Max Saves Alagaesia

Authors note: This is my first story so I am sorry is advanced if this story sucks and just because I'm paranoid I'm going to rate this story as teen. Any reviews are welcome and flames are to. Any questions p.m me please sorry if it takes me a while to get back I've never used it before.

Now that my first authors note is finished, I'm going to get real with you guys I'm not the best writer and I'll probably forget about the story because I have a terrible memory. Since it's summer I'll probably update more often but school starts in like a month so I'll make sure I tell you guys my update schedule…even with a schedule I probably will miss a couple days. Also sorry about grammar and spelling mistakes.

DISCLAIMER: I don't own Maximum Ride or the Inheritance Cycle or any of the characters the plot is mine though.

SUMMARY: Max gets kicked out of the flock and is sent to Alagaesia by a mysterious force…and is only left with four things…her instincts, a feeling that she should help the Varden (whatever that is)…to save Eragon, and a smooth rock thing that is colored a deep dark purple.

Now that my ramblings done on to the storyJ

Max POV

I had just woken up when I heard the screams of the flock being myself I assumed the worse so I quickly jumped up and ran into the living room. Now I know what you guys are probably thinking Max and the flock are actually living in a house it's a miracle, but I have my reasons. Usually when we stay in one place for to long The School usually tracks us down and eraser attack which by the way is happening right now.

When I reach the living room its chaos so I jump into battle quickly using some martial arts techniques I've learned. After a multitude of round house kicks and a bunch of punches all the Erasers leave and that's when the Flock all turn to look at me. "Where were you" Gazzy shouted, while Fang started swearing profusely at me and calling me a traitor. "Me Maximum Ride a traitor" I scream at them " all I've done is look after you jerks and you have the guts to call me a traitor after all I've done! "Fine if you all believe that I will just go then" I say when I finally calmed down. After storming into my room to get my things I walk to the kitchen and ask them if this is what they really want. "YES" they all scream at me, so with tears in my eyes I grab my wallet make sure I have my credit card and I walk to the back porch and I take off into the evening air

Eragon's POV

Ugh I grunt as I finally got to sit down after my latest torture treatment, I tried to contact Sapphira again but it didn't work again. I've been stuck in Gilead for the past couple months being tortured by the shade Durza. I don't really remember what had happened I was riding Snowfire when the Urgals attacked. Then I awoke here in this dank prison.

I am just glad that Sapphira has not been caught yet my heart would shatter if that happened. She does not deserve to be tortured I mean she's only 5 months old. The only thing I can do for now is stay here and hope that someone will come and save me from this horrible place.

Max POV

3 hours later

I know what I should do I thought to myself as I was flying I should just find a cliff and jump off and not unfurl my beautiful wings, just drop like a stone and end my miserable existence. So as I kept on flying I kept an eye out for a decent sized cliff to jump off of when I find it. A huge ravine with at least one thousand foot drop to the bottom. Perfect for my needs. As I ascend to the top of this particular ravine I bump into something that is rock hard it kinda felt scaly as well and I bumped into it so hard it knocked me unconscious. The last thing I heard was this is the one then I blacked out.

Sorry if you didn't like this chapter please leave a review and tell me some things long or short, not enough details. Also was I using those line break thingys right or not please pm me and tell me.

Love you guys lots Abby7441!