err hello everybody, first I would like to apologize for any rude actions i made last time we met. But here's the long-awaited sequel to "The warm feeling". I don't have much interest in this story but your reviews inspired me to make this sequel. I hope i don't relose interest. I've already got the story figured out but don't hesitate to give me suggestions, at some point I need it very badly. On some other side notes I follow the anime not the manga so no spoilers in reviews that contain manga surprises. On the other side note some of the attacks will be listed in japanese. I'm' going to post Sasuke's fire element attacks in translation but the rest you have to find on your own. sorry. well here they are followed by the story
Katon: Housenka no jutsu- Fire element: Balsam spread fire/phoenix fire/mythical fire flower
Katon: Goukakyuu no justsu: Fire element: blazing/great fireball
Katon: Ryuuka no justu- fire element: Fire dragon
well here it is and I hope this inspires readers to write more NarutoXtenten fics, I realize that there are few of this and this might be the only series.
oh and this story depends on reviews so no reviews no update. glad that's clear now here's the first chapter. hope I've improved
Chapter 1: Rivalry !
In the busy streets of konoha , a pre-teen that wore the expression of utmost anxiety and determination was in hope, her right hand rose and she put her fingers up upon her pink hair to pull it back in wonder and anxiety. Where was the love of her life, Uzumaki Naruto? She had been walking for hours in search for him and she lay still to catch her breath and think.
Meanwhile, the boy which was targeted by the obsessed pre-teen was lying in the forest snoring under the trees. The shade under it was cool and comforting compared to the sizzling sun. His prized girlfriend, TenTen had suppressed his need to become the number 1 ninja , Hokage. But even she, can't destroy that dream. The blonde boy stood awake, revealing his sky blue eyes. The relaxed shinobi stretched his arms and clumsily stood up.
After settling on , Naruto walked back to the hidden village of the leaf.
On the outskirts of Konoha, Uchiha Sasuke was training endlessly day and night getting a few hours of rest and little food into his stomach, yet the boy kept forward. Hope glittered in his coal-black eyes, hope to get vengeance on Uchiha Itachi. "Greetings Sasuke." Said a calm voice from behind. "Kakashi...What do you want?" demanded Sasuke smiling as he threw a kunai directly to its target. "I've been watching you, and if you expect to defeat Itachi, you'll need plenty of sleep and a proper diet." Said Kakashi concerned and motherly. Sasuke turned around revealing his tire and hunger, His eyes were red with exhaustion but amongst them were three strange symbols, the colour of the layer around his pupils were red, these strange symptoms were the signs of the sharingan. As Sasuke gazed over at Kakashi, he was about to say something when a dizziness took over him making him fall to the solid , grassy ground helplessly. Kakashi sighed and picked up the body, with it he left to Sasuke's house.....
By now the pink haired girl who's name was Sakura had searched and asked everywhere in means of finding the blonde haired boy, she was about to give up, but then she heard a familiar slurping at Ichikaru Ramen. She hurried with fast steps of joy, her hastiness, however caused her to trip on a crack, her face fell on a soft , tender jumpsuit. She stood up to thank the person who had caught her but immediately forgot her politeness as she recognized the person "NARUTO !! hi, how about a date?" she asked hastily gripping her fists in excitement. He was about to speak when someone interrupted. "Sorry Sakura but Naruto has got other plans, with me..." said a female voice from behind. Sakura turned around with all the fury in her body, then she faced Naruto's girlfriend, Tenten who was also enraged, the two had become rivals and were exchanging deep glares as Naruto watched innocently. "What makes you think that Naruto won't cancel his plans for my proposal?!" began Sakura, "because I'm his girlfriend and you are not!" replied Tenten with just as much confidence. "You won't be for long." Spat Sakura, "we'll see about that" and the argument went back and forth attracting bystanders. Naruto was about to react when he caught a glimpse of a familiar grey haired jounin holding the number one rookie Uchiha Sasuke. Naruto forgot all about the girls and leapt after them with great agility as the girls kept on arguing not noticing that their prize had fled.
One of the people who was watching the argument was a certain blue haired girl. The girl watched sadly at her competition. She was secretly in love too with their prize. Yes, she had acknowledged his confidence as a sign of true shinobi. She had never lost fate in him and though she was too shy to stand by him, she offered help at times and was pleased when he accepted it. Yet he had never acknowledged her as a valuable person and she knew it. What she also knew was that she was outmatched by these, much more beautiful women. This girl went by the name of Hyuuga Hinata.
"Shit! I lost them" cursed Naruto as he concentrated deeply on finding his comrades. "I need to search wider, and I just know how. Kage bunshin no jutsu !" said Naruto enchanting his ability to use. In the blind of an eye a fog formed and as it cleared several blonde haired boys followed their original. "Find Kakashi-sensei and Sasuke and see what's wrong, Go !" commanded the skillfull shinobi as the clones parted across the city.
In a matter of minutes the grey haired jounin holding the raven haired boy was spotted. Naruto deactivated the shadow clones and wandered behind his sensei. Naruto looked up and saw him heading to the hospital. Naruto followed beside him and the calm man faced him silently. "Where are you taking Sasuke?" asked Naruto, "He's dehydrated, and he must be taken care of." Said Kakashi as he moved forward. "Oh I'll come with you then." Said Naruto completely forgetting his girlfriend and the spiteful Sakura completely.
By now Sakura and Tenten were racing to find where Naruto went determined to find him before the other girl reached him first and trailing behind silently and unnoticed was Hinata.