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Chapter One
Max and Liz are sleeping in their bed and Liz wakes to see her stomach glowing. Liz knew that she was pregnant. One night Liz made sure Max was sleeping and then packed some things and then left. Before she left she whispered I love you Max. She hoped that he knew that. Liz was leaving everything and everyone behind. She didn't leave any letters saying that she was pregnant or why she had to leave.
Liz took a bus to Boston and change her name so none of her friends can find her their. Liz was starting a new life. It didn't include her friends or her husband and family.
The next morning Max woke up and looked for Liz. But he couldn't find her anywhere in the house. Max saw Liz cell phone. Max started to get really worried about her.
So Max called his friends over and the came within ten to fifteen minutes. Once they were all their. Max asked if anyone has seen her. They all said no.
That when Maria realized that Liz had left without leaving them any clues. Then Maria said something about Liz visions lately.
Isabel said I didn't know she still gets them. The rest them said the same thing. Maria was surprised Max didn't know. She usually tells Max everything. Wired
Max said Maria tell us about the visions. Maria said Max I don't really know anything about them. She just told me they start up again. The question is Maria said. Why wouldn't she tell Max about them? I don't know.
In the meantime Isabel is trying to dream walk her to see where she is going. But Liz blocked her out. Isabel said Max where ever she is she doesn't want us to know.
Why?
Liz is in Boston now! She goes to a hotel and pay's for the room and then goes to the room. She sits down and then talks to the baby. She said that she would protect the baby and that your daddy loves you. Your dad loves you even though he can't be here right now. She said I won't let anything happen to you or your dad.
The Liz goes out to the balcony and sits in the chair and start writing in her journal. I'm Liz Evans today I left everyone I love behind. Today I start a new life. I'm going to rays a baby on my own. I'm going to start going to college here and make new friends. I'm going to miss the life I was happy in. I'm going to miss my husband the most. No one knows how hard it was for me to my decision to leave Roswell.
It's even harder because I'm going to have a baby and no one in my past life knows. Not even my best friend or my husband. But I hope one day I can go back to my home. I always thought that when I had a baby that my friends and family would be around. But they can't because when I'm around right now their in danger.
I'm Liz Evans goodnight dairy.
Then Liz goes to bed.
Back in Roswell everyone tries to deal with Liz gone. Max and Maria are having the hardest time dealing with it. The next day everyone goes on like nothing happen. Around lunch Max came into the crash down and sat in his usually spot.
Maria Max says. Yeah Max what's up? Have you heard from her? NO Max I have heard from her. Hope she is ok Maria said to Max. Yeah.
Kyle and Alex and the rest the gang made it to the table. Max how are you holding up? Fine for now I just wish she would come back to us. Kyle said I know and then Tess and then Isabel Michael Alex Maria said it. Isabel asked if anyone told her parents. No Max said. What am I suppost to say?
Please I need feed back .
Chapter One
Max and Liz are sleeping in their bed and Liz wakes to see her stomach glowing. Liz knew that she was pregnant. One night Liz made sure Max was sleeping and then packed some things and then left. Before she left she whispered I love you Max. She hoped that he knew that. Liz was leaving everything and everyone behind. She didn't leave any letters saying that she was pregnant or why she had to leave.
Liz took a bus to Boston and change her name so none of her friends can find her their. Liz was starting a new life. It didn't include her friends or her husband and family.
The next morning Max woke up and looked for Liz. But he couldn't find her anywhere in the house. Max saw Liz cell phone. Max started to get really worried about her.
So Max called his friends over and the came within ten to fifteen minutes. Once they were all their. Max asked if anyone has seen her. They all said no.
That when Maria realized that Liz had left without leaving them any clues. Then Maria said something about Liz visions lately.
Isabel said I didn't know she still gets them. The rest them said the same thing. Maria was surprised Max didn't know. She usually tells Max everything. Wired
Max said Maria tell us about the visions. Maria said Max I don't really know anything about them. She just told me they start up again. The question is Maria said. Why wouldn't she tell Max about them? I don't know.
In the meantime Isabel is trying to dream walk her to see where she is going. But Liz blocked her out. Isabel said Max where ever she is she doesn't want us to know.
Why?
Liz is in Boston now! She goes to a hotel and pay's for the room and then goes to the room. She sits down and then talks to the baby. She said that she would protect the baby and that your daddy loves you. Your dad loves you even though he can't be here right now. She said I won't let anything happen to you or your dad.
The Liz goes out to the balcony and sits in the chair and start writing in her journal. I'm Liz Evans today I left everyone I love behind. Today I start a new life. I'm going to rays a baby on my own. I'm going to start going to college here and make new friends. I'm going to miss the life I was happy in. I'm going to miss my husband the most. No one knows how hard it was for me to my decision to leave Roswell.
It's even harder because I'm going to have a baby and no one in my past life knows. Not even my best friend or my husband. But I hope one day I can go back to my home. I always thought that when I had a baby that my friends and family would be around. But they can't because when I'm around right now their in danger.
I'm Liz Evans goodnight dairy.
Then Liz goes to bed.
Back in Roswell everyone tries to deal with Liz gone. Max and Maria are having the hardest time dealing with it. The next day everyone goes on like nothing happen. Around lunch Max came into the crash down and sat in his usually spot.
Maria Max says. Yeah Max what's up? Have you heard from her? NO Max I have heard from her. Hope she is ok Maria said to Max. Yeah.
Kyle and Alex and the rest the gang made it to the table. Max how are you holding up? Fine for now I just wish she would come back to us. Kyle said I know and then Tess and then Isabel Michael Alex Maria said it. Isabel asked if anyone told her parents. No Max said. What am I suppost to say?