So here's my 2nd try, I hope it's better then you first, Dahlia's creator never answered so her position is wide open.
The day the 2nd Pirate King died would be the beginning of hell. His companions looked on in sadness. The great Pirate King Monkey D. Luffy had been captured. He was being executed in Loguetown, on the same spot as the previous pirate king. He smiled at the crowd.
"Haha! When I was much younger this…this was the spot I wanted to die at and now that my dream has been achieved, that the dreams of my nakama have been achieved I will leave you with no regrets!"
Someone in the crowd suddenly shouted out, "Where's one piece!"
Yells and cheers about the grand treasure floated through the crowd. The smile on the pirate king's face lit up once again. He chuckled to himself.
"One piece you ask? One piece…I moved. It's located in an area called the Bright Blue! Newly discovered! It'll take a lot to find One Piece! I wish all the pirates who go after it luck!"
The crowd became restless, the marines needed to end this…now. One of the marines shook his head and began to release the rope that would cause the beheading of Monkey D. Luffy. As the sharpen blade ran down, Luffy screamed, "Protect those In Need, Never Give up, and Die with a Smile! That's what it takes to be pirate king!"
The blade hit his neck and blade splattered along the edges, the 2nd Pirate King Monkey D. Luffy was dead.
Far away from the sight of the death his crew hide and watched his death on screen.
"What now?" Nami asked aloud the question on everybody's mind.
"We've achieved our dreams…so what can we do?" Chopper questioned.
"We spread along the Grandline and live our lives…this is the end of our crew, but not the end of us. Luffy would want us to live, so we will. But first we make a promise." Zoro answered. He was the only one who could answer, he was the first mate after all.
"What's that?" Sanji asked lighting a cigarette.
"Promise that we will never reveal the location of One Piece, to anyone! Even if we're tortured! Make them find it, give them a hint I suppose, but nothing big!" Zoro yelled for everyone to here.
"AGREED!" They all chanted in unison.
-Somewhere Else in the West Blue…a baby boy was born.
Taro watched his younger Kanaye sneak into the room their mother was in. He followed trying to stop him from bothering her. He was to late. By the time he was in the room Kanaye was already lumped on the bed near here looking curiously at the bundle in her arms.
"I'm sorry mother!" Taro jolted into the room and tried to pull Kanaye off.
His mother laughed, "No it's fine, sit down with us Taro."
The latter awkwardly sat on the bed with them. If his father found this they'd be dead. Then again she did ask them to sit down. While in the midst of his thoughts a small blue bundle of blankets was pushed his way.
"Go ahead! Hold your brand new brother!" she shoved the baby more his way.
"I want to hold him!" Kanaye dove for the bundle.
His mother quickly reeled the baby in, "NO WAY!" She shook her finger at him, "Your only 6. You have to be 8 to hold the baby, which is why Taro can."
She held the baby out to him again. "His name is Ren."
This time Taro took. He peered at the face covered in bundles of blankets. The baby had tuffs of black hair, just like the long black hair their mother had. He would be the only one with hair like that. Both Kanaye and Taro had their father's blonde hair, it made them stand out, but only Kanaye liked that. Taro would rather be invisible. The baby opened his tiny sleeping eyes, a jade green, once again like their mother's, but it was a trait all the boys now shared.
"Mom, tell us a story! One with Pirates!" Kanaye cheered, getting bored with all the attention on the baby.
"Alright, alright…"she paused, thinking for a second about which story. "Once upon a time…"
(INSERT STORY OF ONE PIECE HERE)
-XxX-
"I'm going to be a pirate, just like Luffy!" Kanaye jumped off the bed and grabbed a lamp, swung off the shade and yelled at Taro, "Bring on you stupid marine!"
Taro rolled his eyes and kissed his mother goodnight, but Kanaye continued. His mother sent him a smile with pleading eyes and Kanaye grabbed a broken piece of wood from the bed post.
"You pirates never learn!"
They played for a while, reenacting parts of Monkey D. Luffy's story. Until their father came and sent them to bed. That night as they lay side by side, Kanaye continued talking about pirates.
"I want to be a pirate. And find one piece just like Luffy did…wouldn't that be something!"
Taro just nodded. He didn't want to be a pirate, always on the run. He wanted to save people, even if the marines in the story were mostly bad. There were good ones like Tsuru, Smoker, Hina, Garp, Tashigi, Bogart, and the one admiral that captured Luffy. Coby, he wanted to be like Coby, fight his way to the top then be fair and loyal. Most of all not corrupt, not like the others. Yes that was his dream.
-9 years later…
Taro marched into position with the other recruits. Soon he would be a marine, he would achieve his goal. His mother was very sickly, so Taro would try to remember stories and tell them. Tried to inspire dreams and hopes in them. He would take care of them whenever his mother wasn't feeling well, his father was far to busy being a marine often out on the sea. He could only hope he inspired the dreams his mother inspired him with.
