Ok, so.. if you haven't read the original one, there's no need to go and look it up. I'll just summarize it so far to where this version starts.
Summery of the original version: So, Amy's the daughter of a ruler, but their country is divided because of some rebels that are like poor. They refuse to pay taxes or whatsoever because they think that the "upper class" takes all the money for their "fun" such as parties, very expensive clothes, etc. And when Amy's father went to a meeting, he came back, but dead. Her mother was in such pain of the loss, she died as well a couple of months later. Now, Amy is by herself and has no one to her side. Except for someone. He is Sonic and they have known and liked each other for some years. Her house is taken away, because of some law. She hoped Sonic would help her, but he didn't because his parents didn't like her father. So they didn't like her. He didn't want to do this, but he was forced to. Amy now takes it the wrong way, and she finds Silver, a new friend, and he helps her find a job as a maid. Oh, and Sonic is a very high commander, so when Amy's father died, the country turned into a civil war.
And that's where we'll begin!
The Maid: Sonamy Version
Chapter 1
Hope
He looked around and his heart was sinking. How could he be so stupid? He knew his parents were bluffing.
Sonic was in his room and he laid back onto his bed. He looked at the ceiling and remembered that terrible moment.
Flashback..
There was a knock at the door. Sonic didn't bother to open it, because his servants would. That is... until he heard his father's loud deep voice.
"Sonic! Come here!"
Sonic sighed and he went to where his father was, which was near the stairs, next to the door.
"Yes?" Sonic said as he kept hearing the door being knocked.
"You are to open that door." He said in a commanding, but hushed voice.
"O...ok?"
"AND you are to say to that girl... you won't be able to see her ever again."
"What gi-"
"You know exactly who! If you don't let her go... she'll bring great problems to our family! You know what happened to her father! Let her go and shoo her away... if you do not, you will loose your position and your life."
Sonic looked at him like if he was joking.
But, his mother came in and said, "You better do it. We're not kidding. Now go! Don't you know it's rude to let a person waiting outside for too long?"
Sonic knew she was serious. She was the only person he feared. And when she said she was serious... she was.
Sonic closed his eyes and went to get the door. He really hoped it wasn't who he thought it was... but... then who else would it be?
He slowly opened the door and his face fell with disappointment.
"Oh... H-Hey Amy!" Sonic tried not to show disappointment.
"Sonic!" Amy smiled brightly, making Sonic even more guilty. Was his life really worth it?
"Sonic, I know that... this is sudden... but I was wondering if you could... if you could please let me stay here while I find some job? I'll repay you, don't worry."
Sonic just wanted to yell out yes! But he was fighting with his mind right now. Should he... let her in and risk her and his life? He knew his mother would go an get her if he let her in. He did not want Amy to get hurt.
"I...I'm sorry Amy." Sonic said slowly. He could not see her, so he closed the door... in her face.
Amy was standing out there. In shock. She started to panic and no where would she go?
Sonic was furious. Both his parents gave a smirk which made him even more mad.
"She had no where to go!" Sonic yelled.
"Oh, shut up!" His mother said while fanning herself, "She would have brought a terrible reputation to the family!"
"How!"
"Sonic!" His father roared, "You know how much I disliked her father... do you honestly think that I will accept his child?"
"You let me see her, so yeah!"
"We told you," His mother said, "Not to go.. but you just HAD to go, didn't you?"
Sonic shook his head, "I don't care anymore what you say, I'm going to find her and bring her here. If you don't want her here, then I won't be here."
Both his parents gasped, "You want to loose everything for that pink thing?"
Sonic glared at them, "Yes."
With that said, he went right out the door, ignoring their calls.
He searched all over the place. He could not find her. No where. The night was growing dark and the moon shone. He wasn't going to give up.
As time went by, he thought something must have happen to her.
He searched for her all night. The sun's early rays hit his face and he decided to go back... For he could not find her anywhere.
End-
"Where are you?" He asked himself. Suddenly, there was a knock at his door and he got up and saw that it his brother, Manic.
With Amy...
After that terrible incident of Sonic, Amy had no place to go... That is until Silver, a new friend of hers, found her. He brought her to a church with orphans, and she helped out there.
