Chapter 1- angst
A/N- please don't try to place this or try to make any sense of the occurrences because this does not follow any storyline or timeline.
Summary- When Al showed up at the Rockbell's bleeding, Winry knew two things. That Edward had succeeded and that something went terribly wrong.
"Alphonse" yelled Winry. Al was covered in blood, and it was quite noticeably his own. He was wearing his brother's red coat, fastened around his waist in order to conceal his nakedness. Winry hustled to catch him as he began to fall. Pinako was also at his side in an instant. "Alphonse, what happened!?" she yelled. this time receiving a response.
"We….we began the…..transmutation……..everything was going accord…ing to plan…..but……." His eyes began to close. Winry shook him.
"No, Al! What happened!? Where's Ed!?" Al's eyes flew open, for a while he seemed coherent.
"The homunculi….they attacked us…..they….they've hurt brother….he needs…he needs help…"
"Where is he?" Asked Pinako. He voice was firm. It had to be in order to pierce Al's waning consciousness.
"At…At our old ….house….." Al's eyes drifted shut. His body went limp. Pinako gave Winry a foreboding glance as they both stared out into the storm from whence Al had immerged.
A/N- ok so that's chapter 1….whatcha think…..will take any reviews your willing to give.