ends with Taylor thinking to herself and she says ( in her head) that Donnie is her missing piece.

Another VERY IMPORTANT detail that I forgot to mention was that back at TCRI, when Taylor told Donnie that she likes him. Donnie responded with 'me too.' Taylor was confused but Donnie clarifies that he likes her too. And now the words 'me too' are very special to Donnie and Taylor and sorta like their special words that they say to each other during sentimental moments. The words 'me too' was the beginning of their relationship.

Okay so that's all you really need to know. If your now interested to read my first story, you can find it here...

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So I hope this summary helped and if during any time your confused, feel free to ask me. But as for now, your free to go enjoy my second story! So please, enjoy!

Character description

Taylor: Decent height girl, around the same height as Mikey but not as tall as Raph. She has brown hair which she usually wears in a ponytail but sometimes wears in down. Her eyes are a blue-grey colour that sometimes look green in certain light. She's a smart girl that resembles Donnie a little bit but isn't quite as good with machines. Friends with Lily and John and the turtles. Dating Donnie, and loves him very much. Use to work at a coffee shop called 'Fill me up Coffee Shop' but now is training as a Kunoichi.

Lily: Is a somewhat short girl, shorter then Taylor. Has blonde hair and bright blue eyes. She best friends with John and Taylor, seems to have a special connection with Raph. Possibilities for relationship? Works at a nail saloon.

John: Is a taller boy, about the same height as Raph, maybe an inch taller. As dark brown hair with green eyes. He's best friends with Lily and Taylor and has a good connection with Mikey. He loves comic books, and works at a comic book store. Is described as his 'dream job.'

Antonio: Antonio was Taylor's dad's best friend but they had a fight a few years back. He continues to help Taylor with supplies, food, and money that she needs to survive down in the sewer. Average weight and height for a grown man, possibly of the beefier side. Is Italian/Canadian and owns Antonio's pizza. The turtles favourite place to buy pizza. Not a major character

Evil April: Looks like April but much more sly and sneaky. She now wears an outfit of black with some metal on her. Looks a lot like Karai.

Harriet: Harriet is Taylor's mother. She has brown wavy hair though usually wears it up. She has blue eyes like and works as a nurse. Is very proper and neat.

Jerry: Jerry is Taylor's Father. He is a tall man and has short brown hair, a darker shade. His eyes are a pale blue/green and he works as a mechanic.

Mark: Mark is Taylor's 17 year old older brother. He's tall and skinny and loves to tease his younger siblings. Mark has brown shaggy hair and pale green eyes. Is not employed

Conner: Conner is Taylor's 6 year old younger brother. He's rather short but is fully of spirit. He has beautiful blue eyes and a light brown hair, could be considered dirty blonde.