Red dawn rewrite based on the 2012 version
Warning! Sex, yaoi and death swearing.
Jed and oc
I was standing next to Tom Eckert on the side lines of the football field I was rooting for matt, his youngest boy. I was dating his oldest boy, Jed; I was in love with Jed. My name is Raven, Jed's girlfriend. We were high school sweethearts, when he left six years ago I promised him I would always be his and I have though the men in this town said he wasn't coming back I should move on, yet I wanted to hear it from his lips and only his.
"GO MATTY!" I cheered he was so close to taking his teams to the finals. I saw matt get tackled at the 14 yard line. "Stop the clock matt." I said.
"How's he doing?" a voice asked
"Fine." Erik said the grass crunched next to me as I looked at the game.
"Get out of bounds. Hey, Raven, I missed you." The voce said I turned around to see Jed.
"Hi, Jed. Long time no see." I said I looked at him I missed him his deep blue eyes that shone at me.
"'Hi, Jed' is all I get after six years." He said. He smiled and put his arm around my shoulder. I hugged him tightly and cried into his chest. He pulled me tighter and wiped my tears away and kissed my forehead.
"I missed you, Jed. I'm glad your home." I said he hugged me and we walked to his truck and he pulled me close and kissed me. I kissed back. It was soft at first then it got harder and hotter. He slide his tounge into my mouth I didn't resist I opened my mouth and he wrapped his arms around my waist. I wrapped my arms around his neck he laid me on the seat and he kissed my neck and I moaned. I wrapped my legs around his waist. He moaned and kissed me again as he slid up my shirt. I raced up his shirt and felt his hot bod and felt like I hadn't touched him in six years it's been hard. He had more muscle more defined any way; I couldn't imagine his body after that long. He touched mine as slowly as I touched his.
"Raven I missed you so much." He said I pulled him close.
"I missed you, too, Jed. I love you." I said he kissed my lips again and sat up. He pulled me close to his side.
"I love you, too raven. We should go somewhere more private" he said and drove us to the bar. He let me slide out the driver's side I fixed my skirt and shirt and reapplied my red lipstick and we walked in hand in hand. Walter Creed, a man that's been trying to get with me since Jed left, saw me and rushed right over to me.
"Raven, hey little girl." He looked at me I hugged Jed's arm and he smiled at me as the guy flirting with me saw Jed, "Jed you're back. Raven you're still able to break up with him and come to something better." His green eyes gleaming he smiled sly.
"Sorry boys no flirting with this girl." My brother john said. He had reddish blond hair unlike my black hair and we both had blue eyes. "Hey sis and Jed welcome home I was starting to get worried."
"sorry, John. I was working as a marine. "he said, "Two beers please." I sat on the stool next to him and he sat an arm over my shoulder I kissed his check.
"How long are you here for Jed?" I asked him, he looked at me
"A few weeks." He said
"Oh" I said saddened by that I wanted him to stay longer to spend more time with me.
"Hey we get to spend time together before I leave this time." He said and kissed my neck. I laughed and smiled as he pulled away with a smirk. He drank his beer I sipped mine I wasn't a big drinker and cuddled close as the lights went out. The high schoolers cheered. I sighed in annoyance. John looked at this then his watch.
"Great. I am going to head home sis, you can stay with Jed if you want." He said I smiled as he walked out. I saw matt and his girlfriend Erica. I looked at Jed he grabbed my hand and we paid for our drinks and got into his truck and stopped at the market for beer and condoms. I smiled shyly. He whispered into my ear and hugged my waist.
"come on it's not like we haven't done it before" he said
"I know Jed, but I haven't had sex in 6 years." I said he looked at me
"You waited for me. That long and no one else?" he asked
"yea, I waited for you. It wouldn't feel right if it wasn't with you." I said and smiled he pulled me close and kissed me. I wrapped my arms around his neck he draped his arm over my waist and stopped as we were getting stares.
