"Talking and jutsus"
thoughts
Two figures walk to the gates of konoha "halt what are your names and what is your business here?" asked one of the gate guards" my name is jiraiya and this is my student naruto hiroshi"said jiraiya with a big smile " oh yes sorry jiraiya-sama" said one of the guards as he bowed is that kid really a chi hokousha(blood walker) thought the guards " enough chit chat let go already" said naruto in a mature voice." alright gaki lets go see tsunade-hime" said jiraiya with a grin "ok" said naruto,if you take a look at naruto he has changed greatly he grew from 4'9 to 6'5,his eyes were blue with a tint of red , and he had big muscles but you couldn't see his face because he had a black mask on with red streaks going down the sides of the mask under the eyes like he was crying tears of blood,he was wearing a long black sleeve shirt on that had " once lost is now returned" on the front, he had black and red cargo pants on and his hair that was once blonde was now blood red with a few blonde spikes in it. They reached the tower" you remember the plan ero-otooji?" asked naruto with a grin on his face"yes i remember gaki" said jiraiya as they reached the door to the hokage's room
Inside the hokage"s room
the konoha tweleve minus one(naruto),gai,kurenai,kakashi,asuma were standing infront of the godaime hokage "TSUNADE-OBAASAN THE NUMBER ONE RETARDED NINJA HAS RETURNED" yelled naruto "nar..naruto?" asked a surpirsed tsunade " GAKI i told you not to call yourself a retard" yelled jiraiya as he smashed his fist on naruto's head, when jiraiya's fist connected to naruto's head he exploded into a mass of blood " AHHHHHH HE MADE NARUTO EXPLODE INTO A MASS OF BLOOD" screamed ino. Then they heard someone laughing " you think that ero-otooji could kill me" said the voice that had no emotions" naruto please come out" said tsunade "ok" said the voice and from the puddle of blood a figure arose and waved at some of his freinds "naruto your back" said tsunade as he ran up and hugged him" its nice to see you again" said naruto with a voice that had no emotion "naruto please remove your mask so we can see your face" said tsunade "no" said naruto" naruto uzumaki i order you as your hokage to remove your mask" ordered tsunade "fine" said naruto as he removed his mask. Everybody saw naruto's face in five years(hehe i made him be on the trip longer) naruto's face had a long scar over the right side of his mouth and he had an x scar over his right eye " and if your going to call me use my real last name not that stupid uzumaki name" said naruto "ok what is your real last name?" asked a confused tsunade " my name is naruto hiroshi the last and true heir of the hiroshi clan" said naruto "WHAT!!!! your the last of the chi hokousha"yelled everybody"naruto just nodded and said" tsunade-sama, ero-otooji said that i have the skills to be a jounin" said naruto in voice that still had no emotions" huh very well" said tsunade as she reached her deck and pulled out a vest out of no where and tossed it to naruto"thanks" said naruto as he put the vest on " here you go tsunade" said naruto as he threw his necklace at here " why are you giving this to me i thought you wanted to be hokage?" asked a confused tsunade. Naruto started to chuckle and it turned into a laugh that had no emotion" i did until i heard the uchiha,haruno and inuzuka insult me the night before i left" said naruto as he spat out the names of his friends"what did they say?" said tsunade as she narrowed her eyes at them " they called me a reject,a loser,retard,a dobe,a monster" said naruto " YOU CALLED NARUTO ALL THOSES THINGS" yelled everybody in the room "ENOUGH" yelled naruto. Everybody in the room stopped and looked at him " you think i care i was called a monster. in case you forget i am a monster even if my burden is gone" said naruto " what the hell do you mean your burden is gone?" asked every adult in the room " three years ago akatsuki came after me and the captured me and extracted my burden and i died" said naruto as he scratched his head" what if you died how are you standing in front of us?" asked a confused ino" my mom was with me and ero-otooji on my training trip so when i was captured and was dead my mother used a forbidden medical jutsu to revive me and as a side effect of the jutsu she lost her life" said naruto as a tear ran down his cheek "THUMP" jiraiya fainted on the floor "ummm what happed to jiraiya-sama" asked tenten "ask him after i wake him up" said tsunade as her eye twiched " i'll handel this tsunade" said naruto with an evil grin as he walked up to jiraiya and said" One Thousand Years of Death-Naruto Style" as he raised his foot up high and smashed it down on jiraiya's crotch "AHHHHHHH" screamed jiraiya girly "jiraiya-sama why did you faint when you saw naruto cry?" asked curious shizune."Thats the first time i've seen naruto show any kind of emotion in three years" said jiraiya
R&R
i couldn't think of anything else to write