As the ship he was on pulled out he heard his name be called. Curious he looked over the ledge of the ship, back on the island his brother's Kanaye and Ren were cheering and waving.
The last thing he heard was Kanaye shout out, "I'll be pirate one day! I'll find one piece! You'll have to be the one! The one to catch me! Only you!"
Little Ren yelled too, "I'm going be a pirate too! Just like…like…like…"
"LIKE LUFFY!" They two yelled in unison.
Taro chuckled to himself, slightly wishing he himself could dream like that, but it just wasn't in the cards. He was too by the book, he couldn't break a rule if it killed him, but he sure could bend them.
-2 years later…
Kanaye left next, leaving the 11 year-old Ren all alone. Not that that mattered. When Kanaye left he promised Ren he'd find one piece waa~y before he'd even get a chance to start. Ren just rolled his eyes and said he would be able to catch up to wherever Kanaye was in 2 years. They made a bet on it, whoever lost would give up one piece and follow a different path.
-6 years later…and where our Hero's story really begins…
Ren left on a small dingy early in the morning on his birthday. It was December 7, it was freezing, Ren pulled his cloak closer. Today was the day he began to catch up with Kanaye. Today was the day.
He looked at the shore, wishing someone would say goodbye to him. An old man was seen in the distance.
"BATON!" he yelled.
The old man waved then called back, "Fulfill your dream boy, that's what I trained you for."
Ren smiled and waved back wildly. "Bye, Gramps! I'll miss you!"
Baton smiled, "No you won't. You'll have all the adventure in the world. Be careful…"
Ren didn't here him, the dingy to far out into the ocean now to far for anyone to hear anything. Ren watched as the island he called home, slowly disappear on the horizon.
Then he turned to face the open ocean. "So begins my adventure!"
"Now all I have to do is find a crew, an amazingly awesome crew! One way better then Kanaye's. Who are they again?"
He fished in his jean pocket and pulled out a few wanted posters. One had his brother, green eyes, blonde curls, angelic smile (the girl's say) and all, a bounty of 150,000,000 berries. The rest of his crew was pretty high too, but one girl stood out. She was also from their island. Yuuki, the girl Ren had hopelessly fallen for and fallen for her brother and become his medical expert on the ship. She had snow white hair, ice blue eyes, and the most beautiful smile Ren had ever seen. Her bounty was 75,000,000.
Ren looked up, "I'll catch up. I'll definitely catch up."
All he had to do was find a crew…
Ren is Jin, just a younger funnier version. Anyway…so I figure this is a better start, you get to meet both his brothers and figure out that he's in love.
So here's the stuff-
Name:
Nicknames:
Alias: nickname on a bounty poster or what the world knows the charrie as. delete this if there is none.
Gender:
Age:
Birthday:
Former Affiliations: before joining the main crew? delete this if there is none.
Occupations:
Species: human, cyborg, fishman/woman, mermaid/man, skypeian?
Devil Fruit: delete if there is none.
Hair:
Eyes:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Markings:
Other Physical Appearances: like accessories.
Clothing:
Weapon:
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Fears:
Hobbies:
Possessions:
Odd Habits:
History:
Devil Fruit Information
Name:
Meaning-
Type:
User:
Ability:
(just delete this entire section if there is no Devil Fruit)
Strengths-
Weaknesses-
Attacks:Color: what color represents your charrie?
Animal: what animal would your charrie be?
Smell: what does he/she smell like?
Favorite Type of Season and Island:
Favorite Foods:
Least favorite Food:
Themes: one or two songs here please that describe your charrie. plese put at least one.
Quote:
Heroes: who does he/she look up to?
Dream:
I need:
POSITIONS-
First Mate:
Navigator:
Cook: TAKEN BY RedxAlert
Doctor: TAKEN, not Yumi my other OC Mai, that was recently devopled
Gunner/Marksman:
Shipwright/Ship:
Blacksmith/Weapon Master:
Scholar/Historian:
Musican:
Pet: TAKEN by Regal Panther
Other:
ROOKIES/RIVAL CREW( LIKE LAW AND KID); 10 Postions Open, one TAKEN BY Anime Insaniac
Shichibukai; 8 positions open.
Yonkou; 4 positions open
Admirals; 3 positions open.
Vice Admirals; 5 positons open
Fleet Admirals; 4 positions open.
Anything below fleet admiral is unlimited in the marines.
Revolutionaries; unlimited.
Bounty Hunters; unlimited.
Other Pirates; unlimited.
Civilians; unlimited.
KANAYE'S CREW-IF YOUR CHARACTER IS NOT ACCEPTED THEY WILL MOST LIKELY END UP HERE