GTA: Australia
It might be weird rewriting the whole the story. But that not the case. I deiced that I should do a lots of changes to the story. Here a list of some of changes
Some of the storyline will change.
It just wont be based just in Sydney but also in other 2 cities
Also there will be new charaters in this story
Chapter 1: Home is where the start is
I will put ages of the main characters
Lance 19
Deinyon 18
Jack 17
Nick 18
Jason 18
Lance arrived at Suvarnabhumi Airport (known as Bangkok Airport) after spend 6 months in Thailand. He got out of a taxi at around 11pm. Lance is a thai/aussie person with shiny black hair, modestly tanned skin, wearing green jeans and a dark blue tshirt.
Taxi Driver: That will be 300 baht
Lance: (looks at his wallet) Nah, I don't have any baht but do you mind if I pay 25 Australian dollars instead?
Taxi Driver: (gave me funny looks) Well okay..... I would say no but since you have a plane to catch and 25 bucks worth a lot of baht well I will let you go
Lance: (taking his bags out of the taxi) Thanks for the help
Lance walked inside the terminal in a bad mood..... He eventually find the check in desk, in which he checked in. Then I wondered off to immigration. I didn't really spend any time in the airport. All he really did is to go to the gate at around midnight. 9 hours later I arrived in Sydney. I walked towards immigration.
Lance: Hi.... yeah welcome to so called home
Immigration officer: Hi (check documents) Why are you in a bad mood?
Lance: Just bad things happen here.... this is why I left this country
Immigration officer: Hope it doesn't happen this time around to you. And enjoy your stay
I collected my luggage. I walked though customs. They noticed me but didn't checked anything so I briefly left the airport. I went to catch a taxi to Sydney City. After 10 minutes out of the airport I heard sirens
Lance: Fuck..... cops. What the fucking hell
Taxi driver: Not my problem (pulled over)
Cop 1: Get out of the car
Lance: (gets out of the car with hands up) jeez what do you want with me
Cop 2: Hey I'm not going to arrest you but I have some questions about the murder of Tim.... urh dunno his last name.... don't laugh just because Im a dumb cop
Cop 1: (tells taxi driver to piss off) So what happened on the day of 12/2/13?
Lance: I got up around 12pm, went to work in my bar till 5pm, then went home and relax. I didn't do anything with Tim, nor I don't know him
Cop 1: I see.... I know your not guilty of any wrong doing but just one of his friend told that you did. But we haven't checked the body so there wont be any dealing for you for a while. So you can just go off
Lance: But you shooed my taxi away. So how you can say go off without me getting a lift?
Cop 2: Erh..... my partner can be dumb sometimes... but we will give you a lift to wherever you need to go
Cop 1: Shut up.... your the dumb one (argue for a few minutes)
Lance: Uh I need to go to this address (gave the cop a sheet)
Cop 1: Okay... We go there
40 minutes later when I arrived in Chatswood..... at 3pm
Cop 1: So here the place that you were living in
Lance: Yep
Both cops knocked on the door. My friend who open the door, has brown curly hair, pasty skin, wearining a tshirt and jeans
Deinyon: Hey Lance..... how things in thailand
Lance: Hey buddy
Cop 2: Uh we were questioning him and he didnt have any car to get home so we deiced to drop him home. So yeah we will leave you 2 to be
Both cops drove off
Deinyon: Cmon in, buddy
I deiced to look around the house. I noticed Jack, who is a more pasty than Deinyon, red spiked hair and shirtless with boxers on, was getting pissed off on the phone in Deinyon old bedroom. Deinyon slept in his parents room while Deinyon gave me his computer room. Deinyon went to the bathroom so I deiced to sneak into Jack room and listing to his phone call
Nick: I told ya to pay up 5 weeks ago with the weed...... man you don't get it.... I have to do everything to stash drugs which cost me loads. You are lucky that you are alive because I don't have a hit-man to get you 2 weeks ago. Oh yeah get a job and stop wanking or I will come over and burn your porno shit
Jack: Fine, Fine.... I will pay up by coming over to your place tomorrow. And by the way don't you fucking dare destroy my porno magazines
Nick: Fuck that... come over tonight or else
Jack: Fuck no.... It my wanking night and you have 3 bitches that you take care of
Nick: Shut up about my bitches...... okay.... okay fine you can pay up tormmorow. But dont fucking wake me up before 2pm
Jack: Lazy bastard.... (hangs up, then looks at Lance) What the fuck.... who the fuck are you. And were you listing to our converstion?
Lance: Im Lance dumbwit..... remember me..... and what the hell is that??? (looks at the computer to see 2 girls getting raped by a horse) you like this shit??? and yes I was listing because Deinyon need the loo
Jack: Yeah I remember you.... and dont call me a dumbwit because im not..... and yeah I like this shit because im a foot wanker..... and STFU
Deinyon came into Jack room just to hear us 2 bickering
Deinyon: What the fuck are you arguing about??? jeez cant you 2 keep the peace
Lance: Fine..... okay let me make it up to you by us 3 going to Kings Cross later on
Jack: Fuck yesss...... foot fetish (get all dressed up)
Deinyon: We arent going to go in a few hours. So settle down
Lance phone rings
Lance: Hello
Jason: Hey.... So how was thailand
Lance: Great.... still got the van working?
Jason: Yep.... it all works, plus I added a few stuff to it
Lance: Cool.... Do you want to go to Kings Cross for a drink.... and take the van for a test drive
Jason: Yeah okay since I dont have work tormmrow
Lance: Cool.... well come to Deinyon's to pick us up
Jason: Okay cya at 7pm
Lance: (hangs up) haha that was funny, and what the fuck (glaring at Jack)
Jack came out of his bedroom. He wore a dress, a wig and high heels
Deinyon: Everytime we go to Kings Cross you dress like this, fuck
Jack: Hahaha.... that is cool
Lance: No it isnt you weed, go and get changed or I beat the fuck out of you
Deinyon: Lance has a point.....
Jack: Yea I guess so.... (goes and get changed) Much better (dressed up in a suit, minus the wig and the high heels)
Lance: Yeah I guess so
Few hours later, Jason knocked on the door
Lance: Hey
Jason: Ready for Kings Cross
Lance: Hey faggots are you ready
Both Jack and Deinyon come downstairs and all 4 people went to my car. I was driving, Jason sat next in the passanger seat and Jack and Deinyon sat in the back. After in hour of driving, finally reached Kings Cross