The Phoenix
Authors Note-.. I don't own Naruto, If i did I wouldn't be writing a fan fiction about it. I promise. However the current OC's are soooo mine and there are a few more to come. This is my first fan fiction so enjoy. Of Course I'm open to critque's and what not. But please if you try making suggestions to the story line ill prob just go the opposite direction unless... its really good ..O.K. Enjoy the story!!
O yea... This Story is roughly 10 years after the beginning of shippuden so the Rookie 9 and such are in their Mid-upper Twenties..Ok enjoy
Chapter 1: Ashes
Emptiness… was the only word that could describe how the young boy felt as he gazed upon the smoldering ruins. The once rich valley was now nothing more than a scorched crater. It was only sunset though it could've been mistake as night. Pillars of dark smoke stretched towards the blackened sky as the last remainders of the boy's village burned to the ground. His every breath seemed to be labored as he struggled to maintain his composure. He stood their frozen in place, unable to take his onyx eyes away from the scene. Millions of questions rushed through his head and it was all that the young Genin could do just to hold back the tears. Everything was gone; He knew he would not have to look for his family. The genin had seen devastation like this before, such was not uncommon during these days of war. Although he never believed that such evil would reach him. He kneeled down and scooped up a handful of ashes in a gloved hand, and slowly let it slip though his fingers, imagining every last particle of ash as a ninja he would unleash his vengeance on. The boy stood again and took one last glance upon his home. As he put to rest his memories a cold feminine voice inside of him spoke, "They'll pay, and we'll end this War on our own I Promise."The boy flashed and empty smile as he turned to his two squad members, they were the last ninjas of the Hidden Sun Village.
"I know, believe me I know," the genin replied. The two other genin showed know sign of surprise that he was talking with "himself", instead they turned around and disappeared into the darkness of the forest. He squeezed his left hand again, in it was forehead protector. He stared at the symbol on it, etching Konoha's symbol into his mind before crushing the metal protector in one gloved hand. With that, "The Sun's Phoenix" followed his teammates into the darkness.
First Chap I know it was super short but its really just serves to kick things off in dramatic fashion, hope it worked..Please leave reviews