When she was looking for a job, she was tricked by some guy named Scourge and ended up in some erm bad place, but thankfully Silver was there to get her out.
With Sonic..
"Ugh... What do you want, Manic?" Sonic said.
"Just saying that... I saw your pink girlfriend~!"
"You did? Where? Where?" Sonic said getting up and holding his collar.
Manic looked at him with a raised eyebrow and said, "Let go."
Sonic let go, but with a push.
"She was at some bar thingy..."
"She was where! No... Amy would never do that."
Manic continued to tease him about Amy doing stuff like that. This was making Sonic angry. He stormed out the door, while Manic yelled at him, "Hey! Where are you going?"
"To find her!"
"Pfff... good luck! I bet she doesn't love you after you did that to her!"
Sonic stopped in his tracks and looked at him. What of he was right? He wasn't going to have doubts.. for now. If this was true.. he had to hear it from her, not his doubts.
Sonic walked out the door and went straight to where Scourge was. He burst through the doors and called for him, "Scourge!"
"What?" A voice snaps.
"What did you do to Amy?"
"Amy?" Scourge said smirking, "You mean that pink g-"
"Yes her!" Sonic said getting impatient.
"Geez what's wrong with you?" Scourge asked.
"Just. Tell. Me."
Scourge rolled his eyes and said, "She's at some church."
Without saying something else, Sonic left in a dash to the church. He rang the bell and waited impatiently.
A nun came out to answer it. "Oh, my! If it isn't Sir Sonic!"
"Um.. yeah... is Amy Rose here? You know... pink hair? The most beautiful smile ever?"
"Oh... well.. I'm sorry but... she left."
"WHAT! Where? When! With WHO!"
"Calm down, now if you could... come inside...?"
"Alright..."
Once Sonic got inside, he sat down in the office.
"Now, Miss Amy left to find a job. She thought she needed to find a job to not... try to bother us... but she has been a blessing. She left with a young man named, Silver the Hedgehog. He has been a very great help for us since he also, was an orphan here, too. So you don't have to worry about if he is going to try to harm her, because he won't."
"Where did she leave to? Is it far?"
"Well... it's something like about ten miles away from here. And it will probably take them 5-6 hours."
"Wait... what type of job is this?"
"It was some sort of a maid job. So it isn't so bad."
"Do you know where exactly?"
"I am sorry, Sir. But I don't think I should tell you any more."
"Please!"
"I'm sorry."
"Fine..." Sonic got up and left.
'None of this would have happened if I would only let her stay and not listen to the stupid things my parents said...'
With Amy...
Soon Amy and Silver got in front of the house they went to see and the door was opened. There, the one that opened the door was a white bat with aqua blue eyes, wearing a maid's outfit.
"Yes?" She questioned
"Oh, um.. I came for the job, if it isn't already taken..." Amy said shyly.
"Oh! Well, come right in, Hun." She said.
Amy looked back at Silver who said "I'll be right outside, OK?"
She nodded.
As the white bat closed the door she told Amy to stay in the waiting room. Amy looked around. She had forgotten how it felt like to be in a place like this. It had been nearly 2 months since she "lost" her mansion. But the thing that she missed the most were her parents.
She sighed and hold the heart chain necklace.
Soon the doors opened and came in a black hedgehog with red streaks.
"Oh... Erm.. Hey...?"
"Hey... Are you the owner of this house?"
"No. Do you need something?"
When Amy was about to answer, the doors opened and in came a hedgehog like the same one like the one in front of her, only much older and... fat.
"Ah! Why... finally, someone came for the job!"
"The job?" The younger hedgehog said, "You're here for the job?"
Amy nodded.
"What is you name?" The older one asked
"Amy Rose, Sir. It's a pleasure to meet you." She said reaching her hand out. The big hedgehog smiled and shook it.
"My... we really don't have any polite maids here...Well... tell me what you can do?"
"I can cook, do any chores any normal girl should learn." Amy replied smiling.
"Mmhm. Well.. I am truly sorry but... Miss Rose... you get the job!"
"Oh, thank you, sir!" Amy said happily.
