READ ME!!: okay, I wrote this more that a year ago. The grammar and spelling sucks I know. Quizilla basically died so I have to post EVERYTHING on here now T.T If you can make it through the first chapter, I guarantee the others are much better! And yea, I've improved my writing a lot over the past year.
You're name is Kentana, you're a cat Demon and u live with your sister who is 8 years older than you. You're 14 and she's 22. You have light purple hair and green eyes. You're a/b 5'6 and You're sis is a/b 6 foot. You two live in a village that never really accepted u. they just let u stay there so u wont kill them. However there were some people in town that were ur friends. Ur sister, Suki, was betrothed to be married next spring. all u had were ur friends, there wasnt really a guy around that liked u more than a friend. But u didnt mind. Now to start with the real storyfinally!!
"Kentana! wait up!" u heard ur friend Yumi yell as u headed to the forest. "Oh, hey Yumi. What's wrong?" U asked. "oh, nothin except for the fact that the elders have a task for u. They told me to come find u."She answered. I rolled my eyes. the elders r the reason most people here hate me.They say Im a no good demon that will bring nothin but trouble. "They need my help? I respectfully tell them to shove it up their as," I said. Yumi smiled and said, "Well they were goin to send u somewhere I think," she said. "probably they're gonna try and send me to hell," I said. "oh, just come see what they want," she said sternly.
"grrr... fine. But if they put Holy water on me again I swear I'll kill them," I said. She nodded and pulled me past all the shops and to the house of Elders. I walked up the stone steps and entered. I was hit with the strong scent of insence.'it stings my nose' I thought. "Ah kentana ur here," 1 of them said. "what the hell do u guys want?" I asked readying my claws. "No need to be hostile," an old man said anxsoisly(sp). I sighed "then wat do u need of me?" "The preistess got a reaading that a very powerful demon would come through here in a couple years to wipe out the entire village," they said. "and this means what to me?" I said.
"We can make u human," one said. "Y would I want to trade my demon body for a weak human one?" I said. "Do u want ur sister to get maried next spring?" one asked as a crooked smile spread across his face. I scowled. "What do u need me to do?" I mummbled(SP). "We need u to find this man and make sure he doesn't come our way," the elder said. "Ok fine, When is he coming?" I asked. "We dont know , that's why we need u to find him and stay there with him so he wont come and destroy our village."
"But that means..." I trailed off. "U will have to stay out of th evillage, yes," another elder said. "B-But, all my friends r here. And I dont even know where to find this guy!" I was starting to yell a bit. "We have a map," they said handing me a scroll. I sighed and asked "can I at least know his name?" "Lord Sesshomaru," an elder said. "It's important u leave as soon as possible." "Fine." I said. I turned to leave and then I asked "And I'll never came back?" "no," they answered. "Good," I said and turned around and cut one of the elders throats.
"1 of ur lives for leavin mine." and I walked out. Tears formed in my eyes as the reality of the situation hit me. I have to leave everyone behind. Even Suki! I thought. I began to cry harder and ran back to the house. Suki was a sleep. It was pretty late. I cried silently and packed my bag. I left a letter telling her that I left so she could get married and to save the village. I swung my sword on my back and hid daggers in my pockets and shoes. I took 1 last look at my house and left. I walked for a few hours along the river since the map told me as long as I followed it, the castle would be in plain sight. then it started to rain. Did I mention I hate water? I kept running along the river until I saw some lights in the distance. I 'm here already? I thought.I had only been walking for a/b 5 hours. he's closer to the village than I thought.
AS I got closer a huge castle loomed above me. There was no gait or doorbell but a big brass knocker. I knocked 3 times and the door and it creaked open. "Whatis it that u need?" Said a small girl's voice. "I need to get shelter from this rain and I was sent by the Elders of the village not far fro here," I said. I was soaked through. A little girl no more than 8 let me through the door. "Thanks," I said. "Lord Sesshomaru!! We have a visitor!" the girl shouted. "We need a towel!" I smiled. This little human child was so sweet.
Then I see a tall majorly HOT dog demon walk out of one of the hallways with a beige towel. He handed it to me. He such great face markings. 2 maroon stripes on each cheek and a blue moon on his forehead just beneath his long silver hair. "U must be Kentana," He said. I straightened up in suprise. "How do u know my name?" I asked. "The elders of that pathetic little village told me that they would send a cat demon my way." he said. "Ur no gonna attack the village anytime soon r u?" I asked. He frowned "Where did u get that idea?"he asked. My blood began to boil. "Those bastards, they lied to me. They knew I would only leave if my sister could get married." I said angrily. aparently I had a dangerous arau coming from me cuz Sesshomaru took 2 steps back. I yawned.
"U can kill them tomorrow, for now u really need to get dry." Sesshomaru said. I took off my bag. "Damn, All my clothes r soaked," I said. "Go and take a bath, I'll see if I can get then dry," He said. "rin, will u take her to the bath room?" He asked. the little girl Im guessing was Rin nodded and signaled for me to follow. The water was Already there and heated. I stripped and soaked in the water. Those stupid elders, Im gonna kill them when I get back.