I do not own anything. I decided to rewrite this story. I reread most of the reviews and noticed that people actually liked this story. I think my problem was that I was trying to write two stories at the same time. So I'm gonna focus on this one before I do anymore.
"Get away from me, Victoria!" I screamed.
"Oh? Why, my dear?" Victoria said, her voice sending shivers down my spine. Her voice sounded more like it belonged to a five year old.
"Edward will get you for this!" I yelled again. I shook with fear, but tried to hide it.
"My dear, Edward is never coming back for you." She stepped closer, smiling. Her smile was so big I could see all her teeth.
I fell back, but she caught me and as she did she brought her teeth to my throat. " Y-y-yes, h-he w-will come!" I stammered as I struggled to get away from her.
"Bella, you are not gonna get away from me, I'm a thousand times stronger than you!" She sneered at me, her teeth on my throat ready to bite me.
"NO!" I screamed louder. But she hadn't bit me, she was still holding me, not like Edward used to harder and rougher.
"Bella, I'm thinking, maybe making you a vampire would upset Edward more. So I'm gonna turn you into one of us." I could hear the smile in her voice as she sunk her teeth in my neck. As her fangs sank into my flesh I heard screaming knowing it was me. I couldn't stop as I felt the venom rush through my veins.
"Man! Bella, you scream loud! Lets get you some where you can scream and not be heard." Victoria said as she picked me up, and ran some where, I don't know was in to my pain.. I felt her set me down, but as she did my world went black.
Three days later
All I could was scream all day for the three days, of my transformation. When I 'woke up' I wasn't surprised that I was in a middle of a meadow. As I looked around I realized that I was in our meadow, Edward and mine. I cringed as I thought of his name. I could hear all the animals, the wind. I was about to smile when the past three day came back to me. I remembered that Victoria had bit me.
I was about to cry when I smelt blood, I could tell that it wasn't human, it was much sweeter. It was a moose. Before I could stop myself I was running at incredible speed, towards the moose. It just stood there, frozen. I sunk my teeth in the moose and I savored the blood. When I finished my throat stopped burning.
"Man, that was quite a show" said a booming voice behind me.
I spun around and there stood a little girl.
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