Ok, Here's a rewrite of the first chapter because I don't like how it turned out. It seemed rushed and weird. So here's the real chapter 1. And forget everything you read if you read it, in the last chapter. Ok here are some main characters that I own.

Amber:a 12-year-old hedgehog that's a female. She is hot pink with black markings on her quills and bangs, 2 quills are down and one quill is pointed up. She has two ear rings on her right ear one gray and one black. She always wares them to.

Twilight:is a was a green 11 year-year-old hedgehog that is a female. With yellow eyes, top quill pointed up then two more pointed down. Four purple markings on her brow. And purple lines on quills and bangs over her right eye. On her arms and legs were yellow markings.

Thanks to anyone who commented on the other chapter. Oh,and before I forget here's a little contest if you're the 5th, 10th, 15th, and 20th person
BEFORE the contest ends

Amber's pov:

Right now I was tugging my suit case up the old stairs to my new school. Its name was PMS or Powers Middle School. These schools were for people who had powers and needed to control them. You mainly live there like college! Only you learn to control your powers! So far I'm learning the basic's, weapons,healing,p.e.,pet taming - what ever that is, and last is a free period. My lunch is after healing. My parents wanted me to go to a normal school but G.U.N forced them to make me go to a power training school so there's no 'accidents'. I think they just want our powers but I had to go, but hey! Its free~. I turned around to see my friend Twilight, a meet her in 5th and we actually hung out a few days ago.

Twilight: "Hey Amber! You going here to?"

"Hell yeah! What room do you have?"

Twilight: "Room 12 top floor."

"No way me to!"

Twilight:" Who ever gets their first get to choose their side of the room."

"Wha?" Then she chaos controled away with her things.

"Aw come on you know I can't chaos control without an emerald!" She practiced her chaos powers over the summer the last time I tried chaos controled without an emerald I ended up almost dyeing!

Flash back:

Twilight: "Come on chaos controlling isn't that hard!"

"But you've practiced!"

Twilight:" Just yell 'Chaos Control'."

"Ok, but if I die my spirit will kill you!"

Twilight:"Stop whining and do it."

"Ok...Chaos Control!" I opened my I eyes to see the ocean with great white sharks circling below.

"SHIT,SHIT,SHIT,SHIT! CHAOS CONTROL!" Next I appeared in the middle of a desert.

"FUCK YOU TWILIGHT!" And after being chased by a random tribe there I found a purple chaos emerald and left.

Twilight:"She it's not that bad, wait how did you get a chaos emerald?" I just walked away growling under my breath, and it turned out an hour later I lost the emerald... .EVER.

End of flash back:

And that's why I will never ever chaos control in my life. So I used one of my awesome powers.

"Chaos Shrink." Chaos shirk is when I can shrink down or grow to any size along with anything I'm wearing or holding. I looked over to see a huge spider since I'm an inch tall now...( Like in the move journey to the mysteries island how giant the spider was!)

"H-Hi dude h-hows it g-g-going?" The spider stared at me for a while till it hissed spraying spider spit everywhere.

"AHHHHH!" Everyone else around heard "SQEEEEEEEEK!" I started running for dear life. But a giant red and white shoes squished it and a white-gloved hand picked me up.

?: "Hello little person." I turned slightly in the person's grip to see emerald eyes and a blue pelt. He wore a tan shorts and a light blue t-shirt.

"Oh, hey Sonic. Can you um put me down now?"

Sonic:"Uh, yeah ok sure!" He sett me down and I grew to my normal size after whispering 'chaos shrink.'

"Thanks for the help." I said while brushing of the dust and spider spit.

Sonic:" No prob!" He said and gave me his famous smile and smirk.

"Hey before I go, do you happen to have a chaos emerald." I raised an eye brow.

Sonic:"Yeah of course! Why?"

"Cause, I need one I'll give you 10 dollars for it!"

Sonic:"Hmmmm Deal!" I laughed and caught his white chaos emerald.

Sonic:"Now where is my money." I smirked and laughed.

"But I didn't say when!"

Sonic:"What! You little! Next time I'll let the spider get you!" I laughed and I shrunk down and said after shrinking,

"Bye! Chaos control now!" I disappeared and reappeared on top of a bird that was flying over head a few minutes ago.

"Get along little birdy!" It 'cawed' and flew off to were my room was. After avoiding doors,people,walls, and bigger birds I came to my room's window. I hopped of and grabbed my chaos emerald and bag. I shrunk even smaller and slipped in the window that was barely cracked open. After growing to my normal size I looked around the walls were white, the small kichten was white, and so was the bath room. So mainly the only thing that wasn't white was the bare matters' in the room.

