Okay I'm new to fan fiction but I'll do my best to do good work
Typical story max has to move to Arizona were she meet's the town playboy fang will sparks fly or will they crash and burn.
Let me introduce myself, my name is maximum ride aka max I'm fifteen years old, I have brown hair with blonde streaks and brown eyes, I live with my thirteen year old sister Ella who's the exact opposite of me very social and friendly, and my mom who's a vet and makes amazing cookies recently she told us we would be moving to Arizona, what never heard of it? That's because it in the middle of freakin' nowhere! (No offense to people in Arizona) we're moving tomorrow, so I've just finished packing and I hear my mother shriek so now I've got to go downstairs.
"Max did you put all the washing in the machine without separating it?" my mom asked, what an odd question I thought "err yeah" I said uncertainly then added "why?" my mom sighed "well max because you didn't separate the washing we all now have pink clothes including you!" (This happened to me once lol) my mom shouted, and my mom never shouts so it must be bad, "huh" came my eloquent response, my mom held up my formally white running shirt, and I have to say I practically fainted it was bright pink and in case you were wondering I hate pink and this wasn't just any pink, no this was the most pukatronic girlish pink I have ever encountered " I need some new clothes" I said numbly "oh no max you are going to have to wait I haven't the money to buy you more clothes just because you refuse to listen, now get to bed we have an early start tomorrow" she answered her tone dismissive I sighed and went upstairs tomorrow was going to be a long day.
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