"Umm Jed lets head back to your place and finish there." I said as we walked out and sat in his truck. He pulled me close as we drove to his house and we sat out front as matt came home and he took a drink of beer I laid on his shoulder and Tom came out to leave.
"heading to work dad?" Jed asked as pulled me next to him
"I got black out duty stop the nuts. Couldn't find the sheets for the pull out. Raven you can sleep on the couch Jed you get the floor." H said as matt pulled up in Erica's blue ford. I snuggle close to Jed he puts his arm over my shoulder.
"The floors fine." He kissed my head as matt came up the walk.
"Hi matt, how was the rest of the game? Sorry I missed it." I said he smiled at me and glared at Jed
"We lost." He walked in like he was unhappy to see his brother.
"Did I miss something, babe." I said as he walked in I grabbed the six pack Jed was sitting on the couch I sat next to him and cuddled close
"Hey, Matt, what are you doing?" he asked like he was his dad.
"Getting a drink." He said holding up a milk jug.
"Well close the door it's a black out,"" he said as matt did and went upstairs.
"What was that about, Jed?'' I asked
"I don't know baby. I think he might resent me." He said I hugged his neck and let him lay on my chest. He smiled and cuddled close to me.
"Jed, he can't resent you, you're his big brother." I said and soothed out his hair even it being a crew cut. He sighed happily. He pulled me close and kissed me and pulled me on his hips I wrapped my arms around his neck and he wrapped his around my waist. He laid me down on the floor on the make shift bed and kissed me again asked for entrance into my mouth. I accepted his muscle in my mouth I pulled off his shirt and he slid his hands up mine. He pulled mine off and leaned me forward onto his shoulders and he got the claps undone and slides it off.
"You've gotten bigger baby." He said as he caressed my breasts and kissed the space in between them and his facial hair tickling me slightly. He got on his knees and smiled evil yet charming he slide in between my legs and kissed me. I kissed back as he caressed my back and hips. I felt him grow harder each second of the kiss. He slide his tongue into my mouth and danced with mine. He moaned and we were in prefect sync with each other. I pulled away as he looked at my breast in high school I was a cup. Now I'm an in late b to early c range. He looked at me and smiled and pulled me close and kissed my nipple.
"It's been six years, of Course they look and got bigger." I said as he kissed one and I moaned as he grinned into my hips. I arched my back at his clothed arousal. He slide me back on it he laid me down on the floor and looked at my skirt
"Time for that to come off." He said in his sexy voice and I let him take it to show my black and red thong he looked at me and sat me on the couch and pulled off my underwear I arched up. He smiled and kissed me I kissed back as he moved down my slim body to my entrance and licked it and held my legs around his broad shoulders I moaned as he slide his tongue in and swirled it around in me and used his fingers to play with my clit, I bucked my hips as best as I could but this marine was holding them back with one hand around my hips.
"Jed oh god." I moaned out as he went deeper and played with my clit I arched to have him deeper in me as he went deeper. I remember when we did it six years ago he got better at it and still he was mine and all mine.
"Jed…I'm Cuming." I said and moaned in bliss. He drank the juices form inside of me. He pulled away and smiled that sexy smile of his.
"If my skirt came off so are those pants." I said I got up and slammed him onto the couch and undid his belt he sat up and let me slide them off to have him only in his boxers. I played with his clothed arousal and he moaned and he bucked his hips into my hand. I laughed and pulled down his black boxers to reveal his thick and long dick. I remember how much fun we had dry humping each other and seeing it for the first time.
"Raven you ok?" he asked I looked at him
"Yeah just remembering the good old days." I said and he smiled as I licked the head of his leaking erection and tasted his pre-cum. He moaned and I slide my lips over the tip of it he bucked into my mouth forcing me to take more of him. He moaned and I bobbed up and down on his dick. He slides his hand down to my head and places it there as I slide my hand around his balls and rubbed them gently. He let his head fall back as I deep throated him as he moaned I switched between teeth and tongue on his shaft he held my head still I got my answer he came god he tasted so good. After six years I had him shivering and cumming for me again. He smiled at me and sat me on his lap.
