Disclaimer: I'm not own Bleach it's all Kubo Tite's
Warning: I'm not a good English writer x.x it's my first time to write in English and I'm sure, I have done many, many mistakes
I'm sorry for that, but I hope you understand what I want to say and you maybe can give me help to do it better next time (x.x I really don't know how I should say 'Tipp geben' in English)
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Rain fell down from the cloud-overcast sky.
Soaked his clothes, his hair and he must blinking, when the raindrops fell in his eyes.
He can't move, his whole body hurts, like it would burn.
He doesn't know why.
He doesn't know why he was lying here.
He doesn't know why it's rain.
He doesn't remember anything.
All was a great black hole, what take everything away which was in its way.
He doesn't know who he was; he doesn't know his name, his birth or his past.
Was he living at all?
And
when not, why hurt everything like hell?
Finishing the death not
all the pain?
Was the maybe not death?
But
why hurt his whole body?
What was happen?
He was cold, icy, was he going to die now?
His eyes were heavy; he only wants to sleep now, nothing more.
Only sleep.
Suddenly, the rain stops.
He blinked confuse and look up to the sky.
A man with an umbrella stand there, he looks up to him.
"Yo."
He was blinking one more time.
Who
was that? Why was he thing he knows that man?
"You look really,
really bad. Who are you at all?"
The man looked at him with narrowed eyes.
Who he was? He doesn't know it himself.
"Ah, I See."
Now the man looks directly in his eyes.
He knows? What?
He feels when the man takes one of his hands to his neck.
Was he going to kill him?
"Your pulse is like nothing."
Was that so? Could he going to die than?
"Don't worry, I would help you", the man whispered.
He smiles a little.
The man should do what he wants, he was not interest.
He closes his eyes and his head feel to the side.
He doesn't notice when he was pulled up. He doesn't notice anything.
He was felt in a deep unconsciousness.
TBC…
Yeah… I hate it
It was to short ;o;
Maybe I shouldn't post it hear?
Damn it!
I can't write in English *sigh* but I hope the idea was good
Should I write one more Chapter? Or not?
Say it please T_T
Kalzifar
(Zum Teufel damit! Ich kann einfach kein ENGLISCH *mit armen fuchtel* gut das des jetzt (hoffentlich) kaum einer lessen kann ;o;)