A/N : It's my first story. at first this story was a one shot, but this story will too long for one shot so i decide to put this story to 3 chapter, at least. This story mostly about Susan and Peter and slightly Edmund and Lucy, but no incest they aren't related. English isn't my first language so i'm sorry if you found some error grammar. just tell me and i'll make sure to correct it.
"Ed, are we going to Susan's house now?" I ask Edmund.
He promised to me that he'd come with me to visit Susan, our new neighbor. She moved here last week. First time I saw her, I knew we'll be a good friend even she's much older than me. And it's true, I often come to her house to visit her and she's very welcome to me. She's very gentle, caring and everybody loved her. She's kind of perfect sister to me, even sometimes she's too bossy and too sensible. I told Edmund about her, and he said that he want to meet her someday. And today is the day, I won't let Edmund say no this time, so I beg and wear my puppy eyes, I know he can't say no.
"Okay Lu, I give up. I come with you." HA! I told you he can't say no.
"Good, now let's go!" I pulled Edmund and go to Susan's house
Susan's house not very far from my house, actually her house is very close to my house. It only one house away from my house. Susan's house not very different with others houses, neither my house. That's because we live in an estate. But her house looks more comfortable, not more comfortable than my house of course but the atmosphere in her house makes me wanna spend many hours in her house. My favourite place in her house is her garden; she has a beautiful garden where she plants many colorful flowers. When we arrive in her house, I ring the bell and hear an answer from the other side of the door.
"I'm coming." She says.
And several moments later a beautiful woman in middle twenty opens the door, she has raven hair and light blue eyes, I'm sure everybody will get lost in her eyes and I guess Edmund get lost in her eyes. He doesn't blink since Susan opened the door. I pinch him to wake him up, and it works. I hear him say something that shows him hurt.
"oh hey Lu and ..." She pause
"Edmund, he's my best friend. I already told you that today I'll come with my friend, right?" I explain
"I'm sorry Edmund I barely saw you, come in! We talk inside." Susan says with her smile
Susan doesn't bring us to her living room, she bring us to her library instead. She knew I like her library better than her living room. I don't say her living room isn't good; no it's very comfortable, but her library is my favourite place in this house beside her garden.
"So, how long you know each other?" Susan asks us when we are in her library.
"Well, we know each other since I was seven." I tell her, wow I barely aware that Edmund and I are best friend for seven years until now, that's really a long time.
"Wow, that's really long time. You know what, you remind me with a story." She said dreamily
"Is that a fairytale?" I ask her hopefully, what can I say? I love fairytale
"Oh, don't say yes please. Anything but don't fairytale." Edmund says, groaning.
"Actually it's more romance I think. Is that okay for you guys?" she asks us, smiling.
"Not really. But that's better than fairytale" I glare at him, how dare he? Fairytale is the best story EVER! "Is that okay for you Lu?" she asks me once again
"I love fairytale, but romance is good." I answer her with my smile
"Okay, here we go"
Little Susan woke up this morning happily. She waited this day since last week. This day, she would meet her new neighbor, Pevensie family. Pevensies family were her parent's old friend, they were close friend but they moved to Finchley, and her parents were staying in London. Her parents said that the Pevensies were good and kind, she would like them. So, Susan got ready with her best. She wore her best summer dress, she want to look perfect. When she almost ready, she heard her mother called her from downstairs
"Susan, are you ready?"
"Almost, wait a second, mom!" she quickly combed her raven hair and went downstairs.
Her mother rang the bell and several moments later a woman opened the door. She was in the early thirty just like her mother. She had light brown hair and blue eyes, she looked pretty. When she saw them, she squealed.
"Oh my gosh. HELEN! How are you?" she asked Susan's mother excitedly
"Fine. how about you?" Helen answered her as excited as her as she hugged her
"Good. Hey James how are you?" and she asked Susan's father when she saw him and hugged him
"As good as you, Rachel." James hugged her backed, smiling.
"And who is this little girl?" she asked Susan kindly
"My name is Susan, Ms. Pevensie." She answered her politely
"Aw, you're little girl is very cute. But Susan just calls me Rachel! Come in! Jeremy and peter are in the backyard." She invited them in
Rachel brings them to her backyard, where a boy and a man were playing. The man looked a year older or more than Rachel. He had light brown hair just like Rachel but darker and dark blue eyes, he looked kind, Susan assumed he was Rachel's husband. And the boy had Rachel's hair and Rachel's blue eyes, but looked a lot like Jeremy, he must be their son, Susan hoped they would be a good friend. The man and the boy came toward them and the man was smiling when he saw her family.
"Hey Helen, hey James. Long time no see." He said just as excited as her wife
"Hey Jeremy!" James shook his hand, smiling
"Is that your son Jeremy? Wow he looks a lot like you Jeremy." Helen said, was she forget that Susan looked a lot like her?
"what can I say? He's my son." Jeremy said as he hugged her
"Peter this is James and Helen and…" he stopped when he aware he didn't know Susan's name
"Susan" Rachel told him Susan's name
"yap, and Susan. James, Helen, Susan this is Peter" he introduced Peter
"nice to meet you Peter." Susan said as she reached out her hand to shake peter's hand
"Nice to meet you too." peter said but he didn't reach out his hand to shake Susan's hand instead, he came to his father. How rude he was. Susan only wants to be friendly, and he didn't even shook her hand back? He was the only member of Pevensie family she didn't like.
"dad, can we play now?" he asked Jeremy
"I'm sorry Peter, but can we play another time? I barely saw my friends again; beside we can play with Jeremy too later. He's very good at football." Peter sighed the only thing he wanna do today was playing with his father.
Susan saw Peter went to a tree house and she didn't know what to do, so she followed him. The tree house wasn't very big but for the Pevensies. There were two windows and when Susan looked inside she fell in love with that place. The tree house likes a mini house, and she was sure she'd love to live there. The tree house looked very comfortable, and would be a great place for her when she read her books. her daydream shattered when she heard someone was shouting to her
"Why did you follow me?" Peter asked her unkindly
"I don't know what to do. My parents and yours are talking and I don't understand what they're talking about." Susan answered unkindly, just like Peter asked her. He was the only Pevensie she didn't like, after all.
"Just go. I wanna be alone now." He said, with the same toned
"Why you got to be so mean?" she asked him angrily "Did I do something wrong?"
"Yes you did. You ruined my day with my dad." He snapped
"I'm sorry" she said, not sounding like she really sorry "but I don't know. I just wanna visit my parent's old friend."
"I'm sorry, usually I'm not grumpy. I just disappointed because I can't spend my time with my dad. When we were in Finchley we couldn't spend many times together because he was very busy. When we move, he promised he'd spend more times together with me." He apologized
Hearing his apology made her angry disappeared, she was very gentle and his apology melts her heart. She only wished they would be friend after this. She wants to know him better, the real Peter not the grumpy version.
her hope granted and they got closer. Susan came to Peter's house more often, usually they were playing in their favourite place, the tree house in the backyard tree. Peter shared that place for both of them. Seeing their child got closer, Jeremy and James made a joke about Susan and Peter. They were wondering that someday, when they grow up they would fall in love. Hearing their husband joke, Rachel and Helen only smiled and rolled their eyes
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