"You wanna do it on the floor or on the couch?" I asked he thought about it and picked me up and laid me on the floor
"Less noise" he said as he pulled out a condom and slides it on his member which is hard again. "You ready, raven 6 years is a long time to go without sex." he said and lined them up and looked at me
"It's ok, Jed, you can enter whenever you're ready." I said and pulled him close he entered me slowly moving his shoulder to my mouth. I bite down and he moved slowly at first to get me used to his dick in again.
"Jed, please move" I pleaded and wrapped my legs around his waist. He trusted into me and started out slow and I grinned into his hips he laid on me more and pounded in and out of me with such speed he sat up and I moaned and he moaned louder I kissed him to quiet the moans this way matt wouldn't hear us. he went faster with each passing second and dove deeper till he hit my sweet spot inside of me. He smiled as he hit that spot over and over again I moaned and arched into his body he moaned and grunted as the pounding got faster.
"Raven, I'm so close" He moaned into my ear. I felt the knot in my stomach get tighter.
"Ahhh, Jed me too. "I said and arched we kissed to soften the screams of pleasure he came right as I did. He pulled out of me and we sat next to each red and panting and sweaty. He smiled and wrapped me up in his arms.
"Ahh, Raven come here." He said and pulled the blanket off the couch. He pulled me next to him sitting against the couch. I leaned against him. I laid my hand on his chest I purred as I nuzzled into his chest. He laughed his deep throat laugh.
"You have gotten better." I said he pulled me close.
"Well the first we did it was the night before I left." He said I remembered the day after the day he left was the hardest day of my life.
Flashback
I was a balling wreck he hugged me good bye and kissed my head then my lips
"Don't worry Raven. I'll come home." He said to me I hugged him as I sobbed into his shoulder
"I love you *sobs breath* Jed." I said as he pulled away his dad grabbed me and hugged me. He walked to the terminal and yelled to me
"RAVEN, I LOVE YOU!" he yelled to me I smiled and blew a kiss to him he got it and grabbed it and he walked on to the plane. I smiled as his dad took me home
"Raven, Jed asked me to give this to you." Tom said and gave me a gift I sat on the porch swing. I opened it to reveal a picture of us on our last prom night and on our first date and kiss. I smiled as tears came harder. The one at the prom was us in their living room I was putting his boutonnière. He was smiling at the dress I was in; it was black with red beading and white crystals. My black hair was up in with ringlet curls falling down . He smiled at me more as the memory came rushing back. I smiled and said to Tom
"Thank you, Mr. Eckert."
"Raven, he loves you deeply. This is to help you remember that." He said and hugged me as he left I kissed Jed's picture. How know it would be six years till I saw him again.
Flashback end.
"Baby, don't cry. I'm sorry I left." He said I hadn't realized I was crying.
"Oh, it isn't you baby. I was remembering the day you left. " I said and wiped tears away as he did.
"The day I left was hell for me and you I remember the image I had of you crying while I cried in the plane I saw you leave with my dad. Did he give my gift I gave you?" He asked and hugged me
"Yea I got it thank you for it. I kissed you picture every morning." I said he looked at me weird, "what I didn't have your lips like I do now." I said he smiled and leaned close to me. He kissed me.
"We should probably get dresses and get some sleep." He said to me
"Yeah, could you hand me my bra and shirt." I asked as he did I put them on much to his disapproval.
"I was enjoying the view of your body next to me naked of course." He said and looked for his shirt and put it on with pants and boxers as well.
"As I was yours." I crawled on the couch. He picked me up in his arms and laid me on the floor me on his chest. He pulled me close and fall asleep. I cuddled in his chest and fall asleep on his chest.
End chapter one