My first very long Naruto fanfic! It has new and original characters so read. But don't get me wrong the others are in there too! The original Naruto characters. Anyway read past the first couple of chapters because they are forming somewhat of a backround for my new characters ok!
I really hope you enjoy this ate up like a month of my life.
PLEASE REVIEW!!!! I need feedback so I can improve! Plus I need more idea for the sequel!
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Chapter 1
The sun sank behind the rolling green hills covering them in darkness. Kihaku watched as the luminous orb disappeared and turned the sky an inky black.
"Ah, night comes again. I'll be setting out now 'kay? Tentou!! Tsuchi!! Are you listening?"
"Hmm? Oh yes, go on. Why don't you sleep like normal people Kihaku?" Tentou said nonchalantly.
"It's because night is my strong time. I do my training and musings at night. Well at least until the moon rises."
"Whatever, just stop jabbering so I can go to sleep." Said Tsuchi.
"Oh Tsuchi! You've always been the irritable type." She said smiling as she walked deeper into the forest.
What will I do now? I have to do my nightly feeding. Maybe someone will be swimming in the hot springs.
Kihaku walked towards Konoha when she reached a wooden fence. A peep-hole was carved into one. Obviously done by Jiraiya she thought. So this must be the women's bath. She went around to the other one and leapt over the fence landing swiftly.
Now to pick a prey. Splish Splash
Someone was over there. With a string of hand-signs she cast a Genjutsu and hid nearby. Out of the water emerged the hottest looking guy she had ever seen. Shoulder length dark brown hair and lavender eyes.
So this must be a Hyuga.
She watched him shake his dark hair a couple of times then get up to leave. She thought about releasing the Genjustsu but the growing restlessness of her soul took over. She started to unravel the bandages around her eyes. He walked around bewildered for a while then got a keen look in his eye and made the hand-sign to release the genjutsu.
"Ha ha, very funny but I see through your genjustsu. Now where are you? BYAKUGAN!"
Shit. He can see where I am!!
Before she could perform another jutsu a hand grabbed her wrist and pulled her out from her hiding spot.
"Now who is this?" he said unraveling the bandaging from her eyes. She stopped him.
"No, don't touch that." She said firmly.
"But I want to see your pretty eyes."
"They are not pretty." She said as the former her condensed into water.
"Ah, very impressive, a water clone. I guess I'll leave you alone, for now." He said laughing as he walked back into the water. She sat behind the fence breathing heavily starting to feel weaker and weaker, needing to feed. She removed the bandaging from her eyes and looked around. The phosphorescent material in her unearthly grey eyes swirling around. There were no people around that she could see.
Oh no, where could they be! Where could anyone be?
She looked at the rising moon and hurried off closer to Konoha. She saw a drunken lady wandering around and ran over to her.
"Hey kid what the hell are you-
Was all she could say before her lifeless body collapsed onto the ground. Kihaku grasped the bandaging and wrapped it tightly around her eyes.
It's not my fault she's dead.
She kept reminding herself.
I have to do this for the sake of everyone.
She clenched the spot where a heart should be.
I wish I had one, instead of you.
She said to herself.
