Chapter 1 : Pit stop

A/N: This is my first Maximum Ride fan fiction.

Disclaimer: I don't own MR. Sad no?


Max P.O.V.

"We can rest here for the night." I told the flock. Before angling my wings toward the small motel on the ground below us. I heard Nudge let out a sigh of relief. I wasn't pushing them THAT hard. Bunch of pansies. Okay, maybe a little. We were all tired. But we needed to reach Florida by tomorrow. And if we wake up at 6am (Which gives us about 8 hours of sleep) we'll reach there before lunch! Am I brilliant or what? Yeah, I'd go with 'what' too.

"Ding ding ding." Went the bells on the door. I led the kids (Which consists of Angel, Gazzy, Nudge and Iggy. Iggy, cause he acts like a kid. NOT because he's blind.) in, Fang by my side, emoing all the way to emo de capoemo. What? Moving on.

" Hi, how may I help you?" the counter person (I don't know what you call them. I never went to school remember? Well, educational school.) asked all too sweetly. She was practically drooling on Fang! She leaned forward behind the counter and TOUCHED HIS ARM!! SHE (insert-swear-word-here) TOUCHED HIS ARM AND GIGGLED! THAT'S NOT THE WORST PART! FANG SMILES BACK! AND (insert-swear-word-here) WINKS! She isn't even a red head! Her hair is blue! BLUE! Obviously dyed. I clenched my fist tightly, forgetting I was holding Angel's hand. I heard her whimper and looked down to see her tiny hand being crushed by my tight grip.

'Sorry darling!' I thought to her.

' It's okay. You were- no ARE upset.'

" I'd like four bedrooms please." I said through clenched teeth. The girl hardly payed any attention to me. Spending all her time flirting with - spit - Fang. She just took the four keys and threw it at me.

" Max? Why are we getting four rooms? Don't we usually get three?" Gazzy asked.

" I need some privacy." I patted his messy hair down, " To think about leader stuff."

" Oh. Okay! So I still get to share with Iggy! Phew." Gazzy turned and whispered something to Iggy. I heard the words 'make' and 'bombs' and 'when Max sleep'. I decided to close one eye. I couldn't really be bothered right now.

" Fang!" I threw the room key at his head. Which he caught. Easily. Damn, " See you tomorrow." I looked between blue head and Fang. Having their stupid private talk with each other. Why do I even care?

Because you lo-

'VOICE! DON'T YOU DARE SAY IT'S BECAUSE I LOVE HIM!'

A/N: Okay, tell me if it's good. I may not continue. So, RnR.