Disclaimer: The flock spread up searching for their familes, and Max is left alone. Erasers appear at her door, and kidnap her. Fang and the rest of the flock rescue her, and she forgets them! How will Fang take this when she doesn't even know his name? Will Max remember and tell Fang her true feelings to him, or will her mind be forever lost in darkness? Read more, to find out...

Maximum Ride: The Untold Story

Chapter one: Who Are You?

Max POV

I was flipping through channels until the news caught my attention. I watched it, and felt sadness and happiness build up into one feeling. One I had no name for. There, on the news, was my flock-no, my family. They all looked so happy, but someone was missing. 'Fang.' I thought. I was scared. Scared that something bad had happened to him, until I heard a knock at the door. I went to it, opening it slightly only to have it busted down on top of me. I stared up at a smirking Ari. Wasn't he dead?! I growled up at him, and he moved his hand forward. About six or seven Erasers came running in, their fowl stench clogging up my smelling ability. I kicked the broken down door off of me, and stood up; only to have all of the Erasers hold me back. I squirmed and kicked and bit, but none of them let go. I watched as Ari shot me with a tranquilizer dart, and I went limp. I blunk, trying to get the blurry vision to go away, but it did not.

"Come on, Jeb wants us back at the School!! Grab her and go, go, go!" They didn't need to be told twice. Ari stepped aside as the Erasers piled out of the house. The biggest Eraser I saw had me thrown over his shoulder, making me smell his foul skin. I kept swallowing the urge to throw up, and heard someone shout, "Look out!" The Erasers holding me on his shoulder fell, along with me. I counted from three how long it would take me to hit the ground, but whn i counted one, I did not. Was I flying? Indeed I was, as I opened my eyes to see angry Erasers below throwing rocks and pathetic sticks at me and the person carrying me. I blinked wearily, but had enough energy to turn my head.

"F-Fang??" I whispered. He nodded at me, a stern look appeared upon his face. I closed my eyes, and snuggled closely to him. I wasn't asleep, but it sure did feel like it! Thirty-minutes later, Fang touched down, and I heard footsteps. I groaned as he set me down, then all of my nerves went crazy. I screamed, then kicked and slashed at imaginary people. Then I collapsed, and finally my senses went back to normal.

"M-Max?? Are you ok??" 'Who was that?' It seemed so familiar.

"No, geez, you think she'd be ok after kicking down ten trees!" 'Deep and cold...yet gentle and warm.'

"Max! Wake up, please!" 'A small voice...I don't remember...'

"I can't see anything, but it sure did sound like she was mad!" 'What's going on??'

"Why is she not moving?? She's not..dead..is she??" 'A young boy by the sound of it...who, though?' I opened my eyes, and looked at the five people around me. My head was in total pain, and I had no idea where I was.

"Max!! Your ok!!!" A girl with dark brown skin and big brown eyes tackled me in a hug.

"Uh...yeah b-MAX!!!" A young girl with blonde curls jumped into my arms and wrapped her arms around my neck.

"Yeah, but-I can't see but man am I glad your ok!" A boy with strawberry-blonde colored hair and blue eyes walked over to me and put a hand on my shoulder.

"Yes, thank you b-Max!!! Your not dead!!! Yay!!" I boy with blonde hair hugged my leg, tears forming in his eyes.

"Ok! OK! I know you all were scared for me, but I-Max..." A boy with dark brown eyes and black hair walked up to me, his voice deep and peircing. Everyone let go and stepped away. He walked up to me and wrapepd me into a tight embrace. I blunk a few times, confused, but hugged him back anyway.

"Uhm...I'm sorry I scared you all, but...I have one question." Everyone stared at me. "Who are you guys??"

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