"Not very diverse." I walked to the bed with a desk next to it.

"Mine!" I reached into my bag and pulled out some hot pink duck tape. I wrote my name all over the tape and slapped it on the bed and desk. The tape said in black sharpie 'Amber's DO NOT TOUCH! That means you Twilight!'. I smirked and started unpacking. I almost had a heart attack when a bright flash of light appeared in the middle of the room.

Twilight: "Finally, is this the right room?"

"Yeah it is, damn you almost made me piss myself."

Twilight:"Lol what-ever. Hey you wouldn't belive what happened!"

"I belive I would."

Twilight:" Well I was chaos controlling around when I bumped some dude without a mouth ok. And he turns around cussing me out, and I said 'Chill out you bitch!'. Then I was about to kick his ass when he just disappeared into the fucken ground!"

"Wow holy skittles that sounds awesome! I want to fade into the ground!" Now that I think about that I would love to fade into the ground!

Twilight:"First off you NEVER think about that, and it you fade into the ground someone will step on you." Damn I forgot she can read minds, well I hope you read this 'FUCK YOUUUUUUUUUU!'.

Twilight:" You know, that's very rude." I was about to respond when a giant 'BANG' interrupted me. Twilight and I looked at each other than at the door and ran for it and ran out. There we saw a male hedgehog that was gray, on his left arm and right leg was a daimon like pattern that's green, purple flame patters on his right arm and left leg. He had a tan muzzle, snow-white chest fur, bangs over his left eye, he had purple eyes tinted red, and two quills pointed down with red streaks on his head and quills. He wore a black v - neck with black finger less gloves and white shorts. And he was trying to push a bed into his room right across from ours.

Twilight:"Hey dumb ass!" He spun around and smirked when he saw us.

?:" Hey ladies.~ My name's Shadnic. Whats you're's?~"

Twilight:"Like I'm telling yo -"

"I'm Amber and my friend's name is Twilight!"

Twilight:" What the fuck!"

"Sorry..."

Shadnic:" What ever dudes."

"Ummm Twilight were's the key to the room?" Twilights eye's widened slightly and she gasped'

Twilight:"We need keys!"

"YES! What! How else can we get in!"

Twilight:"Our powers!"

"It has a power lock!"

Twilight:"Wait those nice new one that activates when you close the door?"

"Yeah it's all shiny - wait! I know what you're doing! Anyway you stay here, I'll get the keys."

Twilight:" But what will I do?"

"Help Shadnic with the bed."

Twilight:"What!? You're the one with - fine! Whatever! Hurry up!"

"Kk, brb!" (brb means be right back and kk means ok. Good? Good.) I ran down the stairs avoiding people. I was running past a plant, and I didn't notice two snake-like eye's in the shadow of the plant and stepped on them.

?:"OW! Shit pink hedgehog watch out." I spun around on my heel further squashing the eye's.

?:" . !" I backed up slowly.

"Ok! Ok!" A hedgehogs in a long - sleeved black t - shirt and black pants appered from the ground rubbing his eye's. Looks like Twilight was right when she said I would be stomped on...

"Sorry man but I have to run!" I ran of again hearing him yell something about me being an ass hole, meh I'll deal with it later. I ran up to the desk snatched the key's out of the person's hands after telling them my name and room and zoomed back up the stairs.

"I'm back!" Twilight ran over to me from pushing the bed in through the door.

Twilight:"Finally!" I ran over to the bed shrunk with it and pushed it in, and then grew back to normal size along with the bed and unlocked the door and we walked in. We unpacked talked and watched a t.v show about mermaids and of they were real, then we cleaned up (not at the same time though pervs...) and went to bed. I can't wait for my first day tomorrow!

Any comments,questions,tomato's? And the ending's rushed because I'm kind of tried, and this is my longest chapter ever! I finally got off my lazy ass and made this chapter rewrite...

Amber: "Well while StarLight's patting herself on the back, I have to say *cough, cough* that's better, anyway she doesn't own Mephiles or Sonic Sega owns them! Also Twilight in this story was *drum roll* Dapplepelt! Yay! StarLight owns Shadnic and Dapplepelt does to... they share him! Any way she also owns Twilight and Amber, she doesn't own any shows and movies mentioned. She also owns this story. Done! Flew that was looooong!

Twilight:Good Bye

Amber: And

Good Night (I can't do my Christmas thing 'till next December 'cause Christmas is over but for fun!)

Good Bye

Amber: And to all

Twilight: A good night...

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( P.S. I didn't read over so there might be some mistakes but I did spell check!)