"OK... now let me explain the rules... you are to wake up at exactly 6 and be ready by 6:10 for our breakfast. And Rouge will explain the rest. And to go to sleep, be at bed when we do, ok?"
"Yes, Sir. And thank you."
"Oh, and one more thing. Call me Mr. Bulldozer."
"Mr. Bulldozer?" Amy questioned.
"JK. It's Mr. Stevens. That's my middle name."
"Alright."
"Ok, now."
Mr. Stevens called for the white bat, whose name was Rouge.
"Rouge, will explain it to you. Ok?"
Amy nodded and turned to Rouge who smiling.
"So, you got the job?" She smiled.
"Yes, Um... may I please go outside to tell my-"
"Boyfriend? Sure."
"Oh, no, he's not my boyfriend. He's just a friend."
"O'really?" Rouge teased.
Amy giggled and ran up to the door.
"Silver! I got it! I got the job!"
"Really! That's amazing! I told you, you could. Did... did you say your full name?" Silver whispered the last part.
Amy shook her head.
"I... I gotta go then, Amy. Make sure to keep your job, right? Well... Goodbye... for now."
"Goodbye Silver... And thank you for everything." Amy hugged him tightly. And he hugged back. Soon, he left and Rouge brought her inside.
Rouge brought Amy to the kitchen.
"Nice, isn't it? The kitchen I mean." Rouge said as she leaned on a counter.
"It's alright, I guess." Amy said looking out the window.
"What? You've seen better? Where? I just couldn't imagine that!"
"Hm? Oh, um... yes?"
"Whoa!"
Then, some more maids came in. It was a purple cat and a cream colored rabbit.
"Hey, girls!" Rouge said. "We got a new one!"
"Really? That's great!" The purple cat said.
"OK!" Rouge said putting her hands up. "Let us all introduce ourselves. I'm Rouge... as you may already know. The purple one is Blaze and the cream one is... well Cream!"
"Hello! I'm Amy Rose!" Amy smiled putting her hand forward. Everyone shook it.
"Well... it's almost lunch time." Cream said looking up at the grandfather clock.
"You're right!" Rouge said. "But I still got to do some laundry! So who will... cook?"
"Oh, I could!" Amy said cheerfully
"You sure?" Blaze asked.
"Yep! Don't worry about it!"
Later...
"Amy! This soup is wonderful!" Blaze exclaimed
The owners already ate.
"Thanks..." Amy said smiling.
"You better teach us how to make this!" Rouge said
"Or... I'll have to poke you forever!" Cream teased.
Amy giggled and said, "Alright."
The night had come and Amy would stay where the other maids would be, in a room.
"Ok, this will be your new bed! It's next to mine and the window!" Blaze said.
"Thank-you." She looked around, nothing fancy but good.
They got all ready to sleep but Amy decided to go outside.
She went outside in the large backyard and sat down on the grass, making sure her dress wasn't showing anything. She looked up at the stars.
"Mother... Father... I know you are looking at me. I...I'm sorry I wasn't strong enough. I feel it was my fault all of this happened. I should have been there for you mother, more often. I did try my best... please forgive me if I ever did anything wrong, father and you too, mother. I-"
"What are you doing here?" Someone said. Amy was crying softly and looked up at the person who was the younger hedgehog.
"I-I" She quickly wiped the tears away, lucky he didn't see it... or did he?
"Are you alright?"
"Erm.. yeah.. sorry about that."
"Hey I think I never told you my name. I'm Shadow."
"Oh, I'm Amy."
This Shadow smiled to Amy... but it really wasn't really.. a smile. It was more of a... "evil smile" yet not.
Guys! I'm sorry for not doing this "version" faster than I promised. Ok, so I guess you've noticed that Shadow is "nice" but trust me sonamy luvas... this is NOT a shadamy! Repeat... NOT a shadamy! I didn't want to retype what I did, so I copy and paste it. (wow lol) And I changed stuff around.
And I'm super sorry If it's confusing! It will only in this chap (hopefully)
And I actually HATE this first chap! It's sooo rushed! And I apologize~! I will have to get use to this! So PLEASE have patience! :) Thanks and I'll shut up X)
