Well Hello there this is my new story it's a PeinXOC love story and I am deeply sorry if the characters are Majorly OOC. Oh Just so you know I have no own Naruto I only own this story and the OC character(s). so Please Rate and Review but no flames criticism welcome but not harsh like " just stop writing its so horrible you should stop writing" none of that please but I would love to hear what you think of my story and I would like some help so R and R. so now on with the story
I trekked through the dark Rainy woods hoping to find shelter soon. ~Why did I have to yell at her? Now I have map no guide back home. Curse my sense of direction~. I keep walking for a while yet, when I see a light off in the distance I rush towards it hoping it might be a home or at least a caravan. But what I see is not a caravan or a house but a Burning village and rogue ninja running about slaughtering the poor people I stand there frozen not knowing what I should do. "Heh heh well well well looks like we have ourselves a little stray…" a Deep gravely voice said above me. I turn and look up. ~A rogue...~ I instantly knew I was in danger but I couldn't move out of sheer terror of the scarred man above me. " Girly what is your name? Tell me." He demanded. I debated on whether to tell him or not I chose the option that would most likely not get me Hurt. " Genta My name is Genta..." I replied softly. He smiled cruelly and grabbed my arm " Genta eh? What a beautiful Name for leader-sama's new servant girl..." He told me before he knocked me out.
When I awoke I found myself on a marble floor. I looked up afraid cause I realized that the rogue wasn't a nightmare but a reality cause standing in front of me was him and another guy this one better dressed wearing black dress slacks and a leather jacket his neon orange hair falling into his silver and violet ringed eyes. " Hmm your right Kakuzu she is pretty." He said as he walked closer to me. I just sat there watching him afraid of what he might do. He brought his hand up like he was going to slap me I closed my eyes prepared for the painful sting. What came instead shocked me he was stroking my cheek with his thumb in an almost caring gesture. He stayed like that for a few minutes but then his demeanor changed. " She will make a fine Servant Take her away.." he said ripping his hand away leaving bleeding scratches on my cheek. The guy called Kakuzu started walking away pulling on the rope tied around me; I stumbled after him with one last glance at the mysterious Leader through the crack in the door.
Okay now I know that sucked. *Cries* -sigh- anyway R and R please its really easy just pushy the green button at the bottom please. *puppy eyes* if no one likes my story then I wont coninue so yeah R and R once more I ask.