Ok, ok... This is a Relena poem, give the girl a break- it switches from her POV to an outsider's- it *could* be a deathfic but I'm not telling- maybe I should add it for a series effect- I've already got the deathfics for Trowa and Duo- if I ever recollect my thoughts on those two points I may write and post ones for the rest... but your reviews determine that.
Disclaimer: I want to own Gundam Wing- really badly. But I don't. So sue me. It's not like I'd get paid for writing this sort of stuff so it would be fruitless to take legal action.

Fallen Queen
Effervescent Promises are glinting in the wind
Barely masking hintings of my nature's passionate sin
I stand in the surf, unable to go to shore
It's a dangerous borderline but I keep comin' back for more
The pounding waves are ne'er at rest- keep pounding with a rage
So dangerous for one ensnared inside a porcelain cage
Queen of Peace
Can't find release
Can't control
What's in her soul
I burn him in my anger and I keep him in my heart
I follow him everywhere then pull him apart
Misconstrued messages- he wades through blood and gore
Through the clarity of peace- it is myself that I abhor
The crashing wave's destructive power draws me with its force
The Queen of Peace wants peace for all- but I'm lacking at the source
Queen of love
Sent from above
Cannot hide
From what's inside
I stumble and I fall, along my narrow way
I'm blinded- next place I fall, for eternity I will lay
I want to save you all much grief, because I know how hate can mar-
Redeem you from the cold steel trigger in the human heart
I'm confused by dreams that haunt me- either choice presents demise
Beloved threatens to pull the trigger as I smile and shut my eyes
Breathe in deep...Brace yourself
Queen of grace
For the human race
Look into her eyes
You'll be surprised...

So, mina-san, your opinions, please... (Chaos Ensues) *sigh*
well, I love y'all anyway...Happy St. Pat's Day!