This is my first story I'm publishing. It is my original work, and I own the characters, plot, ect. Most of the book is already written, so I can't take any suggestions. The prologue is an excerpt from much later in the book, kind of just like a preview. More is coming soon! :) Hope you like it. Comment please (that includes constructive criticism that will be greatly appreciated).
-J
PROLOGUE
I knocked on the door four houses down from mine. As I waited for an answer, I couldn't help but think about what I had done. I was officially a horrible person. I cheated with my sister's boyfriend, and I didn't know if I could live that down. I wasn't sure if she knew yet, or if she could forgive me. I wouldn't.
But I still didn't know which was worse – knowing that I had caused the pain that my twin sister had (or had yet) to take, or having fallen for a guy I thought was infinitely different but turned out to be exactly the same as all the rest. A combination of guilt, anger, and humiliation that words just can't describe bore into me, and I had no one to blame but myself. I became impatient and started knocking again. Would he ever come out?
The cold wind surrounded me. It shook me inside. It was only early November and very well could have been snowing outside (crazy Indiana weather), but I had never felt more cold or alone than now.
That was, until the door swung open.