Ok this is my first poem that I've posted, so plz no FLAMES!!! Plz
review, and tell me some things you LIKED about it. So plz R/R! Sailor
Moon is one of my favorite shows that's why I write about it! Well enjoy
the poem!
It's so dark around me
I fled in fear
In a world surrounded by
Death and Hate
I saw the world
"Float to the dark side of the moon"
I saw my friend's
Death's and. my
Soul mates too
Oh, how I wish
I could make this
End
I have nothing
Left
I am all alone in
This world of war
I want to give up..
But I can't
I have always protected this
World and never gave up,
So why should I stop now?
" But you're alone this time "
A voice says
I feel like crying all over again
But I don't
I stand and walk head on into battle
The voice yells
" What are you doing? You can't win!"
"You are alone now, and you will die out there!"
I smile and say
" I have watched this go on long enough,"
" I'm not alone in this world, even though my love ones aren't here,"
" With me in this battle of good and evil,"
" They are in here."
I say as I point to my heart
" And I will fight for them, and go on for them."
" This is my true dream"
" To always do what is right, and make them proud of who I am"
" I will make sure that the memory of them will never fade"
" They live in me. giving me the strength that I need to go on."
The voice fades away
And the sky slowly starts to clear
Making the light shine more in this
World of darkness
With a new hope
As I keep going
Facing my fear..
Done! Was it good? Did ya like? PLZ TELL ME!!! REVIEW!! I'll try to write more soon. If I can find my box of poems. I will be writing a songfic soon. I'm open to suggestion. So if you want me to write a songfic, or a poem about a scout, I will!! Just ask, and I will be gladly to write one. Till next time! BYE BYE ^_^
It's so dark around me
I fled in fear
In a world surrounded by
Death and Hate
I saw the world
"Float to the dark side of the moon"
I saw my friend's
Death's and. my
Soul mates too
Oh, how I wish
I could make this
End
I have nothing
Left
I am all alone in
This world of war
I want to give up..
But I can't
I have always protected this
World and never gave up,
So why should I stop now?
" But you're alone this time "
A voice says
I feel like crying all over again
But I don't
I stand and walk head on into battle
The voice yells
" What are you doing? You can't win!"
"You are alone now, and you will die out there!"
I smile and say
" I have watched this go on long enough,"
" I'm not alone in this world, even though my love ones aren't here,"
" With me in this battle of good and evil,"
" They are in here."
I say as I point to my heart
" And I will fight for them, and go on for them."
" This is my true dream"
" To always do what is right, and make them proud of who I am"
" I will make sure that the memory of them will never fade"
" They live in me. giving me the strength that I need to go on."
The voice fades away
And the sky slowly starts to clear
Making the light shine more in this
World of darkness
With a new hope
As I keep going
Facing my fear..
Done! Was it good? Did ya like? PLZ TELL ME!!! REVIEW!! I'll try to write more soon. If I can find my box of poems. I will be writing a songfic soon. I'm open to suggestion. So if you want me to write a songfic, or a poem about a scout, I will!! Just ask, and I will be gladly to write one. Till next time! BYE BYE ^_^
