Well this is the Prolog to a warrior cat story Rise of Raven clan! Now this story will be on halt for a month or maybe a few weeks, it depends, I'm really busy with my other stories...anyway enjoy!
My breath shuddered, I could barely feel my pelt, blood pooled around me fecks dotting the snow. I was weak, skinny, and starving. We have raised only to fall. Why, why hadn't Star clan told us, why? Pain prickled my pelt, I had started as, what the forest clans had called a 'Kitty pelt'. Now, now my clan fades they fade like the shadow in the light.
A yowl ripped the air the air, oh why must we suffer so. For moons we have survived, we could be alive well if we hadn't been chased away! The mountains, I yowled out loud, we accepted them, we taught them our ways! I forced myself to stand up, my legs shacking. I couldn't see the left side of my camp, for that eye was blind. My eye sight lost in battle, those cowardly invaders! More like foxes than warriors.
I yowled out a long sorrow filled cry, no one responded to my cry, I shook falling. I was a failure, my mother warned me, oh yes, she warned me that I wouldn't make it being something as silly as a warrior.
My mate, he, he had fallen to his death, such a terrifying yowl. My kits, gone swept away. My wings were once silky, silky as the a lack's calm surface before I could over power any clan, any cat. Now one lay limp, the edges of my wings clipped. The other was ripped straight from my back, the traders leader torn it from my back killing many of use then they ran off, claiming there own clan territories and living as there own clan.
"Ravenstar! Ravenstar!" I heard my name, oh yes, I did not respond to those traders, there horrid leader tore my wing from my back. I launched up trying to claw there eye's only to see that they were 4 fox lengths away. There eye's showed fear, there leader lead them here.
"Have," I coughed blood dripping from the corners of my mouth "Have you come to laugh at us!"
"We've only seen you." They hissed and I hissed back, but it was barely audible. It was true I had only seen myself in these few hours. Oh Star clan, have you forgotten us? "Why don't you die so we can have your land?" I turned my one good eye to the insolent apprentice, there leader hushed them with a tail to there mouth.
"Though your territory will prove useful, our prey if slightly scarce." There patrol crouched circling me, there leader snarled pouncing, and aiming for my neck. I watched, I was done, my clan had fallen, and all hope was lost in the stars, oh Star clan did you forget about us? She luggend easly nocking to me to the floor, she ripped a chunk of my neck out, snarling. I laid there, feeling this word fade...
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I woke up, I had never felt such pain before my neck bled out again.
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I was whimpering, I wanted this to stop.
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I couldn't see straight they stood there, watching, there eye's glinting with pride.
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Why Star clan? Save me, only its to late.
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Were did I go wrong, when this began I had nothing to lose.
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I should have lessoned to mother
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I see my mate and my kits
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I remember, with glossy eye's, how Raven clan rised and fell from greatness.
This is the
Rise of Raven clan.
"Momma?"
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