Here is the first chapter of this story. The chapter is meant to be short.
Be harsh if its needed.
TMNT
Title:
You Can't Take My Pain Away
Summary: During a fight with a new gang, one of the turtles badly injured. Can the turtles fight this new gang?
Chapter 1: New Gang
In
a stolen and unused warehouse about twenty or so gang members stood,
shouting madly at their leader who stood on top of a pedestal
surrounded by bodyguards. Their
leader, who wore a mask over the face to hide any distinguishing
physical and facial features, leader then raised a hand up to silence
the restlessness and the shouting of the gang members.
"Calm yourselves, my brothers and sisters. Tonight we shall make our move against the city and those wretched freaks of nature."
"How?!"
"Simple, one of them will soon be here. And then you or at least 20-30 of you can get the drop on him as planned."
With that having been said, their leader left with the bodyguards and the gang members moved into their assigned positions. The Red Thorns would rise above the other gangs and soon the city would fall as well.
Suddenly there was movement on the on the roof and an already battered and bruised turtle fell through a hole that was in the roof and hit the floor. One of his weapons hit the floor somewhere near his position and the other one lay forgotten on the roof with his shell cell.
Then the gang members started to converge on the injured turtle and started to beat him up ruthlessly.
