There is no person quite like you

by howverycliche

A shakespearean sonnet : About Carla and Peter please read and tell me what you think :

A/N- This is a task on Shakespearean sonnets that we did today in English. I did it on Carla and Peter and I really like it! My English teacher told me it was fabulous and I really had to publish it! Please tell me what its like because it is my first sonnet ever. Construtive critidcism is good ;) The sonnet is from Peter's point of view. It is based on Peter's jealously of Carla and Frank and how they become together and in this, eventually get married. The beginning shows Peter drinking to help the pain and I hope that is clear to even the Petanne fans!

After reviews I will do a review evalution chapter :)

For those reading passport baby, the update is ready but I cannot post it until my History essay is done.

Thanks,

Kirsten :) xo'

THERE IS NO PERSON QUITE LIKE YOU

You are like an itch I have to scratch,

I try to disobey my demanding heart.

You and I, we are the most perfect match,

You and he, you make me fall apart.

I should not think like this, I know, I know,

But you are the reason for my heart beat.

Being without you makes me feel so uselessly low,

So for you I really cannot retreat.

You are the brightest star in my sky(heart),

I love you so much, I cannot lie.

You and I, together till death do us part,

Carla and Peter, together to die.

I hope our love will last forever,

Carla and Peter, whatever the weather.

PLEASE REVIEW!

You know you want to!