Terror Hill: The Nightmare Begins

This is my new story series Terror Hill! There will be 8 sega's to this HUGE story. This is my first ever story on Fanfiction, so BEAR WITH ME HERE. Light Critisism is accepted. PLEASE DO NOT FLAME! This is basically the introduction. Im giving you all the character names. Main POV's used, and Protagonists and Antagonists. Action/Romance/Drama/Mystery Fanfic. What better than to use all 4! Now, ON WITH THE INTRO, But first, Im going to tell you this:

Itallics typing is a characters thoughts

Bold Typing will be used to Introduce and End chapters, and to address critical information.

Underline will NOT be used

Now, for real, ON WITH THE INTRO

Main Characters:

Derrick Johnson (MY OC)

Protagonist Characters:

Night Darkwing (MY OC)

Gerald Healey (MY OC)

Husky Winithrop (MY OC)

Alexis Kate (MY OC)

Antagonist Characters:

Terry Hill

Luke Hill

Parlor Ghost

Foyer Ghost

Bedroom Ghosts (No Sexual Pun Intended)

Ghouler (Leader of the Ghosts)

Bone (Name used from Warriors Series)

Scourge (Name used from Warriors Series)

Summary of the Story:

Derrick Johnson has a quiet, content life. But not everyday is peaceful for the young adult. A mysterious letter one day appears. Derrick goes to seek out its writer, but will he regret that choice? Follow Derrick as he struggles to survive Terry Hill and his haunted manor. Can Derrick escape, or will he die trying?

And thats it for the intro. Light Critisism and Suggestions would be great, THANKS