Hey all! My first fic, will be kinda busy with school, homework, and all
that other fun stuff.anyways please no flames, I don't care if you hate
it.so anyways, if you want to read it, go right ahead ;)
Sammy-Jo
The room was spinning. Everything was a blur to all who saw it, Muggles and Wizards alike. Watching the room whir in colors of brown, yellow, green, red, was enough to make someone want to throw up. Suddenly, there was a flash of purple light, like a streak of lightning. Then a bright green light, and the most dreadful feeling came over those who saw it. There was boy in the dark chasm, a boy about fifteen years of age with black unruly hair and bright green eyes, and he seemed to be reaching for something. He just couldn't quite grasp it. It was there, and he knew it was there, but it was just beyond reach. Frustrated, the boy tried to cry out, but no sound escaped from his cardboard-dry tongue.
Harry woke up, his enervated lungs gasping for breath. He couldn't seem to take in enough air. Sweat poured down his back like rivers of warm liquid flowing from an unknown source. Harry grasped the nightstand, still unable to think straight. He put on his glasses and tried to make out the figures on the clock. 6:07 A.M. He sighed and put on his slippers. After all, it was Dudley Dursley's birthday, and if everything wasn't perfect.well, let's just say the results wouldn't be pretty.
"All I get is a lousy DVD player, big screen TV, every new version of Nintendo video games, and a few measly toys! Whatever happened to what I really wanted, a Porsche?" Dudley was heard shouting as Harry quickly came down the stairs. "And just where have you been, Harry?!?" shouted Uncle Vernon. "You are 9 minutes late! I told you to be here on time, and that's what I expect! If you ruin our Dudley's birthday, mark my words, you will be spending your life in that room of yours, hear?" "Yes, Uncle Vernon." "Good. Now make us all some breakfast. You can go without yours for being late." Harry sighed. "Yes, Uncle Vernon."
Suddenly, the room started spinning again, just like in Harry's dream. Harry shook his head, sure that he was going crazy. Then a voice came from out of nowhere, a voice so sly and cunning it was almost like a snake's. "Beware, Harry; you, your Muggles, and all your friends, along with a few enemies, will all be sent to The Maze of No Return! Hahahaha!"
Ok, ok, I know I'm not very good at this yet, but I promise it gets a lot better with more action and maybe even some romance ;) Please no flames, only encouragement and constructive criticism. Really, I would like to know how to make my writing better! Thanx all!
Sammy-Jo
The room was spinning. Everything was a blur to all who saw it, Muggles and Wizards alike. Watching the room whir in colors of brown, yellow, green, red, was enough to make someone want to throw up. Suddenly, there was a flash of purple light, like a streak of lightning. Then a bright green light, and the most dreadful feeling came over those who saw it. There was boy in the dark chasm, a boy about fifteen years of age with black unruly hair and bright green eyes, and he seemed to be reaching for something. He just couldn't quite grasp it. It was there, and he knew it was there, but it was just beyond reach. Frustrated, the boy tried to cry out, but no sound escaped from his cardboard-dry tongue.
Harry woke up, his enervated lungs gasping for breath. He couldn't seem to take in enough air. Sweat poured down his back like rivers of warm liquid flowing from an unknown source. Harry grasped the nightstand, still unable to think straight. He put on his glasses and tried to make out the figures on the clock. 6:07 A.M. He sighed and put on his slippers. After all, it was Dudley Dursley's birthday, and if everything wasn't perfect.well, let's just say the results wouldn't be pretty.
"All I get is a lousy DVD player, big screen TV, every new version of Nintendo video games, and a few measly toys! Whatever happened to what I really wanted, a Porsche?" Dudley was heard shouting as Harry quickly came down the stairs. "And just where have you been, Harry?!?" shouted Uncle Vernon. "You are 9 minutes late! I told you to be here on time, and that's what I expect! If you ruin our Dudley's birthday, mark my words, you will be spending your life in that room of yours, hear?" "Yes, Uncle Vernon." "Good. Now make us all some breakfast. You can go without yours for being late." Harry sighed. "Yes, Uncle Vernon."
Suddenly, the room started spinning again, just like in Harry's dream. Harry shook his head, sure that he was going crazy. Then a voice came from out of nowhere, a voice so sly and cunning it was almost like a snake's. "Beware, Harry; you, your Muggles, and all your friends, along with a few enemies, will all be sent to The Maze of No Return! Hahahaha!"
Ok, ok, I know I'm not very good at this yet, but I promise it gets a lot better with more action and maybe even some romance ;) Please no flames, only encouragement and constructive criticism. Really, I would like to know how to make my writing better! Thanx all!
Sammy-Jo