Hey guys lightnagle16 here I just want to say im back and things are about to get crazy and fun in this rewrite of The True King of The Ghost Zone I hope you are ready and also Dan is the main in this so enjoy.-lightangel16
Chapter 1: Freedom and Remorse
~Clockwork's lair in the Ghost Zone~
A loud noise echoes though the empty tower followed by another and another until an explosion shakes the building a blue light fills the room followed by a wicked laughter that would send chills down your spine.
The light fades to revile a man with light blue skin and crimson red eyes and flaming white hair wearing a black and white hazmat suit with a D on his chest and with a long white cape on his back.
The man smiled reviling the fangs at the ends of his mouth.
"I'm free at last" he said as he looked around the empty tower.
"I wonder when the old geezer is." The man thought to himself.
The man began to walk around the tower looking for the exit until he came around a time window.
The man walked up and looked down at the flickering vortex as he gazed in he could barely see a figure sitting on a throne as soldiers attacked ghosts and people alike as they ran screaming.
The man could clearly tell that it was not himself he saw on the throne causing mayhem which enraged him as he hit the wall with his fist creating a hole in the wall about the size of a minivan.
Suddenly the vortex flickered and disappeared making the room silent once more.
The man turned to look out the hole and saw something that made the man's his jaw drop.
~Outside in the Ghost Zone~
The man floated out the hole he made and looked around to see the Ghost Zone in ruins doors to ghosts lairs were shattered to pieces , ghost islands had been reduced to rubble, and the Zone it's self was filled with holes flicking in and out creating small black holes that were sucking in everything.
The man saw a glowing green vortex about a mile away he rushed towards it as he saw a small vortex begin to block his only exit.
The man began to pick up speed as the vortex was about completely blocked he slipped through the hole as the vortex was covered by the black hole.
~unknown location~
The man landed in a lab and hit the floor with a loud thud.
The rubbed his head as he looked around.
He suddenly knew where he was as he looked around.
"I'm in Fenton Works." he said under his breath.
He suddenly heard the sound of something falling upstairs.
He phased though the ceiling into what would be the kitchen of the house.
The entire second floor was gone and the house had been wreaked as if something had ripped through the place.
The man turned back to tangible and began to walk through the dust and kicked piece of rubble out of his way as he walked through the house.
He suddenly heard a whimpering coming from behind the destroyed red couch in the corner.
He walked up and looked over the couch to see a girl around the age of 16 with he knees pulled to her chest tightly as she rocked back in forth.
She had long black hair and was wearing a torn black tank top reviling a black bra and a green and black skirt what had rips at the bottom of the skirt and one black combat boot.
The man listened to the girl mumble as she rocked.
"No more ,no more." She said.
"Are you ok?" The man asked.
The girl jump as she looked up.
"Please don't hurt me." She yelled as she looked up at the man.
The man looked at her violet eyes and knew who she was.
"Sam is that you?" He asked.
She looked up in horror.
"Dan." She said before she fainted.
End of chapter 1
So let me know what you think guys also I plan on reviling that happened as the story progresses also this is a harem story. I hope you like the rewrite.-lightangel16