OK i do not under any cercomstances, unless of course they would like to give them to
me, do i own the newsies. Nore do i own half the dialog i am using b/c
i am acutally mixing MOnty python and the holy grail with NEwsies. Excpet
its not goin go happen in the same order as it did on the MPandTHG movie, so bear with
me and tell me what you think.
JD picks up the board the monks use to whack over their heads* Ooh cool whats this used
for.
Chris grins* here let me show you *takes it and hits JD over the head and he falls
unconcious*
*gives hima dirty look and he looks at me innocently shrugging * what i didnt hink
his head was so soft.
*i shake my head at him* go sit in the corner now.
*he pouts an starts walking* CHris....*holds out hand, he turns and looks at me* what?
Give me the board...*chris looks down at hte board and reluctantly hadns it over* party pooper
*nods* thats right now go sit in the corner till i tell you to come out.
now on with the story :)
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Skittery is walking down the street hawling a cart full of dead people and ringing
a bell.
"bring out yer dead" *rings the bell*
"bring out yer dead, Ninepense" *rings bell*
A few people pile some dead people on the cart. Spot and the brookelyn newsies
walk by dressed as monks chantin some weird think and hit a board over their heads
each time they say the chant.
"bring out yer dead" *rings the bell*
"BRING OUT yer dead"
*rings the bell*
Race comes out with snipeshooter over his shoulder.
"ere i got one fore ya" race says.
Skittery stops.
"That'll be ninepense"
"I'm not dead" snipeshooter said quietly.
Skitter looks at Race.
"what?"
Race smiles.
"nothing, heres your ninepense"
"I'm not dead" Snipeshooter croaked louder.
"whats that, 'e says hes not dead"
"Yes he is"
"no im not"
Skittery is frowns.
"hes not?"
"He will be soon, Hes very ill"
"I'm getin better!"
Race hits snipeshooters leg.
"Oh shut up you'll be stone dead in a few minutes"
Skittery watches the exchange.
"i cant take him like that, its against regulations"
"I dont want to go in the cart" Snipeshooter whined.
"shut up and stop being such a baby" Race growled.
Skittery shakes his head.
"I cant take him."
"I feel fine, I think ill go for awalk" Snipeshooter says.
"Eh you aint foolin nobody now shut up." Race looks at skittery. "well cant
you wait a few minutes"
"no i cant i have to get to Kloppmans, 'es lost nine today"
"well whens yer next rounds"
"Next wednesday"
"He aint gonna last long, isnt ther something you can do?"
SNipeshooter starts singin.
"i feel happy, .... I feel happy."
Race switches his weight to his other foot.
Skittery looks around then takes his club and whacks snipeshooter over the head
making him fall limp. Race grins and sets him in the cart handing Skittery the
ninepense.
"thank you very much"
Skittery nods.
"Not at all. See you on thursday"
"right. All right."
Jack comes gallopin by with Crutchy limping behind him beating two coconuts together
so it sounds as if jack is really gallopin on a horse instead of faking it.
Skittery and Race watch as they go by.
"Whos that?"
skittery shrugs.
"I dunno, must be a king or something"
"whys that?"
Skittery srhugs again picking his cart up
"well, He hasnt got shit all over 'im"
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Well what do you think? should i do more or not? i am leavin it up to you guys and what
you tell me in your reviews? Please give me your input on it.
me, do i own the newsies. Nore do i own half the dialog i am using b/c
i am acutally mixing MOnty python and the holy grail with NEwsies. Excpet
its not goin go happen in the same order as it did on the MPandTHG movie, so bear with
me and tell me what you think.
JD picks up the board the monks use to whack over their heads* Ooh cool whats this used
for.
Chris grins* here let me show you *takes it and hits JD over the head and he falls
unconcious*
*gives hima dirty look and he looks at me innocently shrugging * what i didnt hink
his head was so soft.
*i shake my head at him* go sit in the corner now.
*he pouts an starts walking* CHris....*holds out hand, he turns and looks at me* what?
Give me the board...*chris looks down at hte board and reluctantly hadns it over* party pooper
*nods* thats right now go sit in the corner till i tell you to come out.
now on with the story :)
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Skittery is walking down the street hawling a cart full of dead people and ringing
a bell.
"bring out yer dead" *rings the bell*
"bring out yer dead, Ninepense" *rings bell*
A few people pile some dead people on the cart. Spot and the brookelyn newsies
walk by dressed as monks chantin some weird think and hit a board over their heads
each time they say the chant.
"bring out yer dead" *rings the bell*
"BRING OUT yer dead"
*rings the bell*
Race comes out with snipeshooter over his shoulder.
"ere i got one fore ya" race says.
Skittery stops.
"That'll be ninepense"
"I'm not dead" snipeshooter said quietly.
Skitter looks at Race.
"what?"
Race smiles.
"nothing, heres your ninepense"
"I'm not dead" Snipeshooter croaked louder.
"whats that, 'e says hes not dead"
"Yes he is"
"no im not"
Skittery is frowns.
"hes not?"
"He will be soon, Hes very ill"
"I'm getin better!"
Race hits snipeshooters leg.
"Oh shut up you'll be stone dead in a few minutes"
Skittery watches the exchange.
"i cant take him like that, its against regulations"
"I dont want to go in the cart" Snipeshooter whined.
"shut up and stop being such a baby" Race growled.
Skittery shakes his head.
"I cant take him."
"I feel fine, I think ill go for awalk" Snipeshooter says.
"Eh you aint foolin nobody now shut up." Race looks at skittery. "well cant
you wait a few minutes"
"no i cant i have to get to Kloppmans, 'es lost nine today"
"well whens yer next rounds"
"Next wednesday"
"He aint gonna last long, isnt ther something you can do?"
SNipeshooter starts singin.
"i feel happy, .... I feel happy."
Race switches his weight to his other foot.
Skittery looks around then takes his club and whacks snipeshooter over the head
making him fall limp. Race grins and sets him in the cart handing Skittery the
ninepense.
"thank you very much"
Skittery nods.
"Not at all. See you on thursday"
"right. All right."
Jack comes gallopin by with Crutchy limping behind him beating two coconuts together
so it sounds as if jack is really gallopin on a horse instead of faking it.
Skittery and Race watch as they go by.
"Whos that?"
skittery shrugs.
"I dunno, must be a king or something"
"whys that?"
Skittery srhugs again picking his cart up
"well, He hasnt got shit all over 'im"
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Well what do you think? should i do more or not? i am leavin it up to you guys and what
you tell me in your reviews? Please give me your input on it.