Story of a kidnapped girl
Hello everyone! Its Blood thirsty angel here! I Just joined a few days ago and this is the first Yugioh story I've ever written. I got my inspiration from lottilue1 and I would like to thank her for it. Please don't leave flames, just politley say you don't like it. I like constructive critisism. Sadly, I don't own Yugioh and if I did, The doma would get a season all to themselves and Tea would be with Alister or Valon.
Dartz folded his hands together, thinking hard. He needed to find a way to weaken the pharoah, but how? The pharoah was a strong man and he would do anything to save the world from total destruction. Dartz closed his eyes, still thinking and then realized something! The pharoah right now was weak! His best friend was just taken away thanks to the seal of orichalcos. This was the perfect oppoutunity to take one of his little friends! Dartz patted himself on the back, reminding himself that he would reward himself for a job well done, but first, he need to meet with his henchmen and henchslut, ahem I mean henchwoman.
"Alright, now that everyone is here, I can discuss our plan." Dartz said as he looked at his minions.
Raphael, who had his arms crossed looked at his master, eager to hear the new plans. Alister was glaring at Mai[no surprise], Valon looked eager, as usual and Mai was in a corner of the room sulking. Dartz continued on
"I want one of you to kidnap one of the pharoah's little friends."
"WHAT?" Valon shouted
Dartz nodded at him and turned to the others who didn't look very excited about the new mission. Not at all. Valon shook his head and took a step up one of the stone steps saying
"How are we going to do that boss?"
Alister smaked Valons head, rolling his eyes saying "Duh stupid, we kidnap one of them!"
Dartz ignored the fighting idiots and turned to Mai. "You were once friends with them. Wich one of them keeps order and balance?"
"Well theres Tristan Taylor, but he's a nobody, so I would say Tea."
"Tea?"
"Mhm. She's the friendship preacher and acts like the mother sometimes. The boys would be lost without her."
Dartz nodded. "Very well. Rapheal, find where the pharoah and his friend's are and take the girl. I don't care how you do it, but I want her unharmed."
Valon jumped up. "Why does he get to do it? Why not me, or Alister or even Mai!"
Dartz rolled his eyes. "Because your to hyper and you would lose track of what you were doing, therefore letting her escape. Mai is too lazy and Alsiter would get annoyed with her too quickly and he would probably rape her so she would shut up, so Raphael is the best choice."
Alister looked offended, Valon miffed while Mai looked as if she could care less. Raphael left the room, ready to start the mission. He wouldn't let anything stop him from achieving his goal. Not even the Pharaoh.
So yes the first chapter was short, but the next one is longer. It took nine pages to write it since I wanted it to turn out well. Please review!